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KuroTheFox


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I held out my hooves towards him and we embraced each other. We pressed our bodies together. The foal in me, happy as ever, kicked and kicked. Big Mac and I kissed each other as we cuddled. We didn't need to speak a word to each other. Finally, we were all together. Finally, we were happy. Finally, we were a family.

:rainbowkiss::heart::scootangel::yay:!!!

Well, that was quite the cute and hot cunniling that Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy had:ajsmug:. That was also a cute, and sexy mating scene with Fluttershy and Big Mac:heart:! Though I found it sweet he was so concerned for the safety of their foal:rainbowkiss:.

Speaking of which, as much as I find it considerate that Big Mac was worried about hurting the baby while mating with Fluttershy, he didn't really have to worry, at least if the pregnancy is healthy (and by the looks of it it is:ajsmug:). Their foal is protected by the amniotic sac and the strong muscles in Fluttershy's womb, or uterus:twilightsmile:. Plus, and the thick mucus plug that seals Fluttershy's cervix helps to guard the foal against any type of infection:raritywink:.

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I think it's safe to say Big Mac would be clueless on that kind of stuff lol. Glad you enjoyed the story though c:

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Yeah, he would:rainbowlaugh:! I sure did, and I can't wait to see more:raritywink:.

The story is exactly as I ordered and I love it :)

Just because of the tags i can't wait for chapter two

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Luckily, you didn't have to wait long :raritywink:

and again very good work man :)

Well, wasn't expecting AB to do it with her brother, much less a fox:rainbowderp:. Still, I found that pretty adorable:rainbowkiss::heart:!

As for AJ...wow she did it with Winona's Dad:pinkiegasp:?! Was not expecting that either:rainbowderp::rainbowlaugh:!!!

This chapter was great! Maybe now Applejack, Big Mac, and Fluttershy will get involved with Apple Bloom.

"Well...um...oh buck it, I wanna have a foal."

...go on:duck:.

"Here's the thing though...I want Big Mac to be the father."

Why am I not surprised:coolphoto:.

We suddenly heard a thud and quickly turned to see Big Mac had face planted into the room. He lifted his head up off the ground and said,

Speak of the devil:rainbowdetermined2:!

"Uh...I can explain."

Yeah, sure you can:rainbowlaugh:!

That was an enjoyable chapter...I’m pretty surprised that Fluttershy was alright with Big Mac going at it with Applejack:applejackunsure:. The again, I’ve seen strange things like this in other fics, so I guess it shouldn’t be a surprise to me anymore:coolphoto:.

Also, I think it’s really touching that Fluttershy and Big Mac decoded to name their foal. Bright Mac:applecry:. Just one thing...is he an Pegasus or an Earth Pony?

this was really good work, i am glad i did this comission :)

:rainbowlaugh: That ending was great!

Now I want to see Apple Bloom confess she had sex with Big Mac, followed by a foursome between her, Big Mac, Fluttershy, and Applejack. I imagine Applejack and Fluttershy would love to see Big Mac giving Apple Bloom a good humping.

9284137 How do you feel about Fluttershy, Apple Bloom, Applejack, and Big Mac having a foursome after Apple Bloom confesses that she had sex with Big Mac and Applejack and Fluttershy finding the idea hot and wanting to see Big Mac giving Apple Bloom a good pounding? Personally. I'd love it, but that's entirely up to you.

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In the end it all comes down to Kuro ^^ I just gave him money and asked for a certain story, he made the hard work here.

9284360 Ah, I gotcha. Well, if nothing else, I could always do the story myself. :twilightsmile:

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ha! thats the spirit ^^

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I like to think he's an Earth pony.

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Go for it. Gonna focus on some personal projects for a while.

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I see...I was pretty sure he was gonna turn you to be a Pegasus. You know, since Applejack did said that the baby was a spitting image of Big Mac, so I thought he’d be a Pegasus, since his moms is one:twilightsheepish:.

9285237 Well, it's disappointing that there"s not going to be a foursome, but okay. So I suppose that it'll be a while before this story is updated again, huh?

Enjoyable read, thumbs up.

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