Oh now this has potential to get weird and interesting...
It occurs to me that it's a good thing you can't hook your brain directly up to a computer and write your stories as fast as you can think them, Kudzu. I doubt anyone could keep up!
How old is little zephyr? same age as twilight when she started as a student ? Heck I can't recall if they even mention how old she was when she started... 14? 10?
interesting
the friendzone is strong with this one
MORE!
It was a great start, and I want to see more!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
22:45_9/10/2015
That is one BOLD colt right there.
Makes sense though, if he's from a family of pegasi.
Have your first upvote and tracking for the story!
Hrm... colt certainly has a large pair for his age. Did we also get a slight whiff of TwiLestia?
A unicorn colt raised in a Pegasus family will be interesting!
6412968 see the chase this is old hat for him. But no less impressive for it
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This one will be... different.
But we might see Zenith in the bird bath trying to attract a mate.
Oh now this has potential to get weird and interesting...
It occurs to me that it's a good thing you can't hook your brain directly up to a computer and write your stories as fast as you can think them, Kudzu. I doubt anyone could keep up!
This story has so much potential. I really hope you're planning on continuing this story. Cheers, lad
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MORE.
If this was anyone but you writing it, the story would go one way, but since it's you it's going to go the other. And I can't wait
This should be entertaining.
I'm going to read the shit outa this just for that line.
I want the shipteasing.
I want it.
Please.
And also more!
Great as always!
How old is little zephyr? same age as twilight when she started as a student ? Heck I can't recall if they even mention how old she was when she started... 14? 10?
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He is about the age of a yearling.
6413962 After the looking the term up, that's kinda interesting, didn't realise they grow so fast. Thanks.
And we're off and running again.
Just out of curiosity, is this a new universe or does it tie into some of your others?
Oh, yeah, so far so good. Waiting on chapter 2 now.
The diabetis is real. That was funny and adorable. Not at all what I expected.