Fluttershy's dreams often take her to the Sweet Apple Acres orchard, making small talk with the bats and enjoying a few apples. But when one of her "dreams" takes a different turn, she and Big MacIntosh find their waking world turned upside-down.
That was short, but pretty good. And the concept isn't nearly as common as you'd think. Kind of odd that Mac didn't try to contact her or anything after she suddenly jumped his bones like that, but hey; they'll have lots of time to talk as they're raising the child she conceived via her psychotic magic-fueled sexual assault.
6560115Well, it DID happen in the middle of the night, and she was very out of character. He just assumed he had passed out in the field and had a weird dream. Makes sense, trying to get up for work in the middle of the night like that. :P
I'm honestly surprised to hear it's not so common. But hell, neither is art of this scenario. I dunno, I just figured between the popularity of FlutterMac shipping and of Flutterbat herself, it was an obvious direction to take.
6560115 Oh, and would you mind editing your post with spoiler tags? You kinda laid out everything but the number of thrusts on the page people see before actually getting to the story. xD
6560333 Yeah, it seems like it, but no. I think I've only seen three of them in total (including this) that use the concept (and in one it actually WAS a dream).
6561174 Huh. Go figure. So how does mine stack up? It's awful short, but I'd like to think excelling in English and literature plus two years of erotic roleplaying gave me some idea of how to write this kinda stuff ^^;;;
6561213 It stacks up fine. One started really good, but it was labeled incomplete. Another chapter was never added, so it just seems like an awkward one-shot without any real conclusion. And the dream one was funny, but loses points because its twist deliberately abandons any impact from its plot. Yours was short, sweet, and... well, predictably concluded. But between the story tags and the description, it was pretty obvious what was going to happen. The only time I've seen the Flutterbat aspect explored in a deeper, multi-part romance story were for other pairings, not FlutterMac.
6561249 That's kinda disappointing, really. Honestly, I've got ideas for a full story myself, wherein the Flutterbat encounter wouldn't be their first coupling, but I just don't have the time, nor enough story to tie together what scenes I do have in mind. EDIT: Nope, never mind, I think this might work out well, just playing off the ending of this chapter without a relationship prior to it. I'm already almost done with chapter 2!
6570431 Haha, you'll just have to wait and see how everypony (and a certain non-pony who's fond of Shy) reacts as more chapters roll out! (I know it's marked as complete, but I've come up with some direction for the story since posting. For now, it still makes a decent one-shot clop.)
That was short, but pretty good. And the concept isn't nearly as common as you'd think.
Kind of odd that Mac didn't try to contact her or anything after she suddenly jumped his bones like that, but hey; they'll have lots of time to talk as they're raising the child she conceived via her psychotic magic-fueled sexual assault.
6560115 Well, it DID happen in the middle of the night, and she was very out of character. He just assumed he had passed out in the field and had a weird dream. Makes sense, trying to get up for work in the middle of the night like that. :P
I'm honestly surprised to hear it's not so common. But hell, neither is art of this scenario. I dunno, I just figured between the popularity of FlutterMac shipping and of Flutterbat herself, it was an obvious direction to take.
6560115 Oh, and would you mind editing your post with spoiler tags? You kinda laid out everything but the number of thrusts on the page people see before actually getting to the story. xD
6560333
Yeah, it seems like it, but no. I think I've only seen three of them in total (including this) that use the concept (and in one it actually WAS a dream).
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Okay.
6561174 Huh. Go figure. So how does mine stack up? It's awful short, but I'd like to think excelling in English and literature plus two years of erotic roleplaying gave me some idea of how to write this kinda stuff ^^;;;
6561213
It stacks up fine. One started really good, but it was labeled incomplete. Another chapter was never added, so it just seems like an awkward one-shot without any real conclusion. And the dream one was funny, but loses points because its twist deliberately abandons any impact from its plot. Yours was short, sweet, and... well, predictably concluded. But between the story tags and the description, it was pretty obvious what was going to happen.
The only time I've seen the Flutterbat aspect explored in a deeper, multi-part romance story were for other pairings, not FlutterMac.
6561249 That's kinda disappointing, really. Honestly, I've got ideas for a full story myself, wherein the Flutterbat encounter wouldn't be their first coupling, but I just don't have the time, nor enough story to tie together what scenes I do have in mind.
EDIT: Nope, never mind, I think this might work out well, just playing off the ending of this chapter without a relationship prior to it. I'm already almost done with chapter 2!
AJ is just going to love hearing about this.
6570431 Haha, you'll just have to wait and see how everypony (and a certain non-pony who's fond of Shy) reacts as more chapters roll out! (I know it's marked as complete, but I've come up with some direction for the story since posting. For now, it still makes a decent one-shot clop.)
Meh. I liked the first two thirds, but the ending was kinda rushed.