This story is a sequel to My Lady, My Love, My Life
Rarity has been too focused on her work recently, staying up all hours off the night, barely getting any sleep. No matter what Trixie does, Rarity doesn't listen, so she is forced to take drastic measures.
What will happen to the couple and what will become of their relationship? You'll have to read to find out!
Rarixie One-Shot, which takes place an year after the events of My Lady, My Love, My Life.
Cover is temporal due to a mistake regarding the jewelry. They should have been using bracelets, not rings.
Chapters (1)
That was a nice break from my depressing stories. I always wondered what kind of issues would rise from this relationship. I figured Trixie would have been the one to cause all the trouble first.
I'm glad to see Spike opening up to her like a friend should!
I know he resolved his issues with Trixie before but to see the change is nice. Though I was expecting him to still be distant from the mare. As fro Rarity being the problem, that was not surprising but still a bit of a shocker. She suffering from what I like to call "Applejack no want helpism."
Looking forward to that third part you promised us!
5800558 Depressing stories are fine, as long as you don't abuse of them
This happens an year after the previous fic, so, it's understandable that Spike closer to Trixie since he has already made amends with her in the previous fic. He might not be as close as he is with the rest of the gang, but he doesn't despises her anymore
I wanted to make her the reason of their arguements more times, but, I wrote her in a way were her goal is to make Rarity happy
Trixie already caused problems before falling in love with Rarity, and once after she fell for her. Her date with a stallion
I'll start working on the last part soon, thanks for commenting!
This was good
I have few words for this, this was relay just cute and dramatic, the kind of thing you do best.
So i'll just say 5/5 and say good luck on the upcoming sequel.
(My lack of words is due to work on my own fic, that thing just don't want to be done)
~Tobben
5801512 5 of 5? That's new, thanks!
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ops i forgot to add two zero's.
Jokes aside the story was good and somehow you manged to squeeze ONE tear out of me.
~Tobben
5802007 I'm glad to hear that
Sorry about the delayed reply mate but you know why. Anyway the story was really good and well worth the wait it has made me want the next installment even more
5802468 Yeah, I knew why. Don't worry
Thank you for your kind comment. Can you see now why I couldn't show you the cover before?
5803095 yes I can haha
I have to say... I love love love
your stories!! Can't stop reading them!!! You are sooooooo good at writing them!!!!! I wish I could write like that!
5949121 That means a lot to me, thanks!
I'm glad to hear that this shipping is receiving more love
nice to see a sequel, but because there is the chance for a bad ending i donĀ“t really want to read it at the moment, i want to feel sad because the chapter could be a very sad one. If i really like something then i react to it stronger.
5986842 Althought it's setted after My Lady, My Love, my Life, this fic isn't the end. There's one multi-chapter fic left for this arc so you can already guess the ending of this one. The 'sad' tag is there for a reason, though
5986851 well okay, if there is still more after this, then i keep track of this story, but i have to read others first, i searched for to many fanfictions.
5987477 I understand
Such an emotional read...
*begins to tear*
... I <3 it...
6472779 Thank you, that means a lot to me
This is amazingly beautiful.
8865885 Thank you so much! I mean it
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Your welcome keep up the good work.
This story was so incredibly lovely! I loved it. The drama, the emotions, the angst, the suffering, they were so well portrayed. Gosh my poor heart didn't stop beating in anguish. You trully have a lovely writing style. I'm impressed every word you write is so good. I don't even have words to describe my feelings. But even if I'm new in this fandom and I don't really know the characters that much, the way in which you write is good enough to help me to understand the whole story. I agree with most of the comments. It was beautiful, from the beginning to the end a wonderful masterpiece. Thank you very much! ;) See you around.
8907897 Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I still feel pride with this one. I'll be seeing you around too!
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It would be interesting to see a what if chapter. Like what if Rarity tried to work to get her mind off of Trixie leaving. She passes out from the stress and winds up in the hospital. Something like that. It would be interesting to write considering the amount of time since you wrote a sequel to this already.
8941332 I don't know. That never crossed my mind, to be honest
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It's just an idea. I enjoyed the whole series either way.
8941401 I'll definetly keep it in mind. No promises, though. I do have other stories in mind, including the one I'm currently writting
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Understandable. I enjoy the stories you are doing now and I am sure that I will enjoy stories to be created. Keep up the good work.
8941452 Thanks! It really means a lot