Vinyl walked into the living room, singing to herself. "I'm burnin', burnin'. I got a fever. I know for sure - there ain't no cure." She stopped, staring at an orange pegasus filly and a spotted colt kissing. Eye twitching behind her shades, she walked up to them, speaking in a stern tone. "Break it up. Now."
They looked up at her, confused. The filly spoke up, curiosity getting the better of her. "Why? It's just kissing, isn't it?"
She turned her gaze to the window, glad her glasses hid her emotions. "Just...not here, alright? Not in this house."
They looked at each other, then, shrugging, walked out, just as an elated yellow filly walked in, almost literally grinning from ear to ear.
Vinyl stared at her for a few moments before sighing, levitating a glass of lemonade from the kitchen. "I take it Featherweight asked you out?"
She nodded happily, bouncing up and down in joy. "He did! Our first date is going to be tonight!" She did a little spin, bounding back out of the room.
She sighed, walking over to the couch, and, sitting on it, started drinking her sour beverage. "...I went to bed, I was thinking about you...and how it felt when I finally found you...it's like a movie playing over in my head...d-don't wanna look cause I know how it ends..."
A solitary tear rolled down her cheek, crashing onto the floor in the form of a broken heart.
Octavia sat in the library, knowing that Twilight wouldn't mind her practicing there while she was away. She carefully held her bow, gently lining it up to the strings, and, ever so fluidly-
"You know, you could've asked."
Screech. Octavia turned to the entrance of the library, seeing her purple unicorn friend. She smiled sheepishly, rubbing the back of her head. "Spike let me in. Sorry, but you weren't here, and..."
She held up a hoof, a small smile on her face. "No problem. After all, what are friends for?" She giggled, moving over to a chair. Nodding to the grey mare, she gave her total attention. "Please, continue. It was sounding good." She stuck her tongue out in a teasing manner.
Octavia laughed quietly to herself, beginning once again. Only for you, Twilight.
Fluttershy was sitting with Winona, making sure she was fed. "Now, is there anything else you need?"
Winona shook her head, smiling at her. "Nope! Ya know how ta feed me pretty darn well, Fluttershy!"
She smiled at the canine, gently petting her head with a wing. Ever since the rap battle with Angel and Gummy, the timid mare had given most of her animal friends a headset, so they could communicate freely and clearly with her. Of course, some of them decided not to use it, but that was fine, too. She loved talking to her friends either way.
"Ah take it ya used some kinda contraptionology on Winona, 'Shy?"
She leaped in the air in surprise, turning around to see the voice's owner. She smiled at the orange mare, shaking her head. "It wasn't me. It was Vinyl and Twilight's invention." She stared at a tree for a moment before clopping a hoof on the ground. "Oh!" She flit over to her saddlebag, pulling out a thick stack of paper. She walked back over to the cowpony, a small blush on her cheeks. "...my part's done...um...h-have fun with the...sensualstuffokaybye!" With that, she was gone, leaving the incomplete novel on a nearby table.
Applejack shook her head, chuckling softly to herself. "Ain't that just like Fluttershy." She took the stack and walked into the farmhouse, heading for her room - and the typewriter that await her there.
"...Miss Scratch, are you okay?"
Vinyl snapped out of her reverie, finally noticing the two ponies standing in front of her. She sighed, picking up her phone. "I'll tell you two the winner..."
"No."
She blinked, looking up at the cornflower-blue mare. "...beg pardon?"
"Trixie said no." She moved forward, a concerned expression on her face. "Trixie is concerned with your sudden state of sadness. As well as the tears you are crying. Is something wrong?"
Vinyl opened her mouth to speak, but nothing came out. She tried again, using all of her willpower to force something, anything, from her lips. "...I'm fine. Honest."
Trixie frowned, staring at the other unicorn for the longest time. Finally, she closed her eyes, shaking her head. "Trixie doesn't believe you, but she can't force you to talk about it." She motioned with a hoof, sighing gently. "May as well tell us who won."
She quickly looked through her phone, quite interested in a few of the comments. "...'Steven Colbert'? Is he related to 'Coltbert'?" As she went further down, her breath caught in her throat. "...E..."
She pushed past the name, eventually getting to a couple more interesting votes. "...Big Mac?" She paused, thinking about the red stallion for a few moments. ...I would love to go on a date with him... She sighed, hanging her head a bit, dejected. ...too bad he's already with somepony...lucky mare...
She counted up the last of the votes, ignoring one of them, not even sure how to comment on somepony named 'Bilbo Baggins'. She looked up at them, her face strictly serious. "...the winner, with a count of eighty-one to sixty-eight...is..." She pointed a hoof, smirking slightly. "...you."
If you're wondering why this was late, or why I suddenly have so much detail (comparatively), it's because I've been playing 'Fallout: New Vegas', among other games. ^^;
...wait, this is a bad time for the author's comments. Oops! :p
Back to the story!~
The blue unicorn stared at the hoof, pointed directly at her. "...me?"
Vinyl nodded, chuckling softly. "Yeah, you!"
Trixie turned to Featherweight, smiling softly at him. "...you...you did well." She bowed, blushing softly. "Please forgive Trixie for being brash earlier."
He grinned, holding out a hoof to her. "I'm willing to forgive if you are."
With the sound of his words, the ex-showmare fainted. The other two stared at her, before Vinyl decided to speak up. "Maybe you should keep your voice in reserve for your girlfriend?"
He sheepishly smiled, rubbing the back of his head.
"Give my best to Derpy and Snowflake when they get back, mkay?" She smiled at him as he nodded, turning back to her thoughts, with a new one added: How does his sister stay up in that cloud home of theirs?
