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Knight Light


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Sex tag is just to be safe, there will be no sex, just some mentions of it and a possible scene where there may be an attempt at seduction that does not get anywhere.

When Sunset finds another student from from school beaten and hiding in an alley, she does the only thing she can, she takes the girl home with her. Can one wounded soul heal another and save Sunset from the hate deep inside?

One girl a bully with connections to the underworld with a short temper.

Another girl afraid and shy to the point that it can be difficult to get through the day.

Both of them hurt by families, their souls near shattered. Will time together soften one and strengthen another, or will it cause everything to explode when truths are learned?


This is an AU starting before the first EG movie, though it will continue into it with changes. The world will work differently than our world and possibly a little different than the EG world being some relaxations on certain things.

This isn't tied to my other stories in anyway and is a birthday present to a friend of mine, Happy Birthday K! :pinkiehappy:

Arc 2 has split off into 2 different timelines so has 2 different stories.

The Sun and the Shy: Shadows Rising is the story centering around Sunset and Fluttershy's transfer to Crystal Prep Academy.

The Sun and the Shy: Canterlot Blues is the story of Fluttershy and Sunset staying at CHS and goes through the first movie.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 99 )

I like it so far. It will be quite interesting to read, but I wish it was a Sunset X Fluttershy story. Still I hope to see more soon.

Interesting beginning, now I'm curious how it will proceed :yay:

Wait, how did Sunset Shimmer become rich?

cute story thoe shouldn't sunset have a motorbike instead of a car

also im sure fluttershy will be shocked when she learns sunset is a vegetarian

And I take it that Zephyr Breeze sexually assaults Fluttershy because he feels that he can do so?

8097644 Thanks, more will be coming soon since this is actually the story I have the least amount of work I have to deal with at the moment.

8097953 Hopefully it will proceed in a way you enjoy.

8098062 It's in the first paragraph, though I will give more details later. Basically Sunset brought a bunch of jewels with her and sales them for a lot when she needs more money.

8098476 She has several babies which does include a motorcycle. :pinkiehappy:

8098929 No plans for that really, abuse would just be one reason Fluttershy acts the way she does and it gets Sunset to be sympathetic with her and gives her a place to crash.

8099559 ah ok that makes sense thoe im sure sunset will show her a motorbike later and wont at all enjoy fluttershy clinging to her tight

8099566 Fluttershy will see the bike soon, though there may be a few more chapters before she actually rides it.

You should add an AU tag because this takes place waay before the events of the EG saga. I was hoping for this one to be a Sunshy(ne), but I was sorely disappointed. Out of Sunset's ships with everyone, my favorite ships are Sunlight and Sunshy. On the other hand, Sunsarity and Sunpie sound hilarious. I had a very random thought of a EG/Yandere Simulator crossover with Sunset starring as Senpai and having watched the Japanese dub of MLP some time ago, I can imagine Fluttershy being a yandere and it scares me.

8100509 Yandere Fluttershy would be very scary lol. I fixed the tag, thanks, I could have sworn I added it to begin with since this is a huge AU to canon. I sent a message about the rest though. :pinkiehappy:

good chapter thoe i dont like that they are both eatign meat i really dont think either should eat meat dont fit the characters but oh well still good chapter

I hope Sunset realizes Prinicpal Celestia and Princess Celestia are very different from each other and she misdirecting her anger and ahte.

So far, so could, interesting EQG AU to see. I did however see one problem:

“Plus, I really don’t want the whole school to

I think there's something missing there, since that isn't a mistake on my part as far as cutting it off.

This is the first time I've seen Sunset as a lesbian. Most of the ones prior to this one I've read had her bi, because of the skewed gender ratio in Equestria, even considering seasons 5-7.

8100596 Thanks.

8102515 She probably will at the least when hit by the power of the elements at the least.

8103110 Thanks, I fixed that, for some reason I either didn't finish typing that or something happened on the save.

8103286 Her being lesbian is pretty much K's wish as I was planning on going the bi route, though I have to admit D's help with the teasing and stuff is kind of a change from how I would usually view Sunset. Actually kind of nice to make her a bit different than in my head canon for a change.

8103389 Also helps that it would be in character for Sunset to do, regardless of orientation. At least not to Adagio's level.

