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Sketchy Changeling


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NOTE: It is HIGHLY recommended that you read the original MOA before reading this story.
The original My Overbearing Aunt tells the story of Marcus, a young human living with his adoptive aunt, Princess Celestia. Now, witness the untold events of the story from the perspectives of its female characters.

How did Celestia get to the human world?

How was Luna coping with the diet her advisor put her on?

How did Octavia and Rarity get along as roommates?

Why was Honey Pot so fixated on Marcus?

All these questions and more will be answered in this parallel to MOA.


Like the original, this story is an HiE/Anthro story.

This story will start with a prologue for each character, and then follow the original storyline alternating between the different characters. This story will mainly feature events that didn't happen in the original, so it is highly recommended that you read MOA before you begin to read this story.

Chapters (12)
Comments ( 257 )

Yay! This turned out great! I loved how Celestia admitted that he gave up on Prince Blueblood long ago. Once a royal bitch, always a royal bitch. Can't wait to read more.

Great job! :pinkiehappy: Looking forward to Luna's prologue.

I figured you'd make this grand spectacle about the crossover, but nevertheless. :yay:

Great first chapter. :twilightsmile: Though I was surprised, to the point of re-reading, that Celestia would come out with such language :pinkiegasp:, considering what she does to Marcus whenever he swears. And nice moves getting around the difference in the canon and fanon names Luna has for Celestia. Now, create more of this. :pinkiehappy:

Dan

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Everyone gets one freebie. But don't do it again.

It was nice to see Celestia's perspective and the references from the IDW comics and the the book of Celestia and Luna.

Ah, if she only knew the trouble Marcus would get into, and how he'd get her so ticked sometimes.

Featured on 7/29/14! That was fast!

Except for the bottom three slogs, you can only get featured within 24 hours... :unsuresweetie:

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I meant compared to my other stories that got featured. Two of them took around 12 hours to get to the Featured box, and another one took months to get there.

4772436 Huh, interesting. Looks like you stayed in the game and it paid off then. :pinkiesmile:

At least my feed will stop telling me about your blogs about this...

Wooooooooo!!!!! This is gonna be awesome! *cracks opens a soda*

I think you did a wonderful job. Looking forward to the next prologue. :heart::pinkiehappy:

oh my gosh I loved the first MOA. I hope this one is just as good and funny. :pinkiehappy: :pinkiehappy: can't wait for more updates, keep it up.

A good starting for a backstory of a good story!
If that even makes sense.

Anyway, more please :pinkiehappy:

Yay, it begins :yay:

One thing though: newborn babies are not capable of either smiling, laughing, grabbing, muzzle-poking, or indeed doing anything much besides sleeping, sucking, and pooping. Mothers just out of childbirth, I'm told, generally aren't capable of holding conversations either.

Not that this is important to me, but whenever I've written something that ever so much as touches pregnancy with a ten-foot pole, I get a flood of comments to the effect that I have no idea what I'm talking about, and now apparently I feel like spreading the pain around :P sorry about that.

Anyway, liked, faved, and eagerly waiting for the next chapter :pinkiesmile:

Now, I what you're thinking:

Shouldn't it be: "I now what you're thinking:"

Anyway, this is going to be good.

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It was supposed to be "Now, I know what you're thinking". Thanks for pointing it out.

4774534 Just nitpicking. Just got home from work and your story was just the relaxation I needed.

i like it and i loved the original. i still think you should write a sequel and NOT an AP but still...i liked it

4774569 Agreed. I want to see how Octavia and Marcus love blooms and if they get married.

Okay, I'm excited about this, but I will agree that I would have loved a sequel. Seeing how Marcus and Octavia got along would have been awesome. What with the that slightly alternate take we had where the timeline changed slightly and he and Luna ended up together... Oh, the fun... the absolute fun :pinkiehappy:

4773972 Not your fault. Its the systems. I was a bit annoyed at... everything, when I wrote that. No ill will towards you. I have been up since 5pm yesterday, so I am a bit tired.

So I am sorry for being, well, rude.

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Don't worry about it. Looking back on it now, I might have made a few too many blog posts about this story.

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4775619 Have you both noticed that both of your profile pics are similar :derpytongue2: I posted this comment just 'cause of that.

Nice work, I assume Luna will be in the next chapter?

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Yeah, the order of the following prologues is gonna be:

Luna
Honey Pot
Octavia
Rarity

I like. Luna is believable, and don't worry about them sometimes being long. I like that.:twilightsmile:

Where as good as this, long is no problem at all. Honey Pot will be interesting, can't wait to see what's going on in her head. :pinkiehappy:

I have a feeling Honey Pot's is going to be in song. And kinky. With her saying 'You're playing tough to get... I'm gonna MAKE YOU MINE!' frequently.

Damn good job, sir.I look forward to your future work.

~Lucky

Sorry to be that guy but...

Go ahead and pick an outfit, Luna.

Good job regardless of that little slip up. :twilightblush:

This was a nice chapter, but there is something that bothers me.

I'll have you am NOT a maid.

I think that a couple of words such as "know" and "I" are missing.

4842268 alright.

4842237 Yay we're those guys together!

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