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Jicho


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Awesome so far, can't wait for the rest.

The fuck... dafickisthisshit??!??

Interesting, there aren't any pure Bimbofication stories on here, usually there's something else to it. Also, it's Octavia, Minty is from G3

Comment posted by Dark Avenger deleted Oct 18th, 2015

Excellent so far, hope it gets updated soon!

As a clarification amongst my last comment; what sort of sick fetishes would one hafta have to enjoy reading this, or worse, write this? This is an abomination amongst FiMFiction.net, and an insult to the art of the book. I nearly stopped reading at least three times because of the horrid nature of this story. If you're going to write something like this, try to write it in a gruesome way that makes it qualify under gore/horror. That, while possibly being far more gross in general terms, would be a suspenseful, interesting read. Better luck with your next story, jincho, this one really just didn't fit within the realm of my enjoyment. This is all opinion, by the way, and I hold no responsibility for how anyone else may view such a fic. I completely understand that there are people with sick fetishes that will enjoy the content of this read.

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Thanks for the comment. I'm sure you'll find stories to satisfy your own "sick fetishes" elsewhere. Have a nice day! :twilightsmile:

6540464 Ahh, but you see, I have no sick fetishes, the gore was merely a suggestion. At most, I have... a great sense of adventure, and will read just about any adventure fic, as long as it has a believable set of characters and a fitting storyline. I can't say I necessarily enjoy stories that qualify as a similar type as this one, (some sort of sick fetish) but I am tolerant of most and can think along the same sick path if need be. In short, I'm a wierd person.

Interesting enough start ...

Nice to see another member of the club. :twilightsmile:

One thing, though. When it says,

going well with the new color of your coat.

Shouldn't that "the new color of her coat." since this is written in third-person?

Other than that minor quibble ... this shows potential.

How is a story with these elements not considered 'dark'?!

6540480 You're acting really defensive and opinionated about this. You could have just said this wasn't your kind of story and left it at that. You went on a bashing rant and then gave a really defensive response to the author's comment. You're your own person and can do what you want, but those in glass houses would be best advised to not throw stones.

6544237 I never threw stones. I might have defended my personal lack of "sick fetishes", but I never went on a true rant. I provided an opinion with the intention of helping the author see what could have been done differently, as well as provided a personal opinion on the side. I may say this is an abomination among FiMFiction, etc., but I cannot deny the existence of the audience that could enjoy this as-is, nor the audience that could enjoy this if it were written with a different set of ideas thrown in.
And as a side thought, the house of the internet is made of steel, so as to withstand the giant boulders that are constantly tossed around within.

6544702 You're still on the defensive. A person who really didn't care that much wouldn't be shooting reply after reply at everyone trying to counter their opinion. I admit that I care because I don't like people going on bash rants and then trying to defend their stuff as "opinion" and "critique." You are entitled to your opinions and that's fine, but bashing someone else's work and trying to hide behind free speech is cowardly. Just admit you hate the concept and stop trying to justify your opinion that this is an "abomination."

6545389 I'm sorry that I don't keep my replies simple and to the point. Force of habit. Yes, it didn't exactly appeal to my tastes. No, that doesn't mean I hate it because of that. I apologize if I appear to be a self-concealed hater with the way I (over?)explain things. All I wanted was to provide criticism and opinion, and it appears to have devolved into a textual argument about... me being a defensive hater, or whatever. Many times I carry my defensive words to the keyboard merely because I have nothing better to do, not because I neccesarily care. If you want me to shut up, I'll shut up. All you gotta do is ask, and I will stop replying on this specific argumentary chain of comments and find something else to entertain myself with.

6545792 You're free to do as you please. Most issues arise from lack of proper communication. I thank you for clarifying your words and offer my own advice in return. You do give off the impression of being very defensive and your responses are very wordy. Things like that tend to attract the comments of people less patient or considerate than myself. Consider it a friendly warning to avoid troll feeding in the future. : 3

6546700 Very well. Perhaps I shall purposely go troll-feeding sometime, the results might amuse me.

Really curious how this will continue. Now that the physical changes are over with, I expect mental ones to follow?

Anyway, a great and sexy read so far! The descriptions were very detailed and exciting and the whole thing flowed very well.

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Bondage, femsub, bimbofication, transformation... there's a lot of fetishes to choose from. But eh, I guess you'll just call them all "sick" and rant some more about how it's all an abomination of the written word.

I'm glad you at least acknowledge that your opinion isn't worth anything more than someone who does enjoy the story for its contents.

6610135 People can be wierd.


At least I'm not.
I don't think...
I hope I'm not.
Oh jeeze...

Welp. what happens when I'm aroused? I become a bimbo .p. also nice story...

Eager to see Chapter 2.

I eagerly await more! You have me raptured for more of her bimbofication. Don't let us down. :D

Meanwhile, know of any other fics like this? I'd love to read more in the meantime.

Good & Interesting story, I'm curious on how Octavia & Rarity & Romance are gonna fit the story, I'm also curious on what type of Hypnotism you're gonna use, Simple Helmet, Spell, Swirl screens, or maybe A Mind Break? All I know is that Minty will be getting the "Attitude adjustment" Pink Paradise thinks all mares should be.





Also, I'm faving, tracking & watching, you deserve it.

Although I technically did sign myself up for this because I read the fetish warning. I can't help but feel bad about this. I mean, it seemed pretty hot at first but it trailed off into darkness after awhile. I don't know what else to say about this, but here's the weird thing about this for me, I want to find out how the next chapter goes... :applejackunsure:

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This is an abomination amongst FiMFiction.net

In a site full of foalcon, and shit so much more fucked up than this I find this comment a bit out of place.

I mean this isn't my kind of thing, but I'm bored and lost all feeling for these sorts of things long ago.

If this triggered you I even know of something that'll break you inside and out. I know it did for me.

Funtime.

TF, body modification, growth, BE, bimboification, mind control, hypnosis, machines, sex (obviously)

What is BE?

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breast expansion

when is the next chapter comming?
this was a rather fun chapter:pinkiehappy:

All right, how do I upvote this twice?

6546953 A general advice to you.
If mere thoughts makes you desire to inflict personal harm upon another human being, you need medical help and fast, because you are obviously not mentally well.

A porno? Shudda figured that was the romance, still curious on how Rarity & Octavia fit in to this though....

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The "romance" comes later. The tag is also misleading, but I couldn't think of anything better to use.

When do rarity and Octavia come in? That's what I REALLY want to see.

BE

I've heard of a lot of fetishes, but this isn't one of them.

What is?

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Supposed to be "breast expansion". Removed it since it's kinda redundant anyway.

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Soon.

6715743 Hey, breast expansion is, like, one of my favorite kinks! It's soooo much fun!

(see what i did there? i made a joke. ha. ha. ha.)

This was an amazing bimbofying fic.:D What's next?^^

6715743 so hate to be impatient but... do you mean this week soon or this month soon? Cuz I'm not sure how long I can wait for those refined, dignified ladies to turn into...

"Shiver"

Ayyeee loved it ;P *aplauses* :derpytongue2:

I must say this chapter made me feel a lot better from reading that last chapter. Mainly because even though it was mainly against her will she found happiness and will live a happier life. The first chapter made me feel really uncomfortable mainly because it had a lot of pain. This is actually a good read good work!

My question is, what would happen if a stallion went in there >:3? :pinkiecrazy:

please please please update. I love this fanfic

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