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kudzuhaiku
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kudzuhaiku
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I wouldn't be opposed to seeing a bit more of this couple when they're actually introduced into The Chase. I enjoy reading the comments made by interspecies couples, especially Lugus and Yew.
I liked it. for once your story discription made me want to read it
pacing was ok the nods to the chase were perhaps a touch over done I think you could drop out sparkler without hurting the story in any way.
Wow! This was cute. Thanks for sharing.
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But it was nighttime. She was out on patrol. And she was freezing.
I really want to see more of this couple, even if it's only a cameo in The Chase.
This was sweet.
Lyra just... can't resist being the peanut gallery, can she?
The first line was very poetic. Beautiful almost. Also I am still hoping for Sunset and Bartlebe to become a couple. Go interspecies relationships!
This is interesting. All these little back stories help flesh out the chase world. Give us all you got.
Got an extra 'to' in there.
AH! I did not need to read that!
This was cute, funny and it touched me in places I wish it didn't. It's hard to imagine a female minotaur without it looking odd.
*Whistles Appreciatively*
A few lines in and I'm already loving this!
Oh god. its so sappy! i love it! must have moar!
Sweet, yet Lyra had me laughing like a hyena the entire time.
I don't know if I've ever properly detailed about why I simply adore your writing. It's the way you make us feel, the way the reader reacts when they see the heartwarming and real dialogue that always hits home. It's such an experience to feel and understand the trials and hardships and events and emotions in The Chaseverse. I love your characters. Happy Holidays to you, Kudzu.
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Aw... thanks.
So sweet you could call it a dessert
That was too full of "Aww..."
I take it this is what happend to the wyvern story? :D
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No. That's a different story. On hold. No worthwhile art.
Major problem: there is no chapter 2.
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Anything ye make is worth art!
If only I had the damn time.
A story as sweet and heartwarming as the cocoa. Though now I'm wondering what minotaur/pony crossbreeds would even be.
Also, those background teasers. I get the feeling there's a lot of Chase-relevant info going on in the background beyond what I was able to notice.
Thank you for this, Kudzu. Merry Christmas.
5418794 I think looking odd pretty much comes with the territory.
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pretty much works - if you flip the legs around, and perhaps stretch the chest out to demphasise the boobs.
I don't think we've ever seen a female minotaur in canon, and Iron Will might be his species BulK Biceps/Snowflake.
(*) Holy photoshop batman.
Sweet story about a sweet couple.
Be nice to see more, but it's nice as is.
But how the crap does he get frosting on his ear? Just how messy an eater can he possibly be?!
Lyra is such an ass. That's why she's so awesome.
On a critiquing note, some of the conversation was a bit too telly.
lines lIke these give a lot of background, but would come off a lot better if it was shorter, or if her size was portrayed with innuendo rather than direct statements. Hopefully this helps you become a better writer than you already are
keep up the good work!
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Will keep that in mind and already working towards that end.
5610295 your recent Chase chapter have improved so much :D I can tell you're working really hard to make your writing better.
Well... that was one way of proposing. Different, but good.
I really like this story. It's a great mix between Sweet & Saucy. These two are really swee together, and it warms my heart to think that all those hardship that they faced, were all leading to them having a relatively blissful life at Bucky's school <3