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After Pinkie Pie has a strange encounter in the dark gym at school. She accidentally receives her first kiss by mistake. Doing a little digging with Rarity Pinkie finds out that it was Rainbow Dash that she had kissed. What will Pinkie do when she finds out the truth?
This story was started before the Friendship Games so no Sci Twilight. Hence, the alternate universe tag.
Cover art drawn by me!
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I always like a story about Pinkie and Rainbow Dash. They are a fun duo (whether they know it or not). Hope to see more soon.
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I like them too! I have most of the story planned out but I just need to type it up.
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I will keep it in one of my libraries so I know when you post another. It will be intersting to see where you take this sort of story.
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It is a very interesting story , I did put a lot of thought into it. I worked on just this chapter for a few moths. I will try to move this story along as fast as I can!
6176918 I think the start is probably the most difficult thing in most of the storys, but i have to say this was really nice.
I mean under other circumstances Rainbows behavior could have been a bit odd, then again i really liked to see her shy side.
It was also a nice to see the way Rainbow Dash acted around Fluttershy, a special moment between two friends.
Not sure if i would say this is my favourite pariring if they would be Ponys, but i really like this one, i like how you has written them in this chapter.
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I always thought that Rainbow Dash would be super shy when it comes to love. I know she is a little out of character here but as things progress she will get more confident.
6179976 i don´t mind it, i actually don´t like it to nearly have a foward, and brave Rainbow Dash in every fanfiction, i mean even she can be shy.
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It is nice to have a different Rainbow Dash once in awhile.
While i enjoy what happened in this chapter, i hope this doesn´t comes to an end to soon.
I somehow can understand Rainbow Dash´s reason, why she doesn´t want to tell them him that she is a girl that could beat "him" in every Sport, Game or whatever, if "Inky" would have a huge ego, he would probably doesn´t like being beaten by a girl, but at the same time i believe she is just shy, because everything is new for her.
Still i think the moment they notice which person their new boyfriend is, that even Pinkie hasn´t a that normal reaction anymore. I hope that sentence works that way, i have no time to correct it right now, but i hope you understand what i mean, i have to go now bye.
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Don't worry this isn't a short story! I have a lot of typing ahead of me.
I am enjoying the story and I am happy to see a new chapter. Keep up the good work and we shall see what trouble Dash gets into.
that probably makes Rainbow feel bad.
It is really a bit weird that there are no parent´s, i mean i would probably not like it if her parent´s would try to barge in, but since someone mentioned it, it seems a bit weird for me.
Nice chapter, but to be honest i somehow hoped they would talk about it, well i just hope the story doesn´t stop the moment they are together.
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All of your valid points will be addressed, just give it a minute!
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She sure does have a special talent for stirring up trouble all right!
I like this quite a bit but the only problem why would pinkie not have rd's number? Other than that good job
Cmon Pinkie you need to talk to Dash pronto!
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The whole phone situation is briefly explained in the middle of chapter 3
Poor Dashie!
Oh no I was hoping that Pinkie and Dash would pull together and give it a try but it seems you might have other plans...
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All in good time!
I have big plans!
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Well I won't be going anywhere. I will hold out hope that Dash and Pinkie give the relationship a shot (I am also hoping that it works for them).
Oh Pinkie I do not think you are going to make Dash happy as when she inevitably finds out she will be upset especially if she does forgive this male persona and what if you do too good of a job and she likes him?
I don´t hate that type of Pinkie Pie, but I get a bit tired of reading about a sultry Pinkie Pie in nearly every new fanfiction I read at the moment. I think since probably everyone wants to try it, it should be overused in a few days, or weeks.
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I know what you mean there are way to many kinky pies out there. My Pinkie Pie just likes pushing Rarity's buttons.
6537451 Well that´s okay, I think I noticed her being different from the kinky ones, I just wasn´t sure.
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My Pinkie is just more aware of those kind of jokes but doesn't really participate in those types of activities
In a way I kind of based that quirk on my own attitude when I was in high school.
Awwww that was adorable. Great chapter.
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I'm glad that you liked it! I put a lot of work into this one.
