TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.
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This story is a sequel to My Lady, My Love, My Life
Three years had passed since Rarity and Trixie marriage got married and their lives couldn't be any happier. Right? Rarity is ready to take the biggest step, will Trixie agree?
The events of Please, Don't Go happens an year before. You may read that One-Shot if you haven't already but it's not necessary to understand this fic.
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It's very good I noticed one mistake though.
Should be more not mayor
6062904 Oops
6062981 other than that it's brilliant
6062982 Thank you!
6062998 my pleasure.
Also PM me if you want
6063001 Will do
6063004 awesome
IT's here! IT"S FINALLY HERE!!!!!
Now onto my review.
That Monde pony is a royal cunt bag! God, that bitch pony taking Trixie by the ..... something, or whatever and not only that she had the nerve to say such things about a national hero? Who the hell does this pony think she is!?!
Also I wonder what's with Trixie's eye? I think I'll reread everything else before I continue with this next story. It's your fault for making me wait so long!
But seriously, everypony at the start was really mean! So much hate there. I hope Trixie really puts them in their place at some point for her wife Rarity. I loved the fact the last name was Lulamoon. Rarity Lulamoon. Has a nice ring to it. But aside from my rant, the start was good as I have comet o expect from you Stranger. Well done. You have not disappointed me.
Although to be honest, it takes a lot to disappoint me. Keep up and don't stop until I get some foals from the happy couple!
6064814 Umm, I hope that people don't read your comment until after reading the chapter because I wanted to keep Beau Monde's behavior a secret. It's not your fault, don't worry. I was sure that someone would point that out and I was expecting it
As for Trixie's eye. The reason is in My Lady, My Love, My Life's, Past Can't be Escaped From
I'm sorry, but that's how I see the fashion world. I can be wrong. Yeah, I really don't want to make Rarity's last name "Belle" because she often calls her sister Sweetie Belle. I don't call my brother by his names and surnames!
Thanks! I have the feeiling that you'll love this one
Knowing how good you make you'r "villains" i'm sure you can pull it off. I can already see that she's not to found of same sex couples. Or simply dose not realize that Rarity and Trixie is married.
Starting off with drama will lead to high expectations. I wish you luck
~Tobben
6064993 Oh I will...I will...
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You want me to delete the comment?
6066537 No, leave the comment. It's fine
6065705 Thank you
i am sorry if i forgot what you told me befor, but is this with Children this time? Maybe i can read it tonight, otherwise i have to read it tomorrow. I took a quick look, and it looked like Trixie would have a sister, but i guess i read something the wrong way, well i see it if i read the whole chapter.
6070673 You have to read to understand the 'Sister' thing
6071226 Okay nothing special about the sister thing i noticed, but i think you managed to make us hate that one fashion Mare.
Since this isn´t the fanfiction with Trixie, and her Blood Magic, i am not sure what to say about her eye, and while i am already sad, that it is over soon, i am happy that there is finally the sequel.
I don´t know why, but that fashion thing, and the danger that comes with it´s Dark side, is sometimes more scary then other things i such a story, but maybe that is only because i can image what they would do.
However, i am more curious about the fact, that she maybe get´s foals or not, that is the only thing i can think of if i read
"bring more joy to Carousel Boutique"
edit: .......and i forgot to say i like the chapter.
6072577 I told you!
Beau Monde... she's something, huh?
Blood magic?
Sorry. Everything has an end
Yeah, fashion isn't anything special for me, and I DO think that it has a dark side.
The main plot of this final installment will be revealed in a couple of chapters. In the meantime, my mouth is shut
I'm glad that you enjoyed it so far!
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yes i think there was a fanfiction, probably from someone else, where Trixie had a mental problem, and could only use Blood Magic for a while, and that her eye hurt, did remembered me at that fanfiction.
Well, Beau Monde is a royal pain in the flank. Trixie... that's gonna come and bite you in the butt, methinks.
6074245 Oh, no, it's nothing like that
Somepòny else hurt her eye, in the chapter I previously told you, but it got almost completely healed. One can't say that there's something wrong with her eye, but it will cause her pain whenever she gets angry, that's all
6074296 Poor Rarity
6074296 Agreed. I only read the first chapter and I hated her the moment she started talking! I hope a house falls on her.
6080432 I have kind readers, how nice!
The hell is Trixie doing, liying like that!?! Oh, she's gonna get an earful from Rarity after they promised to be honest with each other. Oh, good she told her she lied. Now i feel relieved.
Heh, guess I jumped the gun on that.
WOW NOW I REALLY HATE THE FUCKING BITCH! WHO DOES SHE THINK SHE IS TALKING TO RARITY LIKE THAT? I was never fond of Rarity until I read your fics, but this just infuriated me. I hope that horrible pony bitch gets what's coming to her. With any luck, - Oh, I just had a wonderful idea. Trixie should get Snips and Snails to go find an ursa to.... bring for show and tell and lead it to Miss Bitchymagee.
