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kudzuhaiku
She's looking at you. Yes you. And she is judging you with her eyes. There is no escape.
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interesting
the friendzone is strong with this one
MORE!
It was a great start, and I want to see more!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
22:45_9/10/2015
That is one BOLD colt right there.
Makes sense though, if he's from a family of pegasi.
Have your first upvote and tracking for the story!
Hrm... colt certainly has a large pair for his age. Did we also get a slight whiff of TwiLestia?
A unicorn colt raised in a Pegasus family will be interesting!
6412968 see the chase this is old hat for him. But no less impressive for it
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This one will be... different.
But we might see Zenith in the bird bath trying to attract a mate.
Oh now this has potential to get weird and interesting...
It occurs to me that it's a good thing you can't hook your brain directly up to a computer and write your stories as fast as you can think them, Kudzu. I doubt anyone could keep up!
This story has so much potential. I really hope you're planning on continuing this story. Cheers, lad
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MORE.
If this was anyone but you writing it, the story would go one way, but since it's you it's going to go the other. And I can't wait
This should be entertaining.
I'm going to read the shit outa this just for that line.
I want the shipteasing.
I want it.
Please.
And also more!
Great as always!
How old is little zephyr? same age as twilight when she started as a student ? Heck I can't recall if they even mention how old she was when she started... 14? 10?
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He is about the age of a yearling.
6413962 After the looking the term up, that's kinda interesting, didn't realise they grow so fast. Thanks.
Cadance's role in this chapter was just too funny.
a dangerous
Riiiiight...yeah....compleeeeeeeeeeetly inoccent and pure !!!!!
so we have a colt with a hard case of teacher crush... what will happen next? will he succeed in his quest?
Clearly his balls didn't get any smaller under her tutelage.
And we're off and running again.
Just out of curiosity, is this a new universe or does it tie into some of your others?
Oh, yeah, so far so good. Waiting on chapter 2 now.
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Chapter two has been live for a few hours.
And this is a stand alone fic. It is entirely unrelated.
Only 2 chapters so far and......holy crap this is going to be an interesting series.
Grab your popcorn people. Dis gonna git good.
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I'm confused.... should I be feeling sorry Celestia or Zenith in this story? Or who should I be rooting for? Ah, the hell with it, I'll just root for Twilight and Rarity.
As for Celestia and Zenith, somepony pass the popcorn, this is going to be fun.
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This seems like Pegasus nature coming in again!
Do herds exist in this universe?
So Twilight is a lesbian and is fuck buddies with Rarity and she gives lectures on how to be fuck buddies with one of your friends?
I am enjoying this far more than I should be I think!
Me Uncl Pat would sing this ever night before he broke his neck a slipping on a bar of Irish Spring
So, I'm curious, does Zenith use non-standard toilet paper?
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If this is a reference, I don't get it.
Hehe. This is turning out to be as good as I thought it would be...
Makes you wonder if the twins' names got switched on the birth certificates...
well,
i like pumpkin, a mare that know what she wants and goes full frontal assault to get it
her mark is one way to put it... beat up a chimera... dame filly, you don't play around
the way she more or less throws herself at zenith is also done right, she knows he won't act on it... so she plays it over the top.
would love to see a fan art of her
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When Pound shows up... everything will make perfect sense.
Pumpkin was shown the error of her ways. Hard to judge someone when you come from a different background.
the tree was a nice touch. A house tree
Also shows us the true nature of zeniths magic... nature
Buttermilk and Pumpkin.........don't know why but this chapter has me craving for some ice-cream for some reason....
This is turning in something different then I expected. Really good...
I don't know why I thought that this would be a short story
I just remembered that this is Kudzu. I felt very stupid
6425106 silly silly person
This story's not really my cup of tea; but before I go, I have one bit of advice. You should change your description.
It misleads potential readers into thinking Zenith's attraction to Celestia will be the main focus of the story. When it actually has had very little impact on events so far and is really more of an unrelated personality trait. People like me who where expecting a charming x-rated romance will be let down since that doesn't seem to be the story's point at all. It's not a bad story it's just not what was advertised.
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The story hasn't played out yet... the description remains accurate so far.
*waves around a 'Kudzu #1' flag* You know I'm reading.
I'm quite curious how you are going to handle things. Will Zenith accept Pumpkin's offer? Would it lead him away from focusing on Celestia? Would it secretly make Celestia jealous after so long? Will something happen that changes Celestia's perspective about the malleable line of professional distance from a pony so devoted to her?
There are just so many options. The emotional interplays and subtle nudging this way and that, the implications of Zenith starting to consider Pumpkin's offer, so many things sitting there staring, pointing in various directions of possibility.
Cup Cake is an epic mom... just saying
This story continues to entertain me. Funny and interesting. For some reason tho, I'm getting a vibe that since with zenith and his magic being about nature that at some point he is gonna go all Captain Planet or something on magic-pony-land. No real reason for that feeling, but its there for some reason.