I overall really liked the chapter. I do still wonder how Pinkie even thinks this is going to work long term especially if she in genre savvy at all but we shall see how things go. I really like how Pinkie shows off her intelligence and skill in ways that make sense with her.
Also in both cases your last lines for Rarity and Rainbow Dash were hilarious. Those were good choices.
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I use to hate Pinkie Pie until the last couple seasons. I realized she isn't stupid or completely naive, she is a lot smarter than she leads on and I love that! But Rainbow Dash still gets on my nerves so I made sure my Rainbow Dash was a little shy and a bit of a doofus especially when she has a crush on someone! And Moose has a few tricks up his sleeve
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Pinkie has always been my favorite character. I agree on her having many layers. One of my favorite episodes to show this off is oddly "Too many Pinkie Pies". One textbook case is when Pinkie breaks the laws of physics to keep herself from bothering Dash when she is resting at the lake. The other Pinkies later were just causing her grief but the real Pinkie wanted to let Dash have a good time (thinking of others before herself).
Dash is a little bit more obvious and she has very clear goals. That is why she is so often used in many stories it is fairly easy to get into her head.
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My favorite Pinkie Pie episode "Feeling Pinkie Keen!" The episode "Too Many Pinkie Pies" was a huge turning point for her. She wasn't nearly as annoying after that. But in all of season 5 Pinkie really shines bright! My favorite pony is Rarity then Applejack then it is a tie between Pinkie and Fluttershy. Poor Twilight is in 5th and Rainbow is in 6th place. But I still love them all!
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My list goes like this
Pinkie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash/Applejack, Twilight,, and then Fluttershy.
Twiligith used to be higher on the list and AJ lower but for the past few seasons it has flipped hard.
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Same here! At first Twilight was at the top and AJ was near the bottom! Well not anymore! I relate Rarity the most, I like art and I love giving!
THIS STORY IS SO INTERESTING!! I need an update sooooon
Keep up the excellent writing 
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Thank you so much! I'm glad that you really like it so far
I'm a little more than half way done with the latest chapter! I hope I will be able to post it soon.
Dashie what have you done?
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Something dumb, at least she is really sorry!
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*Shrugs* Guess you have to wait and see....I did put a drama tag on this story after all! Things are gonna get crazy!!!
Ok we get it. This story is about Dash and Pinkie but you don't have to constantly use their full names. You can say Dash or Pinkie. Seriously its super annoying reading every single sentence with their full names. Why is the gym so dark anyway just so they can kiss?
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There is a good reason for why I use their full names but I can't say at the moment. I made sure that when the two are addressed by name their friends call them "Pinkie" Or "Dashie" As for why the gym is so dark it is so they can't see each other. If Pinkie Pie saw Rainbow Dash on the floor then she wouldn't have tripped and kissed her in the first place. Then there would be no story.
Good to see another chapter. I want to see how Pinkie deals with her growing feelings for Dash especially with the Moose personality.
Awwwww, im all caught up!!!
6847578 I know what you mean being caught up isn't much fun!
6842314 It will be interesting!
Pinkie you put yourself into the fire now. You are now going to have to make Dash upset that one of you isn't there or try to pull off the be in two places at once cliche. Granted if anybody can do it Pinkie can.
One thing I like is Pinkie trying to piece together her feelings by judging the differences between being kissed by a friend as a friend and being kissed by Dash. I guess we will see about how Pinkie feels when the situation is reversed.
You need some fixing. When it's better, I'll up-vote.
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I know this story has some problems, I do want to rewrite it or at least redo a few chapters. I really do appreciate your honesty, it is refreshing and helpful.
It's a really good story! Well written out and everything! I remember every day i would look forward to reading a new chapter, but personaly , (SPOILER ALERT!), I didn't like the "moose" part. It just didn't seem like something Pinkie would do! And also, when she finds out she kissed rainbow, she runs and crushes the flower, and Rainbow gets upset after she sees the crushed flower. Again, it seemed a little out of character. But i'm looking forward to the re-write!
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Thank you so much for sticking around! I promise things will get very interesting! I will probably rewrite chapter 6 in the next couple days.
6426440 to be honest, i really like your writing style, eve though you really made AJ look OP. but nevertheless, you did well