A pony is in a race and does her best. She tries her hardest at least until the end. This is how she copes with loss.
Also, a quick one shot.
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Mocha Star
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Mocha Star
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Good transmission of the first person experience to the audience!
Cute characterization!
Clever twist! I accept that into my collective headcanon notes!
Well written!
Hmm... interesting.
Good job! This is the first 1st person fic I've read in a while and I liked it. The increase of pessimistic thoughts in the face of failure is very relatable and it is true to life in that things are not as bad as you think they will be. This and a cute ending gets a like from me.
This was neat. I've wondered about these rules myself. Nice short story
You can has review!
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Thanks, and this is way early.
I can even rewrite the whole thing and darn near double its length with the time and skill I've gotten over the years.
I don't even like the name I chose. Bumble Buzz, really young Mocha? I am disappoint.
I appreciate the honesty and for a old story this is once I'm still proud of, regardless. It reminds me of how far I've come from then to now, and how much farther I have to go still.
Thanks, and you're a great reviewer!