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Jicho


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You captured the obnoxiousness of teen writing perfectly. Sadly, this makes reading the story obnoxious even done on purpose.

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It gets better. Well, worse for her, really... But better for us. Soon, too. This is a starting point from which things go uphill for the readers and downhill for her.

Just, saying that as someone familiar with the full version. This here will be updated in chapters because the fic is gynormous. Who knows, may get to over a 100 dislikes with how many updates there are gonna be.

this is good, i really like how we, the readers, get put into the mind of the main character. but you spent so much time on that, it feels like you almost forgot to tell us what was actually going on, I had a very unclear idea of what was happening. i'm no professional, but I just wanted to say what my experience of this story was like. that's what the comments are for, anyway. am i right?

Hmm. Still a little confused as to what their plan actually is. I hope we'll get some insight with time. For now, have a fave!

Honestly, I don't get all the downvotes. This is pretty well-done on a technical level; I've seen so much worse with a stellar vote count.

Now, having said that... I'm still a little confused. Did the Changelings somehow imprint Sweetie's fetishes on the others? Did Sweetie's masochism sort of infect them, or did they just get her tickle fetish? Or is that a trick by her captors, make her think she's to blame for the others being masochistic tickle-sluts like her?

Comment posted by JLB deleted Jan 10th, 2017

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This is FimFic, I personally prefer to think of likes and dislikes on this site as being inverted. I'll know this is a good story when the dislikes are in the dozens. Well, overexaggerating a little, of course; it's more than likely because this is widely based on a spring-off of one particular fetish that is derided on this site, but due to its content, it's also put into groups pertaining to BDSM and MC. People around this part of the woods have a seizure when they see an anthroid foot and cream themselves when they hear the promis of bagina benis memememebang, sooo...

And, well, heh, I wouldn't think you're supposed to understand that yet. This is tagged mystery for a reason. There are decent reasons for each of your ideas to be the case. Some may have less ground than others, some may be more solidified/ousted as the story continues. Not unlikely that it's a mixture of multiple assumptions either.

MC when done gradually is usually best served with a side of ambiguity that is consistently kept at a level above average, I find.

Why doesn't Arcadias just create an account here?

7846207 How do you know how long the story will be?

Comment posted by JLB deleted Jan 13th, 2017

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The story's already posted on FA. You can potentially just go there and read it start to finish. I've been there.

And looking at what happens with this sort of fiction on this site? Heh, yeah, no. Getting someone else to put their account under fire is kind of a better idea, at least there's a wider spectrum to estimate the hate. Then again, the choice really is between abandoning the idea of posting on this site and posting it solely to troll people that foam at their mouth when they see anthro footfetish-related porn, anyway... In my opinion.

I mean look at this, the author's already blocking people, comments are getting deleted, this is some hot stuff.

There's only that much that I would know, after all, I'm not Arcadias. But I think I have a decent grasp on how things are.

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