Twilight Velvet returns home from shopping and has one very important question for her son: why is there a hole in the wall?
Thanks to Noble Thought for editing.
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This was cute. Damn Orcs!
cute
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Thanks!
this is pretty good.
6383605 Fun to write, too. Thanks!
6383647 no problem, it was well deserved.
Like it! And asking for more!
LateBronyWriter
Yes, but what happened to the mutated zombie orcs? Surely, they're still running around. I can't see shining armor defeating them in one blow even it they were imaginary constructs.
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It's obvious. Mom slew them all with "Vile Glare" a lethal skill useable once per day.
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Well... wasn't expecting a sequel request for this one.
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They fled in the face of a greater terror after Shining's attack.
That was great, Shining as a colt fics were something I didn't know I needed more of. And just think, he's only their first child.
6384464 Shining's mom?
Haha, you think that's bad, Velvet, wait until your daughter comes around...
If this isn't adorable, I don't know what is.
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Oh, yes. Imaginary monsters are nothing compared to a real mother's wrath.
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It's a miracle they survived.
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6384950 Dang it, between these stories, those kinds of pictures, and Sunset Shimmer, my heart is going to be eternally liquid.
6384686
Once they realized their children were getting exponentially stronger after Twilight, they definitely were like "No more!".
6385418 The next set will be a pair of twins that ascend and travel back in time to the beginnings of Equestria.
Night Light and Twilight Velvet, the most important Equestrian couple ever.
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Imagine the grandchildren. Velvet and Night Light won't be running out of things to rub in their friends' faces at dinner parties anytime soon.
Adorable
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I just found this and
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Just realized this was my 500th Favorited story. Kind of glad it was a nice fluff story compared to other stories I tend to read.
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Glad to be of service!
Very adorable.
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Yay!
I must ask, does the title have anything to do with Killer Mutant Snow Goons?
Or is it a connection formed only by my mind?
(Either way, I'll be reading this soon... just needed to ask before I read!)
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Inspired by it, yes. Hope you enjoy it!
This is actually really interesting. We don't hear much about Shining's magical development and he is quite magically gifted.
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Thanks!
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6384464 Sorry for the confusion! By 'asking for more' I meant looking foreword to whatever your next project is. Though you don't see enough of cute filly main characters/Prequels, and the idea of Shining comforting Twilight in a similar situation would be a great story. I can see it now: "Big Brother Shining! Help! The mutant moth worms are eating all my books!"
LaeBronyWriter
Aw, this is just precious. ^^ Kudos to Velvet for being such a patient and understanding mom!
Even more kudos to Shining for nat-20'ing initiative on that Quickened Dome of Force spell. Probably saved him from getting one-shotted by Mother's Wrath. x_x
And when she had such a cute, adorable daughter, she was certain that she couldn't possibly have surges as ridiculous as her brother's.
The ponies who sold them home insurance committed suicide long before Twilight got her cutie mark.
6386941 The mutant moth worms ate the house!
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Glad you liked it.
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Pity them.
this was a cute little story here
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Thanks!
We all had moments like these in our childhoods. I remember this one time I was playing with an old electric lamp and a screwdriver, I knocked out the electricity in my family's basement.
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Ha! Yeah, I managed to knock a hole in our wall not once, but twice. Both times when our parents were away, and my brother and I started horsing around. He chased me, I tripped somehow, and barreled right through. Didn't manage to break completely through to the next room, though. Maybe he and I can get together around Christmas and find out if the third time's the charm.
6391634 Minds Eye: Amatuer Home Remodeler!
Very nice. Very nice indeed.
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Anybody else have a feeling that either Night Light or Twilight Velvet never got the training they needed because there kids are powerhouses. So why weren't they?
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Hm. That would make an interesting story. Night Light and Twilight Velvet working together in the Monster Hunter Agency mentioned in the Slice of Life episode. The two top agents in the whole organization kicking flank, taking names, and eventually falling in love.
Great! Have it on my desk by next week!
6396121 sorry, no time. I'm studying to get my CDL license.
Way to sink the Titanic Velvet.
A big moment in any child's life.
He's going to lead his clan on a campaign to spill a highway of blood crossing the land in an attempt to extract revenge from one who abandoned them in their hour of greatest need. Just like the protagonist in his favorite comic; Brave Little Toaster.
She has a new door. What's she complaining about?
Just think of this as his graduation from a public high school. He's not going ANYWHERE.
Parents. Notice. Everything.
Be grateful it wasn't goblins. They steal ponies.
When Rainbow Dash gets one, she does a Sonic RaInboom.
Indeed.
I reviewed this story!
My review can be found here.
I expected Twilight Sparkle to make an appearance in this one, if nothing else kicking her in the tummy from the inside.