I'm here to write my way into your hearts and infect your minds.
This story is a sequel to A World Without a Rainboom
Midnight Strike, bearer of the element of Loyalty, has gone missing and rumors Discord will return soon. Will she return to stop him if he's released or will they quash the rumors before they get out of hand?
Super thanks to Rancor for being a great proof reader and inspiration assistant.
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Two in one day!
Lol
love this touch
So is, well spoiler but are the elements at twlight a house wait. She dose t live in ponyville dose she?
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Lol.
This story line only follows some of the major world events.
Twilight, last I checked, is traveling with Trixie...
oops!
You say it alot what is #25
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Boast Busters.
Oh yea... I remember.
So far i'm loving the story, it's a new and creative take on alternate paths for our favorite ponies. 10/10 -would edit again.
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You should promote it
6128956
how?
I don't even know what that is...
Sounds like song "healthy" cereal.
Promote
I'm talking that name no one else can have it.
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a healthy song that you're taking?
Habla English?
6129576 shameless self promotion Bureau, equestrian Writers guild, ect.
So, Fluttershy's landed in a "Planet of the NIMH" mashup. Needs a bit of clean up but seems like an interesting direction.
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Wow, totally forgot about nihm...
I'm actually not consciously making references but maybe I should... 80's shows sneaking their way into my writing? ... Nah.
What.....What...
Yea you we're right..
So are the mice like normal size or like pony size?
I don't like tests
Hmm.
I love IT!
Mmm Grits yummy, want some right now.
Best chapter in a Long time.
So I have reread most of the chapters and I think your about half way done with the story?
And I like how your getting, more into the characters, you have added some depth.
You have grown as a writer your chapters are getting longer and more complex.
But, you have started to add much more detail on some things than their needs to be...
There's one thing Ivan told you before.... this is a sequel and like most sequels it is not... it's not the same... world in chaos is not even coming close to A World Without A Rainboom...
But most, what's after a sequel? The third one... but most of the time the third installment is just as good or even better than the first one.
Choas just doesn't have the same feel, what's going on in the rest of the world what's discord doing?
And my final thought, I know you can't really control this but your chapters are becoming slower and slower
It used to be twice a week then once and now? It's been a couple days...
Please don’t leave us hanging. I need to know how this ends.
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... The joke was on him, but read what Zecora had to say again.
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Who is the father?
It was a nice chapter, but the pun at the end was really old. That’s a little downside to an otherwise great update.
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Thanks.
But, as you may have guessed, that's notthe end of it.
Interesting chapter to say the least. Not entirely sure how magic plays into endurance since humans, slow as we may be, are better at going long distances, in fact humans are one of the best long distance runners, although I doubt Scoots is pacing herself or an experienced runner.
Both of your stories have been great so far and I've really enjoyed both of them.
I just can't stop enjoying this version of Dash.
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Thanks!
It warms my heart to hear that.
I'm actually fond of this RD too.
She's happy, peppy, not pinkie happy, obsessed with Fluttershy’s safety.
This arc is so much fun to work with.
I mean, I'm essentially creating Dash in a new way.
And you're watching her grow into herself mentally.
And the others too, each on their own way. But Dash is my fav... well, human Scootaloo is catching up.
Oh yeah, humans are great at endurance, with experience and training. The scene had her running through a forest shortly after getting a new body. A child human with no shoes running on instinct. Ouch. I covered her balance issues in the last chapter.
Update pls? I finished the prequel, now I want to read the full sequel!
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Go ahead, I'm gonna start updating this till it's caught up and finished
7470382 Waitin' for the new chapter now. Just finished reading the latest chapter.
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Thoughts so far?
7471959 ...Beautiful.
Is this going to ever be finished? I would love to read the rest of the story. :/
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Knowing it's still being read inspires me to continue the plan.
7752932 To be honest, I am already waiting for half a year to read the rest of the story ^^' I like to finish things I start reading and liked :D
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I had no idea...
I'm apologizing and tomorrow I'll start the next chapter.
7755512 Don't stress yourself! I waited already so long and I can wait a bit longer too. (Also I have to reread some of the chapters again so I know what exatly happened)
7755526 me to, kinda forgot some of the changes that were made to them
I- well... this is certainly out of left field.
7761814 Chaos!!