Through The Wall

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There is a giant hole in the wall of Twilight's castle. Most of her front door is gone. And Rainbow Dash had better have a good explanation for this.

Top ten finalist for the "Look, I can explain" writeoff.

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Magicman7997

Magicman7997 #1 · Feb 12th, 2016 · 16 · ·

I really enjoyed this! I could really see Dash as a "secret agent" with BonBon/Sweetie Drops as her "mentor". Even more hilarity could ensue when a jealous Lyra misunderstands why BonBon is spending so much time with Dash.

The Cyan Recluse

The Cyan Recluse #2 · Feb 13th, 2016 · · ·

Well, that was fairly amusing.

Kitcat36

Kitcat36 #3 · Feb 14th, 2016 · 1 · ·

That was so much fun!

LatentHalcyon

LatentHalcyon #4 · Feb 14th, 2016 · · ·

"There is no stopping this!" Bon Bon shouted back. "Once it's initiated, there's no un-initiating it! That's the point of a self-destruct sequence!"

Not quite true. Remember that one time Ripley tried to stop Nostromo's self-destruct mechanism by activating the cooling units she had pulled out before? She would have done it, too, if it weren't for the fact that Mother turned out to be a major bitch, not accepting a two seconds slip-up.

Alondro

Alondro #5 · Feb 14th, 2016 · · 2 ·

6933009 Yeah, you always want to have some way to deactivate a self-destruct, just in case some crazy guy manages to turn it on.

Like me!

*presses the big red Blow Up The Earth button again!* HEE HEE HEE!!

River Babble

River Babble #6 · Feb 14th, 2016 · 2 · ·

AHahaha! Nice! That was a fun one, short and sweet with a good dose of slapstick and action. Also, I really like that someone grabbed onto the Special Agent Sweetie Drops canon; I don't know why people complain about that so much, it's kind of awesome and was a clever way for the writers to resolve her canon name of Sweetie Drops with her fanon name of Bon Bon. (Yes, it was totally canon before, I have the guidebook for seasons 1-3). Nice job, thanks for the fun read!

BluEngy

BluEngy #7 · Feb 14th, 2016 · · ·

Its like the damn men in black but a little less and a little more badass all at once

Thought Prism

Thought Prism #8 · Feb 14th, 2016 · · ·

I need to see you write the Daring Do/Sweetie Drops team mission prequel fic now.

jazzie366 FLUFFKIN

jazzie366 FLUFFKIN #9 · Feb 14th, 2016 · 2 · ·

Sequel pls?
It'd be nice to have an adventure series with rainbow that's not too long or short like this.

SunsetyDays

SunsetyDays #10 · Feb 14th, 2016 · 3 · ·

I like it.

It needs a sequel though. A long one.

D48

D48 #11 · Feb 15th, 2016 · 2 · ·

That was a ton of fun and I definitely want to see more of this oddball partnership now.

PonyDragon

PonyDragon #12 · Feb 16th, 2016 · 1 · ·

"I need your help," Bon Bon ordered.
: "What could be more important than afternoon cake?"
"How about the safety of all of Ponyville?" Bon Bon challenged.
: "Like, all of Ponyville?"
"And the surrounding areas," Bon Bon confirmed.
: "But afternoon cake."

You can't win, Bon Bon.

And if she came back with Rainbow Dash as a zombie pony, she was probably looking at a life sentence for contributing to the death of a national hero.

But if Rainbow "Danger" Dash becomes a zombie pony, would she technically really be dead? I mean, she is still walking around alive. (Sort of.)

And what happened to Professor Distressor? Did he woke up before the explosion and take revenge, or did he die and became a (sentient) zombie pony himself? Or something else? Or am I somehow overthinking?

Good story!

Is this merely supposed to be an One-Shot or will there be an sequel?

bahatumay

bahatumay #13 · Feb 16th, 2016 · · ·

6942343
You can never kill a good bad guy. They just keep coming back.
This one is just a one-shot, and I haven't even thought of a sequel; but seeing how many people wouldn't mind one I might have to give it some thought.