That'll teach her.
OK, now that I got that out of my system I loved how the tension is building up! Does she really have that much influence that she can ruin Rarity forever? Despite being a national hero? AND she's friends with Fancy Pants? I can't wait to see what she has planned and how Trixie and Rarity will respond.
Oh, they should send the CMCs after her.That'd be enough to drive anyone mad.
No matter what I know it will be good. You have never disappointed me so far, so i doubt you will ever. Keep up the good work!
And once again I are first commenter! YAY!
6080490 Let's just say that the mare is crazy. She believes to be the center of the fashion world
(No, she won't be killed to become cupcakes 
)
I have the perfect punishment for Beau Monde, don't worry. Everything will be revealed soon!
Hey, if you found out that someone who can help your special someone's business a success is mean, would you be able to tell them? Not to mention if they admire said person
Have a nice day!
6080529 I guess you have a point. I would do anything for the person I love. If it meant helping them succeed in life or business I would do anything for them. As long as it was within the confines of my beliefs. Like i won't go murder someone just because, unless there was a very, very, very, very, good reason for it. But that'd have to be like end of the world scenarios.
Good day to you too!
6080541 There's never a good reason to kill someone!
I suddenly feel uncomfortable around you
6080545 Wha-bu-but I would never!
Killing is the most uncouth act one can commit on another! Rape is right behind it. 
I have to admit though. I feel you're foreshadowing something in the story due to the title. What are you planning!?!
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You WILL tell me what you're planning.
And yes, i know you won't do rape or murder.
6080563 The titlle doesn't say anything you didn't know if you read chapter one. It's adresses Beau Monde, revealing how she is to Rarity
6080585 Guess yo leave me no choice but to wait for the next chapter then.
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I'll be waiting!
6080594 That's right, sit there while I avoid a village getting burnt by the sun
Beau Monde, I really hope you realize you'll be screwing with national heroes and legit badasses. Please, try something. Your destroyed career will be the least of your worries.
You would think speaking bad about one of the elements would bring down someone's carer. Let's see how that goes, shall we.
I would say something else but you would not like it so i'm keeping it to my self for now, need to remind my self of some major facts sometimes.
~Tobben
6082968 You'll see
6083218 I'll read it
And so we start on the plot, always takes a few chapters for a story to relay get going doesn't it.
that was just one try from Beau Monde i'm expecting she will come back fail again try again and then fail for the last time. That is just me tho.
Now that the story have gotten to the point, i wish you luck in writing the rest of it, know i always have you'r back no matter what.
~Tobben
6092772 Thanks
I hope she doesn't die. I hate the bitch but she's still a horrible pony! I wonder what the bitch will do now since she lost her job? no doubt she'll come back to Ponyville to stur up trouble, but I know Trixie and Rarity will put her in her place if she does. Hopefully the Alicorn Amulet is safe cause ponies tend to be drawn to that thing a lot.
I wonder if Trixie would forgive her if she tried to hurt Rarity?
6092772
I have a feeling Beau Monde has just become the next Trixie of the story.
6100362 Hmm, you're not the only one who hopes to see her again
And, I don't think that Trixie would be able to forgive Beau Monde
I knew she bit off more than she could chew. I don't think Beau is done, but she more than deserved that.
My congratulations to Twilight and Fluttershy.
We all know AJ likes to be a dom while Rainbow is a sub.
And Trixie is like a cat land on her feet and she'll be fine, most likely.
Apparently Princess Luna knows.
It was good keep it up.
Wow i'm straight forward today. no matter another chapter of "Stockholm - The Littlest Dazzle" just got up so i'll be off
~Tobben
6122925 It shall all be explained on the next chapter. I'll just say that I got the idea from a certain Appledash fic which I shall not read again due to it being too dark and containing FlutterMac
Flutteryshy and Twilight getting a kid? I can't wait to see the Obsessive compulsive timid sack of joy they manage to pop out of Fluttershy. I Have to admit out of all the ponies I expected to know how to do the spell needed for Trixie, I somehow expected Celestia to do it. Weird?
But now, I wonder what kind of child Trixie and, Rares, will have? Oh, will Monde come and steal the foal!? The horror! The horror! This is a disaster!
6122925 What if they're both the dom and neither is willing to be the submissive one? Mabye that's why they fight so much, despite being together?
6123121
I'll just say that it is possible but, so far Rainbow is doing what AJ is telling her to do, so far she is the submissive one.
~Tobben
6123118 Not Princess Celestia. I think Princess Luna is more fitting because the... process to make a child mostly happens during the night, so...
6123121 I don't know why, but I always see Rainbow Dash as the one getting at least a bit submissive in a relationship with Applejack
Well, looks like Trixie and Rarity have a solution. And give up, Dashie. It'll be easier that way. ;)
So excited. I can't believe I didn't know you made a sequel.
6143629 Maybe there were a lot of updates and you missed mine