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Phantom Shadow


The One and Only!

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My thoughts on this fic

*Me*: Gee, that went down so fast.

*Brain*: As fast as Rainbow Dash and Big Mac went down on Fluttershy?

*Me*: Shut the fuck up, brain! I will not have you fill me with dirty thoughts and jeopardize my position in heaven!

In all seriousness, this was exceptionally good! Unexpected, but good nonetheless. Especially that last part. I wonder how that will play out?

This was nice. Innocent but still filled with love and very sexy.

This was nice. Innocent but still filled with love and very sexy.

I half expected the CMC to get a ladder to reach up to the window.... And well... You know the rest.... With the video recorder... And all...

You know, when I began reading this story, I had no idea on how it would develop. Still, it's great to see that Big Mac and Fluttershy have had their first time. Perhaps, someday in the near future, they can try having a baby... It'll be so cute! :yay::heart::eeyup:

Oh, Applejack, you eavesdropper. :rainbowlaugh:

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Thanks for the support, mates! This being my first all-out clop-fic, it makes me happy to know it's enjoyed. :twilightsmile:
5404295
That would have been funny. Honestly, the original ending was that AJ walked in on them, but that may have been too much...
5404588
Whoa, whoa, whoa!! Let them get through High School first, then they can think about having kids!! :derpytongue2:

5404604 Very well, dude. If anything, Dashie will be the first of the Mane Seven to be pregnant when she gets together with Soarin'. :raritywink:

5405534
If you say so...after High School, that is; studies come first!

5405579 Yeah, I guess so. But then, Dashie has always been known to be reckless.

5409079
True, but she ain't earnin' that sports scholarship if she's knocked up...

It was...I can be nit-picky all I want but I can't bitch 'bout it, it just is what it is

5512315
You can nit-pick/bitch all you want! It is my first all-out clop-fic, so you can say anything and everything; I welcome it, mate!! :twilightsmile:

5512445 No, I mean, all my problems with are all...How can I explain it?
Uhhh, my brain wants to ridicule it for being something that it's not and you can blame anything for being something that it's not
It was a good read, hands down, ya can't say it wasn't

5513694
Oh, okay. Thanks anyway!

oh...my god...thats one hot fanfic clop alright

5668057
Thanks, mate. I appreciate it. :twilightsmile:

Applejack could only raise an eyebrow at the two of them as she said, "If ya say so. Well, ah guess ah'll see ya later then."

:applejackconfused: My integrity senses are tingling!

Waving her hat at her face like a fan, Applejack said the only words she could muster, the best words she could think of that described everything she had heard:
"Well, ah’ll be damned!"

:ajsmug: Thought so

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Thank you, mate. Glad you enjoyed it. It means a lot to me, especially since I'm not much of a clopfic person either.

I guess Applejack can't resist a good eavesdropping session. :ajsmug:

Anyways, nicely well done. Have a like and fave. :yay:

6677760
Thanks, mate! I appreciate it!

Aww this was awesome! Great job! Well done! The romance was amazing, and that little bit at the end, priceless! Wonderful job! :rainbowkiss:

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Thanks, mate. Glad you enjoyed it! :twilightsmile:

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