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Always happy to help. Ifn you need a proofreader, I'm often available (currently chewing on... 16K I think from someone), and be happy to look. Ifn you prefer to go it alone, I recommend throwing it at Google Docs when you're done because it has a Grammerly like thing as well as the spell checker, so it can often find not so obvious mistakes for you.

Any how, looking forward to seeing where this leads.

8103396 I guess it might be a bit more in character for her maybe, it doesn't really show much of it in the cartoons and comics, but I guess I can see it. Though I kind of see Rarity and maybe Pinkie act more like that than Sunset in a way. Yet, I guess any of them could easily be that way if in that situation with someone they were deeply attracted to.

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For Sunset I agree, even after all this time I doubt that she'd change, but then again, horses can eat meat though from what I've read, it makes them more aggressive and they don't need it, so no one does it. For Flutters, I don't see why she wouldn't eat meat, she's human and always has been, and meat is common in human diets. That said, I could see Sunset ordering more on the veggie side and Flutters happily eating it.

8103406 Eh, I can also see Sunset on the omnivore route.

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I can see her on it too, but considering that she spent at least ¾ of her life as a pony eating a herbivore diet, I could easily see her struggling to change.

She couldn’t believe Fluttershy ate as much as she did and still looked like she did, though Sunset had a feeling all of the fat likely went to the girl’s chest which would make sense.

Part of me says that fluttershy is eating so much because she's been abused (and one of the more common things that happenes in that situation is withheld permissions particularly for mandane things) such as ... not eating , nor socializing, hell even sleeping. So I don't know if you meant for this or if it's just coincidence but you kinda made me feel even more sorry for fluttershy.

I am really enjoying this and have now read it like 4-5 times , keep it coming :-)

8103406 I can easily see Sunset going both ways, no pun intended, seeing how she's human now. Especially if she doesn't know about the veggie thing at first and gets sick from not getting the right vitamins and nutrients and whatever. If a doctor or someone explained that the body requires that stuff without going into options, then prove to her that animals that they use for food is not smart like the ones back in Equestria, I can see it being a little easier for her. Of course she would have problems with it at first, but she does have a leather jacket so there is that. I know she supposedly had it when she came over, but she had been there for years and surely had to do some growing which meant replacing clothes including her jacket. I guess she could have gotten fake leather, but somehow I'm not so sure that would have happened.

8103460 I can too, but I kind of see her going both ways depending on the story.

8103503 That's true, and I wouldn't doubt that she had troubles with it at first.

8103998 You are right, that is the reason behind her eating so much. Hope you like the new chapter too, just posted it.

If Sunset is Sombra's daughter, when did she born? And how old she really is?

Also, what Principal Celestia did? I didn't understand. I will read it again, but any explanation from you would help.:twilightsheepish:

8105342 Basically, it is the good Sombra from the comics that Celestia found a way to see again that is Sunset's father. In the story she's actually around Twilight's age. As for what the human Celestia, she was a teacher trying to get the principal position at CHS and her competition for it was the mob boss's wife since she just wanted it to have something to do. They threatened Celestia and Sombra, including threatening their daughter Sunset if Sunset didn't back down and let the mob boss's wife have the position. She was more full of herself then and refused to back down despite Sombra begging her to, though she also didn't want the other woman to get it because she didn't really care about it or the kids. To show that they meant business, they had the human Sunset killed when she was playing outside and Sombra never forgave Celestia for it because to him, if Celestia just let the job go and wait for another chance at another school, then their daughter would never have been targeted.

Ah. OK. Now I get it. Damn you Celestia! Your Equestria counterpart kept alive a magic eating centaur demon and this version of you got Sunset's counterpart killed over a stupid job!?

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In the first Equestria Girls movie, during the lunch scene, there was both regular and veggie burgers. Both Fluttershy and Twilight grabbed the veggie burgers, so I can see a reasonable argument for her being vegetarian. That being said, it doesn't really matter and can't really be used as proof that she is.

8105370 It's pretty much the only reason that Sunset hasn't gotten in trouble seeing how to Celestia Sunset is a ghost of her past and biggest mistake.

8105371 Good catch, I did not even know that. Still, it pretty much depends on the the story I guess and how AU it can get. Still, it is a good pointer that the two are veggies in canon. In a way I want to say canon is veggie in a way, but it is easy to see her going either way depending on the situation. Again, no pun intended. :facehoof:

8105382 Hum... Interesting. I just hope that if Sunset and Shy transfer to CPA that Sunset start letting go of her past. That revenge won't fix the pain... And that Twilight isn't to blame. And please Sunset, don't bully Sci-Twi too if you ever go to CPA, that girl has enough on her plate as it already is.

