This story is a sequel to Twilight's Experiments: The War of Mann Co.
Our favorite cast of hoofed mercenaries have returned in the sequel to Team Fortress 2's biggest bloodbath! Now, they are forced once again to fight against each other! But, with a newly-sparked relationship between human and pony, how will their relationship hold up when a new threat faces the company of Mann Co? Friends will be made, lives will be lost, lips will be shared, and piss will be thrown in the never-ending battle for dominance! Who will win the fight, and who will go home bloody?
Chapters (19)
glad to see a seque :D
FINALLY!!! I've been so excited about this ever since you said that there would be a sequel! I think this is one of your best, if not THE best, Twilight's Experiments you have done (even if there's only 2...) and will ever do. I love it, keep doing it, etc... I
it!
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Thank you! The encouragement is very helpful to me!
Please add hats to this story for all of our sakes.
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Sure! I'll definitely do that, along with perhaps some Strange weapons and Unusuals. S'gonna be interesting!
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Very Welcome, Sir!
GHOSTLY GIBUS.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
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Pfft...heehee.
The horror!
HATZ! HATZ EVERYWHERE! I was disappointed when there weren't any hats in the first story, but you fixed it! YAY!
Hunh. Same weather here. Negative 20 windchill, yaaay.
Okay, so...um....I have to remember that the next time I see a BLU Scout, I have to brutally murder him. I'll make a side note, just for poor Fluttershy.
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Emotions. Emotions are good.
NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAMN YOU BLU SCOUT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
..l... BLU SCOUT MUST DIE.
I am enjoying this story quite a bit.
My only consern at the moment is all attention is mainly on Shy, Dash and Twi but not much on everyone else. I think it would be nice to dive into the others persetive. Like what does Pyro and Pinkie do for fun while they wait for the counter to go down? Do Heavy and Mac have some sort of strength battle? Does Demo temp Zecora to try his drink or better yet does Zecora try to get Demo off the booze? Could AJ and Engi talk about how life was to live now? And is both Spys trying to woo the heart of Rarity while she herself is playing them for her own ammusment?
As much as I love how the interaction of the charicters are great at the moment, I want love to see more from the ones out of the spotlight.
But not as much as the inevitable Flutterage thats going to happen very soon >=D
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I love your feedback. Some of these ideas are brilliant!
Strangely, I was just thinking about that exact same problem as I was writing this chapter. Even I have come to realize that a lot of characters are not being developed as well as they should.
At the same time, I had a side story starting to form from those three spotlighted characters. I've been mentally planning some ways in which the other characters could be displayed in the story, but at the same time, I have big events waiting for Twily, Flutters, and Dash.
I will try to implement other characters as best as I can. I just figured something like TF2 would need some story behind it to give it some meaning, and a lot of that story was going to be portrayed with those three fateful individuals. I promise it'll be worth your time.
Very good I demand more chapters.
Also have you ever thought of doing FF2 or other gamemodes like zombie fortress for chapters?
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Not really; it hasn't exactly crossed my mind.
Like I said in the author notes: I don't know where I'm going with this.
We'll see what happens as my twisted mind produces more ideas.
3865280 to bad it's not Halloween then I would ask for a magical mercenary then we would see who's truly the prettiest unicorn
I can't tell if this is TF2 or cross-universe shipping any more.
Oh well, onwards!
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Who said it won't be Halloween?
3875939 wait you should post a Speciel on a full moon because you can wear Halloween items on a full moon or get someone to us the enteralween thingy
Next chapter - Rarity uncrates an unusual.
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Anything's possible.
im just wondering if theres going to be conflict between the administrator and their friendships, after all she sees everything.
maybe even a vs. Saxton Hale round *wink wink nudge nudge*
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Anything's possible.
I have something similar in mind.
I had a dream where I got high off of the Kritzkrieg's fumes once. Smells like air freshener indeed! Good update and adorable Fluttershy!
If I don't see a trolldier at Hightower, I'd better see BLU Scout get beat to death five times over.
TRIPPIN' BALLS.
Oh, and there had better be frying pans on Hightower.
Red scout should show how much of a gentleman he is to Rainbow, then spark a competition between him and BLU scout, the death will be lovely!!!!
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Get this guy outta here; he reads my mind.
3982751 Let's do it!!!!!!
So... Spikes gets a whole lot of new gear... and that's all we hear from him? Now if he was on Blu I would imagine with this equipment he would have turned the tide of battle... but considering the next map... he's going to do that their instead of here.
What I think would be fun is a POV day of Pinkie & Pyro, like how even though there both mumbling to each other they understand completely what they are saying...