Okay, now it's the proper time for author's notes. ^w^
I'm going to be starting college the 27th, so I'm not sure how often new battles will come up, much less new chapters. And I also need someone who could create title cards. ^^; I no longer have photoshop, so I don't have a way of making new ones...so I'm pretty much limited to the characters I already have cards for.
Also, I blame Bethesda and Valve for making such addicting games! x3
I think that's about it. Oh, and the next couple battles are probably gonna be a bit unexpected. *le shrug* And I apologize for the lame attempt at feels. :\
Have a nice day/night/whenever!
Enigma out.~
Yeah trixie won
Trixie won? awesome!
also, I would volunteer to make title cards, but i dont have photoshop either, and im not sure my ms paint skills are up to the task ^^'
Called it. Trixie won. By DQ but it would have been hers anyway.
Hehehe, the author's notes in the middle of the chapter was funny.
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Dude, I had that same feel when I caught up with 2009 and played Borderlands. Now I'm going to be even more distracted as Borderlands 2 comes out.
I could try to make the cards...
What do you want/need?
I liked your attempt at feels.
That is all.
Journcy Out.
YAY! Trixie=best pony. As simple as that.
But Vinyl... everything will be okay. Don't cry. And Tavi...
I wonder what's wrong. And hopefully more Trixie. I love her.
I know how you feel...OK lots of people know how you feel, the Mann vs machine update is going to take up alot of my pony reading time
I'll be starting college college on the 27th as well. Good luck to you. Senior year was a bad time to start wondering about penning any works.
EDIT:
I'm talking about myself, not trying to rub salt in your wound.
1101879True Dat
Yes! Yes! Trixie won! Of course, there was never any doubt.
Don't wake me by Skillet
I love that song
Good luck with college
Another awesome rap.
*clap*
*clap*
*clap*
I gave my vote to the pony I despise the most.
Yet I don't regret it.
I'm weird.
Fallout: New Vegas? Have you read Fallout: Equestria yet?
OH GOD SKILLET REFERNCE
Stephen Coltbert is better than all backround ponies combined. Come at me.
You've been playing fallout alot?
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1 new vegas is awesome.
2good luck with college
Screech. Octavia turned to the entrance of the library, seeing her purple unicorn friend. She smiled sheepishly, rubbing the back of her head. "Spike let me in. Sorry, but you weren't here, and..."
She held up a hoof, a small smile on her face. "No problem. After all, what are foalhood friends for?" She giggled, moving over to a chair. Nodding to the grey mare, she gave her total attention. "Please, continue. It was sounding good." She stuck her tongue out in a teasing manner.
Octavia laughed quietly to herself, beginning once again. Only for you, Twilight.
Continuity error with Twi's past. No friends but Shining Armor.
>goes to the Big Empty
>loads up on priceless weaponry
>goes back to the wasteland and immediately gets irradiated, losing ten pounds of storage space
FFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-
1103554 It's possible Octavia was her friend for a while, then Octavia left to go somewhere, and then they weren't able to keep in touch for a while.
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is it wrong for me to love skillet enough to mention one of their songs in my story?
1104151 It's not wrong at all
Make more
1104151 hell no it's not wrong! Make more man!
Btw love the fic, keep it up!
And Trixe won, her fan-support outweighing the flaws in her rap. It's such a shame, but I expected this would happen.
1104426 Unfortunately yes it was to be highly expected. In my opinion she lost before the battle begun due to challenging a kid. Also, saw a comment saying Morality..... This is the internet, morals and whatnot aren't for rap battles. Rap battles you're supposed to be as harsh as you can while also keeping up a rhyme. Featherweight, his raps pretty much show in a way that he's had a taste of the real world. Though them making up at the end instead of the usual "the loser must do something of the winner's request" That had me, after reading that they both won there.
If you have access to a computer, I can suggest downloading GIMP. It is almost exactly like photoshop, only it's free. And there are MLP brushes available through deviantart.
Be this a suggestion of family? Much approval to the idea.
Doctor Whovves Vs Derpy Whooves (receives slap from Derpy) uhh I mean Ditzy Do
side note:Them as represented in Doctor Whooves and Assistant not in other fanfics or audio series for the propose of clarity.
1104051 who said they met before nightmare moon appeared? maybe they met in Ponyville.
1106039 Foalhood friends aren't 18+ years old normally, I assume.
1106060 where does it say foalfriends?
1106073 Huh...doesn't anymore. It did before, so maybe the author changed it.
Sigh, I was really hoping that Featherweight had won, oh well...
Feels is feels, bro. And I feel them feels.
i want a cadence/ chrysalis rap battle. prease?
I totally could not place the song Vinyl was singing even though I knew the lyrics. So I proceeded to sing the lyrics. And then I remembered the song...well, once I got to the chorus. But the fact that Vinyl likes Skillet just confirms my want of cosplaying her for Canterlot Gardens.
Anyway...dear Celestia, I love this fic.
1102466
Who's Steven Colbert?
1102466
And who's Skillet?
1105808
Why can't Derpy rhyme? I'm sure she'd get help from Ditzy...
I thought it would never happen.
I thought that people just wouldn't do it.
But after all this time.
Effort.
Feels.
And rhyming,
MY WAIFU FINALLY WON A RAP BATTLE!!!
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1110037
What?
1110122
You didn't know who Stephen Cobert is, hence I posted a picture showing my dissappoint in you.
1110730
What picture? There's no picture here,
Aw, I feel bad for Vinyl, her and Octy are one of my favorite ships. Hope they work things out.
1110004
I said as depicted in Doctor Whooves and Assistant Derpy is Ditzys Nickname
1102466
Including Applejack?
I'll do the cards if you need someone to