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i like for Fluttershy be reunited with her old friends thou won;t be easy.
Susnet would have...confess she was the oen who broke them apart ouch.
Worst yet her demon half could try to rid of Fluttershy to make sure her human half would never break free, if events happen as before.
If Sunset meets Twilight or Sci Twi.... Calle me perverted but love for them to draw her into a relationship with them.

I know Sunset's tough, but she's not this gruff. Dammit, it rhymed.

8105403 & 8105459 Good news to both of you, you both kind of get your wishes. Arc 1 is for K's birthday, but K asked if I wouldn't consider doing Arc 2 as a seperate story. Two seperate stories to be exact, alternate routes that this story could take.

8105403 I was planning an Anon a miss story that a huge chunk of the plot will be lifted and used here instead. It's one K was interested in, as well as D though D didn't like that it surrounded the whole Anon a miss thing. Let's just say that Cinch may not be too old o a dog yet so she can possibly learn new tricks.

8105459 Except for the threesome, the story was originally planned to go through the first movie with changes for Sunset's motives changing while also ended up with the same results as the movie more or less. It will still go that one in one of the 2 sequels, or alt routes, or whatever you want to call them.

8107600 Didn't mean for her to come off as uber gruff, more along the lines of her having difficulty doing the right thing and not giving in to desire despite her body really wanting to.

Fluttershy is going at full throttle.:rainbowdetermined2:
Sunset won't resist past Thursday at most. :yay:

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So Cinch won't be obessed with winnng as before?
Good, there this one shot featuring Cinch called Pressure create Diamonds, where while she does put pressure on her students it to make them the best of the best for thier sakes,not for her school rep.
I really loved that one.

So Sunset also had a girlfriend once but broke up wonder who it was?

8107748 For now anyways, next chapter may or may not give Fluttershy pause after learning some things.

8107828 I probably should clarify that a bit more. I mean that I was planning an Anon a miss story, but the part I would be using won't have anything to do with Anon a miss. It would be the core part of the story of Sunset going to Crystal Prep, only this time Fluttershy will be with Sunset and Sunset won't be as sad or angry with the girls since Anon a miss won't have happened and Fluttershy will be there to help Sunset with their new start at Crystal Prep keeping anything in check. I may have to check that story out. And as for Sunset's ex, I'm not sure if she will ever really have a big part in the story. She's older and thought Sunset was older, but broke up with Sunset when she learned how old Sunset was. She thought sunset was older because she was living alone and believed when she talked about school that she meant college.

8105370 id like to point out tirek seems to be a imortal like celestia luna and discord

edit: this of coarse only is about equestria tirek you are correct on human celestia thoe

good few chapters so i missed the last few till just now for some reason fimfiction was not letting me know of updates even theo im subscribed to you so i subscribed to this story as well to fix it

8108277 Imortality, the most annoying and common plot armor. I hate it.

So Shy is starting to show interest on Sunset? Since there isn't a Romance tag on your story I'll take a guess and say it won't work out, but they will remain friends.

But, I am hoping that it works out. We need more SunShy! :twilightsmile:

Yet I will be happy with whichever outcome is presented to us! :twilightsmile:

Swimsuit... well endowed wemen.... this can only mean one thing KEIJO!!!!!

8108280 Thanks, and sorry the site seemed to mess up. It seems to want to do that a lot. I think it is because of the CMC trying to get their cutie marks in web site maintenance.

8108317 I'm glad that you would be happy with either outcome, though if Fluttershy gets through the next chapter then things you may just get your wish. :twilightsmile:

8108339 Lol I had to look that up to see what it was. There actually won't be any KEIJO type antics, I'm actually surprised that there is actually a manga/anime based on that. Then again their are a lot of them based around card games which some are surprisingly okay. Who would of thought, right?

8108450
That's fine it was more a lighthearted joke, than an actual suggestion.
But if celestia or heaven forbid the celestia's where here then .... then it has to happen :P (not really but still)
I'm loving the story so please keep on with it :-) it's something I look forward to when I log into FF.