HOLY JESUS what if 1 Pyro was female and the other wanted to get her attention and is asking pinkie for advice!
Not... that... you SHOULD do that... but it would be cool XD
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Spike will get his spotlight. Give me time.
Uh oh Spy is not to happy with his actions now he's going to have to give achward explanation to Twilight, also Where Is Gentle Scout? Also BLU Scout why you such a douch.
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Give me time. Gentle Scout will come in time. One romantic crisis per chapter.
4072273 noooooooooo I can't wait that long
SPARE ME THE WAIT!
SPY!!!!!!!!!! HOW DARE YOU DEVASTATE TWILIGHT AND MAKE HER THINK THAT RED SNIPER HATES HER?! I WILL DESTROY YOU!!!
Personally I Think Blu Spy did something an ACTUAL Spy would do and destroy emotions as well as lives, it was a little strong winded to accept what he said because it was so out of the ordinarily but still a clever tactic... what disturbed me though is how even when that was going on RED team (ignoring the snipers) did nothing as the bomb was going up.
Yes Blu scout was a dick but continuing to treat him like one is a dick move in itself.
So will the next chapter going to continue what happened now or is it going to switch to some other problem before continuing. Because I know a lot of things that do that
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My story has been everywhere. Multiple problems and "confusions" exist in the plot right now, and they will get solved or addressed at different times in the story.
Have you ever heard of Game of Thrones? It works kind of like that. It's a way to keep people hooked.
4138514 makes sense
Dun dun dun
I think we need more blue scout trying to skrewing up more stuff. Also due to the new comic for teamfortress 2 I think Big Mac should ask for a bit of a backstory?
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Time, man. Time. I know it sucks, but all will come in time. I barely got that little thing started.
4179466 awwwwww why do you have to have a life outside for writing :|
I'm surprise the Blue Spy just told the truth. And I'm glad that red sniper and Twilight are together again
So I'm still shocked how quickly things are moving along here. Nothing is wrong with the story itself but it's getting resolved kinda quickly for my taste.
When it hit the part where Shy was having a heart attack I thought due to the chosen music the Flutterrage would FINALLY come out. Nope.
I don't want to keep point it out nor expect it to happen. I guess I thought considering all she went through... continues different degrees of murder, the stress of supporting the team, the fear of not helping and now the love for the medic I would have though that she was going to snap when I heard the music play.
Considering how the doomsday map is like. (either a complete 1 sided victory or a long grinding match of skill) I am kinda going to enjoy the variety of what could happen here. Even if 1 team is inches away from victory a well executed demo from below can SHATTER there victory and delay them and or lose the Australiam all together. This should defiantly be a Zecora/Demo highlighted.
Side note, with the emotions. You have Trixie, CMC, Bigmac, photo finish, Celestia, Derpy and even Twist but no Zecora..? no love for anything not pony eh?
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I honestly can't deny anything you just said right there. All true.
Guess my choice of music set the story in the wrong direction. Flutterage is a pretty good idea, but believe it or not, that actually wasn't what I was aiming for there. Perhaps I'll add it in in a chapter or two.
Part of the reason it's rushed is because I literally rushed myself. At noon earlier today, this chapter wasn't even halfway done due to procrastination. The heart attack thing will play a part sometime in the future, I suppose.
My problem with writing is that I never have a 100% clear idea of what's going to happen next. The idea for the next chapter is in place, but the sequence of which it actually occurs is just improvisation. I'm always more proud of some chapters than others.
well now, these kinds of stories I don't see too often, but this is a really good read indeed.
Not to mention very exciting, I can't wait to see what happens next... and I also can't wait to see how these things will go, since Red and Blu are two different sorts of people.
4179936 No. Your choices in what happens or whats played your story is in NOT WRONG. I am but a bystander, a critic, a friend in what you have done and I want to support you in what you are doing.
Being a writer I must say sounds hard. It has to take a lot of free time to be able to get out a single chapter... read it over and over again just to get it right, and even know what happens next must be a burden to you. So from time to time I can't argue if you want to procrastinate.
I have lots of ideas about lots of things... and with regards to stories some of my friends say I am very good at imagining stuff... discussing ideas and that I myself should be a writer. And one day I may accept that challenge. But you are already ahead of me... your actually making a story! That says a lot.
When I make any statement or idea on anything on this website I try to give my ideas away or my thought to help, We all do. I don't want you feeling negative because I pointed out something.
You don't need to rush this story along. We can wait. It doesn't matter how long it takes so long as your happy with it, then even if were going to nit pic, we nit pic to make sure you only get better or just out right praise you for your creative writing!
Take your time, take notes of what others have said, change it IF you want to. And give us a story to remember!