Caramel is tired of his cousins ragging on him for having a pegasus marefriend, so he proposes a drinking game for the three of them to play.
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This was a fun story. Thank you for sharing! How do you like them apples?
5268438
No fair. You took the best emoticon.
That was freaking AWESOME!!!!!! I love how Caramel had the final joke in the end. That was great to read.
5268462 Thank you!
I liked this, Caramel needs more love.
Now we need one for Sassaflash, 'Pegasi needs winged companions, not ground pounders!'
5268517
Ooh, maybe the Wonderbolts instead of Sassaflash? The scandal!
5268537 - I love it!
5268438
Sorry, someone had to post it.
Definitely a fun read Minds!
5268722 Thanks!
5268537
Oh, I'd DEFINITELY read that!
5268537 Like what? They find out that Soarin's seeing AJ? lol
5268744
Maybe Spitfire is seeing AJ. Or Fleetfoot is seeing Big Mac. Maybe all three of them are crushing on AJ.
5268731
Another story idea for the pile!
5268755 Hmm, or the main members of the A squad are crushing on ground pounders and the lower tier Wonderbolts are grumbling.
*now considers a TwiFire fic*
I enjoyed reading this. The dialogue felt natural and the characters had distinct personalities. Excellent work!
5268767
There is not enough TwiFire on this site, so I'm all for seeing more of it.
5268837 I'm a shipper at heart. I don't really care which character gets shipped with which, as long as it's written and executed well
5268842
While I like some ships more than others, I'd have to agree with you there. Any ship can work well if it's well-written and executed well.
5268837
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading.
5268856 You're welcome!
Cleverly done! I didn't realize it was a setup until the end!
My favorite recording of that little ditty.
I think I'm the only girl in the world that doesn't like hot guys at a bar, but I do like some cute ones I see at places like Walmart.
Cute! Not much else to say
What a weird story...funny though.
5269430
Thanks!
5269675
Never even knew the song was that old. Thanks for cluing me in.
5269778
5269995
Nothing else you have to say.
5269710
And tomorrow Braeburn and Big Mac take Caramel to Barnyard Bargains...
5270003 It was well-written, and I found it to be very humorous. I'm better at writing grimdark than comedy though.
5270014
To each their own. Thanks for reading.
5270059 No problem.
They planned that out. Genius.
Delisiously orchestrated. Well done.
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5270225
I love it when a plan comes together.
What I never understood was: Why, if we saw Caramel with her in the show, why are there so many M/M stories of him?
5271439
Selective memory loss?
5271449 Pigs, I'm glad you saved him from those people, great story, Lad.
Edit after finishing it: Those sneaky... Very well done, Lad!
thought you had a shot with Rarity. I can't believe I missed her walking in.'
" Gosh, Everypony in ponyville knows She's the Dragons tail , Bad enough getting shot down, Let alone in flames!"
Excellent. Laughed too many times at this.
When your significant other goes along in a scheme like this, you know it's one to hold on to
5271583
Glad to hear it!
5271590
We should all be so lucky.
5271439 sir, you're asking the wrong person, I haven't seen an episode in six-plus months, (Return of disharmony). And very few in the six months before that.
5271629 I was not pointing at you and you alone, I meant everyone.
Stubborn? No, I think the word you're looking for is racist. Seriously, I'd have just slapped Braeburn up the side of the head and told him him to piss off back to Apploosa.
5271689 :shrug: okay. FYI. That came off as a little more angry than I think you intended. Might want to try and tone it down a bit.
5271717 Text on a page does do that. But, rest assured I wasn't angry, just a bit annoyed.
5271723
Wouldn't be much of a comedy with no reason for the set-up to be even set up.
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Oh! I mean...
5271697 It's the drawback to that down-home charm. Refuse to change one thing, and it's harder the change another thing.
5271746 I figured. And I'm not really offended by that anyways. Public comment. Public response.
5271810 That's very decent of you, normally people get offended at the drop of a hat. It's nice to see some are not like that.
5271908 Drop of a hat...
I'm in Texas... Coincidental wording is it not?
And yeah, I try not to lose my head, after all, this is the interweb, there's more than enough people doing that already.
This was cute. I sure didn't see the punchline coming.
Nice twist. Sweet story.
Silly and cute, nice little one shot.