8108463 Lol I know, just saying I'm kinda shocked that there is an actual story centered around it. Hmm, I guess that would be one way to see which Celestia is better, at least until Luna shows them who always comes out on top in competition between the sisters lol. (Conveniently forgets Nightmare Moon incident =P ) Thanks, happy to provide entertainment to those who love the story and I will do my best to finish the first arc soon. I don't know if it is the story or being able to hang out with my friends K & D so much lately, but I feel much better than I have in months which is helping me get this story worked on even more quickly, so no worries there.

I hate to say it, but Fluttershy has a point if it they were that bad of friends to each other. That even with Fluttershy trying to fix things isingored?
Even Rainbow Dash is doing that..... Hope that thrown in Dash's face.
If I recall Apple Jack and Pinkie seem to get along in the orginal movie. but things sound worst then that.
Are not speaking to each other or they avoiding each other as well??

Nice chapter and congratulation to being featured! :yay:

Fluttershy just became Teasershy. Sunset was already doomed before everything even started. :ajsmug:

The coolest thing ever would be if Sunset would proof -with the help of the portal- to Fluttershy that Equestria and everything she read was in fact the hard cold truth (from Sunset's POV).

Like, when she still decides to steal Twilight's tiara out of revenge for being (at least in this story it seems) replaced with the Unicorn who had the "right Cutie Mark" on the Tree of Harmony, she takes Fluttershy with her or that Fluttershy is at least in on the everything and supports Sunset.

Ok, in reality the shy girl would maybe more try (or will) to talk Sunset out of it instead, but it would still be awesome no less if that would happen. :rainbowlaugh:

Sunset: I got your crown and you can't stop me!

Twilight: I will return to Equestria with my crown! With my friends at my side! (Rarity, Pinkie, Rainbow, Applejack all agree and are ready for battle)

Sunset: You may want to challenge me, but you will never be able to fight my secret weapon!

Fluttershy: I'm with Sunset. She saved me from my abusive dad, gave me a real home, is there for me and showed me that our 'friendship' was never so strong as I hoped it was. Besides that, I'm in love with Sunny. Sorry girls, but if you want to go against Sunset... then I will be your enemie, too! Uhm... if you don't mind that is...

Last Human 5 + Spike: Fluttershy?!

Sunset: I have already won *giggle*

I hope despite all that in one way or another they succeed in making peace the human 5, it would be a shot if in the end it was really Sunset to make her friends back, perhaps struck by the kindness of Fluttershy who is showing him in the latter Chapters. Maybe I'll be naive, but in my opinion if Fluttershy had the power to forgive Sunset despite having treated him badly in the past, I do not see why he can not find the power to forgive his friends. And after this rumor I tell you that this is a chapter that I generally like the story in general, it keeps going great!

good chapter thoe id like to point out carrots are poisonous to rabbits

also what did sunset do to drive a wedge between rainbow and shy as nothing in the movie said there was a wedge there just it was divided out

8109414 I always thought it was kind of weird personally that they ended their friendship over such flimsy excuses without at least saying more to each other and realizing something was off. Still, in this story it is a bit worse as Fluttershy at least tried to talk to the others only to be shot down. It might actually happen in both alternate arc 2's, who knows. They are avoiding each other and not talking as well as ignoring each other unless absolutely necessary.

8109427 Thanks and thanks again. :pinkiehappy: Lol there is no way Sunset will be able to resist Fluttershy for long. Fluttershy is just way too good at pushing her buttons. We're throwing ideas back and forth on the reveal for both alternate arc 2's, but in the CHS arc Fluttershy will have a hand in helping Sunset some, but she will have a difficult time all around. Though I have to say I love your idea and am currently laughing my ass off imagining their faces realizing Fluttershy is siding with Sunset.

8109459 The CHS version of arc 2 there will be peace as it will follow the movie for the most part. Though I will say that there will most likely be a big change from canon with the portal being open longer than what the movie claims and how it works. And there will be variations from the movie, but the important parts will be there. Stealing the crown: check. Competition to get the crown: check. Bringing CHS together: Check. Sunset Satan: Check. Daydream Shimmer: Check. Wait, WHAT?

8109611 That I really didn't know, I always thought they were treats or something for them. For the most part though, a lot of it is the same though there are extra things that pushed them a bit farther. We really haven't decided on just what yet, but we have a lot of time before it will specifically come up. It's been awhile since I watched the movie, all I remember about that is they were all fighting because of Sunset sending fake messages.

8109677 yea blame bugs bunny for thinking carrots are good for the bunnies

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