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MysteriousStranger


TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.

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Fluttershy has been getting love letters from an anonymous pony that's a lot closer to her than she realized.
My editor and good friend, Blue Dragon, also entered this TwiShy contest so she can't be editing for me this time, I'm on my own so excuse me any gramatical errors!
This is my entry for the TwiShy group's August Dual Contest.

Sequel: Date Helpers Time!

Cover made by Socko. Here's her dA

05/19/18 This is long overdue, but this story was featured in a Youtube video. Here's the link
I apologize for only now remembering to add this link :facehoof:

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Comments ( 59 )

An interesting twist on the "Sweet Surprise" prompt. I like it. I'm just glad I'm not the only one writing. :3

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<3 DarqFox

Ok i must say... this is BEAUTIFUL!!! well done my friend

i love it and yay another TwiShy story :pinkiehappy:

Well written. Where do you find out about these contests anyway? It would be fun to try one sometime.

This story made me want to enter the contest, but i'm too busy with other 2 stories.:raritydespair:
Nice job.

3035649 I had to enter, I want that prize! :flutterrage:
Thank you! :twilightsmile:

Cute :twilightsmile:

More TwiShy is always a good thing

This was very well written! I loved the love letter concept. :twilightsmile:

3036098 Which group you're part of? You're in several.

Good job! I really enjoyed it; you're awesome at writing TwiShy. :heart:

My favorite part of the entry was adding Rainbow Dash and AJ into the mix. RD's part in particular was hilarious, and I really liked the fact that Twilight had Flutters meet her in the clouds. Overall, you did amazing and you should be proud. Good luck with the contest! :twilightsmile:

3036786 Thank you my friend! :pinkiehappy:
That's what's friendship its about, friends helping friends, Applejack and Rainbow Dash were needed :twilightsmile:
Good luck to you too! :yay:

:fluttershyouch: :heart: :twilightsmile:
I used to be more of a flutterdash fan, but this totes changes everything
:heart: it!

3037900 I'm glad to hear that! Welcome to the light side! :raritystarry:

Omg! You used my image! xD Lol I feel so... honored.
:twilightblush:

3037955 I know I should have asked but I couldn't wait to submit it! :twilightsheepish:
I gave you credit anyway, it is a beautiful pic! TwiShy ones are hard to find :yay:

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I could try making a over for this y'know. :3
I shall read this. :pinkiehappy:

3037987 And I hope you enjoy it, Please, let me know! :pinkiehappy:

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I'm sure I will! I'll see what I can do. c: :twilightsmile:

Do you feel like making a sequel to this yet? Just kidding, I'll be watching you so I will know if you do.:pinkiehappy:

AJ can't lie but that just means she has to withhold the truth.

nice there aren't too many shy love stories and this is the 1st twishy i think i have read

3039356 That its really sad, TwiShy is a really sweet shipping :pinkiesad2:
I hope it wasn't the last fic you read! :twilightsmile:

3038335 Right now I have other projects in mind but it's a possibility :raritywink:
Thats true! :ajsmug:

Very sweet. I so enjoy reading and writing about ships that one may not think about at first. The next installment of my 'Bookends' series has one such ship. Keep up the good work and know that this story does deserve to be continued. :twilightsmile:

3040002 Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

That was so sweet that I cracked a tooth smiling so hard.:pinkiehappy:
How does one swoon a lady without the use of words and fancy dinners?:trollestia:

3046206 I'm glad you liked it! :yay:
And I don't know :pinkiecrazy:

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Oh pony biscuits, I just imagined asking Sombra and Chrysalis for romantic advise... :pinkiecrazy:

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YOU'RE NAME IS SOCKO ON FIMFICTION?!?!

You never fuckin told me you had a fimfiction account, yushi!!
You're such a poophead for not telling me D:

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Well you never asked! D:<

LOL I'm so happy that you have a fimfiction account too! :pinkiehappy:

Lets write stories for each other. x3

3061498

You stinky poophead, I'm not good at writing!! :'(

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And how can come up with such a question if I have no freakin idea that you're actually into writing?! D:<<

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Weeeellll excccccccccccccuuuuussseeeeeee ME! Princess! :trixieshiftright:

lol I dunno. x3 :twilightblush:

I had no idea you were into writing! :derpyderp1:

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Sorry. :'C But why you no try? :fluttercry:

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Gosh don't make me cry too D':

If ya want to write a story together, I'll definitely try, but my grammar isn't that great...

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Yeah. We could give each other stories and ideas!! C: :pinkiehappy:

Hm..I feel the whole act of " you earned a date" was a bit strange coming from Fluttershy, Rarity yes, but Fluttershy?

3123355 Let's say she spends too much time with Rarity :raritywink:

Wait a minute... Rainbow said she talked to Applejack and was told that Applejack didn't know what was wrong with Twilight, yet Twilight went to Applejack and told her personally that she liked Fluttershy. Does that mean that Rainbow wants Fluttershy too?

3170710 Oh Celestia, no! Applejack did tell Rainbow Dash about Twilight's crush on Fluttershy but Rainbow didn't tell Fluttershy to protect her friends, she lied for Applejack.

Very sweet. ^_^ I don't think this needs continuation; it's just right as is.

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