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MIKEANTHONY321
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Good story, but I think it kind of abruptly changed into a mystery. Also, peeing the floor? That put a picture into my mind that I didn't want to see.
The dialogue is a little hard to read, but if you separated the speakers it would be better, otherwise good story!
Also, the punctuation was a bit funky at places. Good overall, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Nice job, you just need some separation and a little editing. But overall, I wanna see what happens next!
Interesting story!
i can't wait reading the next part.
Keep up the Good Work
Well done! Bad luck was always one of my best themes in fiction.
Can't wait for ch four!!!! Keep up the great work!
"Rainbow didn’t dress in anything."
but Rainbowdash always dresses in style!
Thats mean the wuahahahaha thing
Loved the story
Coconut. o3o
How the heck did she not notice? Seems very weird to me...
Only two words to say:LOVED IT
739434
If you want to see more, there's a sequel to this story I'm currently writing, called A Wish in Reality. You should check it out!
To be honest, the way you write had me a bit touch and go there for a while, but as I neared the ending it got much better. My advice is to keep improving.
726235
Take this from a girl were weird. I dont think Dash cared about what was going on
Only 13 year's old and already making some awesome fic's?
*Sniff* They grow up so fast
i waz like " what the heck theres nothing wrong with coconusts?"
Now i know the truth....
TWILIGHT IS A COCONUT HATER
i is weird
I thought Angel bunny was a boy
Um....uh.....hmmm...let's see....nah I got nothin
Best last words ever
twilight you should believe in your friends
twilight what RD and Flash does in NONE of your damned business
Stop being so nosy
726235 you'd be surprised at how many women don't know there pregnant till about a couple months after their 'knocked up'
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Your story's are amazing I love them a big well done :D
T.peters
I wonder if twilight and fluttershy are going to be okay
After reading I have to say, yay twilight and fluttershy were okay :D
T.peters
It's nice to hear rainbow has a stallion friend, twilight should be happy for her then again se does seem jealous since she has been hopeing for a colt friend. and rainbow dash just got one in five days oh how I'm loving the story already
T.peters
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Thank you! But my stories receive a lot of Dislikes, unlike yours. I've always wondered what I've been doing wrong.
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I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it! The story has three sequels, so that should keep you busy for a while.
Omg! Rainbow is pregnant how exciting, well for a start reading about both of there manes made me realise that sex happend and rainbow dash wasn't a vergan anymore. twilight doesn't need to be all over protective. if rainbow is happy then her friends should be. flash sounds really nice abit to far in the relationship but who cares its love. Your story's are amazing I'm loving forward to reading them all.
T.peters
This story was awesome a big well done a favourite and liked I loved it. I can't wait to read more of them.
T.peters
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Thanks man!
1433246 you,re very welcome. It saddened me with your talent that you receiving dislikes
I however loved your story's and sequels from start to finish. and can't wait for more again a big,big well-done keep it up. 
plus the 3 sequels did keep me busy and were all read and I must say, time well spent.
T.peters
rainbow87dash is right.
Its said multiple times throughout the show: Angel is a dude.
Easy mistake regardless. Who name's a male "Angel"?
1453753
I apologize about that.
The rest of the story was good, right?
1500936
...Awkward...
Dawwww
Awesome story.
HOLY BUCK! THAT WAS SO AWESOME
i just wanted to keep reading and reading and its 3:24am here grr no sleep tonight im gonna read the other stories you wrote
you have a great life ahead of you dude you got every element of a good story all together 
i leave
yea cuz everyone knows eating coconut is a sign of pregnancy
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The coconut means that Rainbow is getting weird cravings, which is a sign of pregnancy.
I don't know if Rainbow's ever eaten a coconut in her life.
LOL they have phones...
Wow...your 13? and came up with something as awesome as this story? I'm 15 and really bad and grammar and famous for not finishing my stories
Twilight actually does have a basement.
And then Thunder Flash was all like
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I reckon Derpy's behind it all...
As soon as she had 'gained a little weight' I knew she was pregnant and then the mood swings...ah, mood swings...
ur 13??? damn, u write good
Very good story sir :)