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Abusive. The word still shocked Fluttershy's mind. How could he have been abusive, when he had never even touched her?

And how could she heal after she had left him?

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That was... really effective. Great wordplay, great portrayal, great story as far as I'm concerned. Have a like from me!

Kudos!

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Thank you so much for the kind comment!

This was wonderful, Silent.

Wow. Deep. I LOVE it!!

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Thank you so much. It's... personal, and it means a lot that you read it and commented, it really does.
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Thank you very much, Cyne!

Great story. Any chance for a sequel?

Hit me close to home... I was in exactly the same position, I thought the same things. "How could it be an abusive relationship, he hasn't even seen me face to face, just online. How could it be abusive, he hasn't laid a finger on me, sure he gets angry, but he always apologizes."

Thank you for writing this, more people need to realize abusive relationships are more than just physical abuse. I spent a while stuck in an emotionally abusive relationship, it did the same, it ran me ragged, twisted my mind, destroyed my emotions.

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Sure. Once more time has passed, I'll tell you what happens next.

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That's why I wrote it. I'm so so sorry that you've been in the same situation, and I agree, more people should know that someone can abuse you without touching you.

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I only wish someone had explained it to me sooner, it took me a long time to realize it.

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I'm still trying to accept it, myself. It's not the sort of abuse that most people think of. All my scars are mental, and they don't show.

You did a good job explaining the subject of emotional abuse with Fluttershy's relationship. It was good that at the end she was with friends truly who cared about her.

Mine actually wasn't anything like this, but at the same time it still wasn't Healthy, y'know? I look back on it as a fact now, and keep that album of memories closed. I acknowledge it. I look through a couple pages sometimes, but it is a thing Of The Past and I am indifferent to it. I look upon it without passion, without happiness, without any positive emotion - it was A Thing That Happened, and it made me happy. But it is gone to time now.

Thank you.

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