I have a drawing tablet now!! I just realized how much they suck, due to their interface not showing what you draw, but, meh, better than that stupid cursor, right?
A malfunctioning in the portal gun send Rick and Morty to Equestria, on a search for getting back home, instead, leading them, and their newfound "friends" on a goose chase cross-dimensional.
I really messed up when I made the second part of this :(
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Please tell Rick will do something to Diamond Tiara.
to be honest this is horrible and yet i love it all the same
Where did that grenade come from?
"Uhh...B-But I thought Rick was like their Grandpa or something...W-What's with the uncle thing?"
6415029 if he does then this is the best story ever
6415029 Yeap, that's gonna happen.
6415087 His huge unlogical pockets.
6415079 K then
6415176 Fixed
!
6415079 Oh, and Rick and Morty is meant to be horrible and good
6416916 You are dumb. In the show, Morty always tried to get a girlfriend, idiot. And no, he didn't bang Rarity. He's in a relationship, smartass. Think before you type... or speak.
Hehehehee, this gives back the feeling of the actual episodes quite well!
I found a couple of editing messing ups (the /color things, namely, look for it), but besides that, this is brilliant!
The whole idea of making each character's said words colored with their color, it's a nice and quite rare touch too.
So, in all, this is a great job, make more soon!
I'm quite curious about how this will continue and end... especially with Morty and Rarity, oh lolol!
-Zeph
6417614 Yay you liked it
!! Thank you thank you thank you! I did the color thing mostly for knowing who is talking, and you should probably know what will happen to Morty and Rarity.. it happens every time he gets a girlfriend...
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Well, I do remember Morty having that sex robot... that was an interesting episode for sure!
Wait, Rick disassembled the bot. Does that mean...?
6418728 It's amazing how people don't watch the show xD
The next is called Rick-ity Split (sorry for the puns)
6418728 "But I want to kill everyone I see."- Morty Jr.
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Hey, the original show's episode names are puns anyway, it's mandatory to make the same thing here!
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Morty Jr. is awesome. A fellow writer with a troubled childhood!...
Heheheeh, classic.
6421481 Wubba Lubba Dub Dub
In the upcoming chapter Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon are dealt with.
Oh boy, what will happen next? Btw I half expected Rick to build a walker like in that episode with that microverse car battery...
Well, let's hope we will see some similar things in the future!
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Hope you feel better soon!
Rest in peace Twilight's Castle.
I would have liked for Rick to shatter DT and Silver into pieces after freezing them, But this still really good.
Rarity has a jacuzzi in her house?
6430994 Thanks
!
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The fourth chapter might involve more Mr. Meeseeks :3
6431438 Wait, scratch that :D I just figured out a cause for the fire, guys! Mr. Meeseeks
I'm so very sorry for chapter 3 :'(
End.
Well then...
6432405 IM SO SORRY!!!!!!!!!
PLLEEEEAAASSEEE FORGIVE ME!!!!
If I remember correctly, Rick can't fix death.
6432423 Orly? Welp.
We will see..
6432200 Don't be.
Awesome story!
Dun-dun-dunn!
Note: Pegasi is for plural. In the beginning of the chapter you used it to describe Flutters and Dash. It's just pegasus if singular, fix that.
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Yepp, neither can he travel back in time, so the CMC will remain DED.
Unless he makes clones of them, like in that Simpsons couch gag!
That would make... apple Rick, Rickaloo and Sweetie Rick!
Glooo(burp)rious!
It's really like an episode of the actual show! Nothing gets really concluded, Rick escapes back home (sorta), Morty is freaking out, heh, yeah, like an actual episode! Well done!
Now, give me more!
6433502 He can travel back in time. Trust me.
Time machines, durr.
He's going to make one.
which will probably break again xD
Waiting for part 2- whatever number it was to upload :3
Why would it suck?
I expect the candy people eat human parts, though.
Like, limbs.
And now they're in Adventure TIme...
I have to be honest, that Ooo this place sucks joke by Rick made laugh.
Alright, I read the full chapter now.
I have two things to say, which should be used as things to watch out for.
1) Rick is belching too much. In the show he does that less. Also, he should speak more to Morty and say 'Morty' much more. (Interactions between them is lacking).
2) The story is getting a bit too random. I'm not against crossovers, but following a more straight line would be a bit better.
Alright, that was my two cents, where is a candy machine?
6451843 1. I know, I need to fix Rick.
2. True, true x3
Remember when I told you about how the crossovers are getting out of hand?
Now they are out of hand.
I love Portal 2, that game is genius, but maybe dragging it into the story... maybe... maybe it wasn't such a good idea.
Knowing Rick, he will just access a computer and stop the reactor core meltdown with a few commands anyway.
6457561 Rick is crippled.