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MysteriousStranger


TwiShy, AppleDash and Rarixie lover and writer. Also a gamer. Something else you need to know is that I'm strongly against Alicorn Twilight.

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After one of Pinkie Pie's parties, Twilight decides to help her friend clean up. They end up spending a lot more time together, and nothing will ever be the same between them.

Cover by qaxis

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Comments ( 51 )

Then who do you normally ship pinkie with?

Anypony, this was an experiment :twilightsheepish:

how discoveries are made: an experiment goes good.
And this was a good read. :twilightsmile:

Couldn't fall asleep.
Got up to start writing new story.
Came across this.
Glad I stayed up. :pinkiehappy:

In the last sentence, I didn't read that Pinkie went to her room at first, so I pictured her turning around and face planting. Nice job.

I'm sorry for not getting around to commenting on this earlier--I fell asleep :twilightblush:--but it was great! I love Twinkie, (as you know by now) and this was very cute for a quick one-shot. My favorite part was when they were dancing. I'm glad you decided to write it, and I did enjoy it very much.

Also, it was nice of you to include how Pinkie gained her feelings for Twilight. That scene was adorable, too. Very fluffy. :pinkiesmile: Anyway, you did a good job, buddy! I can't wait to read more from you. :scootangel: As a sidenote... There's never enough Twinkie in the world. ;)

2078564 I'm glad you liked it, I hope this shows my appreciation for what are you doing for me! :raritywink:
Twinkie is very popular, it doesn't needs another author, I'll stick with TwiShy for now! :twilightsmile:
Once again, I'm glad you liked it! :pinkiehappy:

so let me get this straight you dont ship this couple then who do you see pinkie with? i ship raripie too i ship her with everyone but stallions.

2079574 I really don't know... Maybe Rainbow Dash a little :twilightblush:

aww this was cute! :pinkiehappy:. rofl i dont exactly have a fav twilight pairing i like her with all the mane six but rarity. but i do love her with pinkie. they just mesh so well when its written right. :twilightsmile: and this was definitely done right!.

2079938 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:
If you liked it, check my other stories, maybe you can actually see Twilight with somepony else! :raritywink:

2080007 :applejackunsure: i already read your other story. rofl. :pinkiehappy: if you check your "Future Plans" blog you might remember the fact i posted a comment on that you responded to it too. :twilightsheepish:

2080031 I'm oblivious sometimes... :facehoof:
Don't tell me you are watching me too :twilightblush:

2080038 um ehehehe well :eeyup:. :pinkiesmile: it's ok.

Nice little story :yay:
Although I still just can't see twilight and pinkie pie ever getting together. Pinkie Pie is just way too hectic and energetic for twilight, but either way good story :twilightsmile:

2080902 It's possible if written right :raritywink:
Check Blue Dragon's, it inspired me for this story! :pinkiesmile:

2080927 Yeah your probably right when I get a chance I'll have to check out Blue Dragons's story. :twilightsmile:

2081019 Please do, you won't regret it! :twilightsmile:
She writes them very well! :pinkiehappy:

2080902 i don't get flutterdash so i know that feeling fluttershy is too timid and sensitive to be with somepony like Dash. I just cant see flutterdash happening then again i cant see fluttershy with anyone other then Rarity or Applejack. either way twipie and appledash are my OTP so i may be biased :rainbowlaugh:

You know I usually only prefer pinkiedash but great story

well; I liked your Fluttershy x Twilight more... but this story is actually kind of nice. A lot to enjoy really :pinkiehappy:

2348687 Thanks, I like the other one too but I gave this shipping a shot! :pinkiehappy:

Ship ALL the ponies!

Nice story :twilightsmile:

i used to be stuck between twishy or flutterdash but now I no it shud be twipie and flutterdash
:pinkiesmile: :heart: :twilightsmile:
:fluttershyouch: :heart: :rainbowdetermined2:

3133460 Noooo! :raritydespair:
TwiShy, come back to TwiShy, I just did this for a friend! I don't ship FlutterDash! :fluttershbad:

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Comment from a grammar (and spelling) nazi:

Your comment should be:
I used to be stuck between TwiShy or FlutterDash, but now I know it should be TwiPie and FlutterDash.

Firs. Of this have been on my RL list fore some time now finally got time to reading it. :twilightsheepish:
Second. Twipie is not my favorite, hell i have a problem to ship pinkie with anyone to random. But i will find someone for her at some point :rainbowdetermined2:
Third. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :raritycry::raritycry: you got all my feels in this as always. This is why you are a inspiration to me :scootangel:

3817707 And, as I said in the Author's note, I don't ship them! :rainbowlaugh:

Loved the story but I don't like it when both ponies already have feelings for each other. I'm the type of pony that likes relationships with development.:raritywink:

5220306 This was just a gift for a friend who likes this pairing. I really don't ship this couple so, the less people like this fic, the better :rainbowlaugh:
Thanks for commenting! :twilightsmile:

nice story i enjoyed it and ill admit that twipie is growing on me i more or less ship those who are opposite of each other on the mane six like flutterdash and rarijack but i also ship pinkiedash, twishy, and the occasional appledash

5487739 I wrote this fic as a gift for a friend. I don't ship them and I hate to see someone shipping them instead of Twishy because of this fic... :applejackunsure:
Also, I hate FlutterDash :ajbemused:
But, thanks for commenting! :pinkiehappy:

5487748 well sorry mate but its my personnal opinion and im really into opposites attract

5487760 I know... those relationships can't work out, but, if you ship them...

5487771 stoppit right there ya know that if ya mess with me i love shipping people together of course i wont do it on this site id do it on wattpad most likely AWWW i can already see it now id be so cute

5487794 Umm, what? Really, I didn't understand :twilightblush:

5487826 shush and i wont write a story about you

5487897 good though i just might anyways :trixieshiftright: cause im judt that evil mwhahahah

5489237 id check my wattpad periodicly if i were you or i might make it pony related and post it here. who knows?:ajsmug:

5489284 oh you are so fun to mess with i love it

Rare ship, and you pulled it off. You know, there's another rare ship i'd love to see sail more, and that's Rarlestia; I just don't see An apple getting with the princess, unless that apple is big mac :P

5679902 Rare ship? Unfortunately, this is a very popular shipping! :pinkiegasp:
Also, Rarelestia sounds like RarityxPrincess Celestia. What do you mean by an Apple? :rainbowhuh:

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