Brave Spirit is an earthpony who has been through tough times recently in his life. He had lost his parents, and his wife in one decade. All he's ever wanted was to have someone to love and look after.
One night, while going out to clear his head, he finds exactly what he's been wanting for as long as he can remember. Something that might just change his life, and his view of life, forever.
Similar to My Little Dashie, but different in its own special ways.
nom nom nom
wait? then what about her cutie mark!?!?!!!!
lmfao. i got a wii U for x'mas..its actualy what i was reading this on...and COMMENTING!! lol, its like my tablet..my bigger Ipod.
Feed, feed on my comment
Awwww poor Dashie, so thisis the difference between the show?
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It is indeed.
Your comment is delicious, like fresh blood!
no it was as delicious as the screams of a virgin as you rip her womb from her young body
Starnge and humorus, continue.......or we shall, ahem, 'Process', your soul.
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Hmm...wow. Creative.
2192195 *cough* yes sorry I have moment of insanity hehehehe...
Very heartwarming and artificial feathers? Had a feeling you where going in that direction
Uh oh, Dash trying to take advantage of the baby sitter, that doesn't sound good.
story sounds exellent so far.
You have a bedtime? Geeze I havnt had one of those since I was 8 years old
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Yep. 9:00 on school nights, and 9:30 on weekends.
Hahaha "what's puberty?" Dad: -very long awkward scilence-
Well great now I have to wait for the next chapter
... I hate you
Also if Dash is 14 with no cutie mark.. Doesn't that mean the other five of the elements of harmony are blank flanks too?
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Most likely. After all, Rainbow Dash never performed the Sonic Rainboom that caused them to get their cutie marks in the first place.
2368621 yup...
Wut is wrong with u
2368616 ur just everywhere Arnt ya?
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???
Nothing's wrong with me.
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you bastard!!!! how could you hurt dashie!!!!!!!
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Just keep reading, and I hope you'll feel better by what you find.
hahahhahahahahhhhaaaaahhhhhhhahahaaaaaahahhaaaa horses have periods?hahhhahaha
I think i busted a gut reading the last bit
GOD I LOVE THIS STORY
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Not sure. Just getting creative!
2397436 lol
i though horses went into heat not having periods... or are they the same thing....... should have paid attention in bio. i feel dumb now
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As we already know, this is My Little Pony we're talking about. Therefore, it doesn't take place in the real world, so why get technical over the anatomy of the characters?
It was a funny, creative idea, so I went with it. The fact that the horses fly, use magic, talk, get cutie marks, experience love, and come in many colors is enough to throw away most forms of logic.
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Good !
I have been great, stuff happened, I'm now 16 and life got boring
Oh...he was near suicidal when he found Dashie and she gave him hope to live..cool
whats a noose? was he gonna commit suicede, or kill dash, lol at first i thought kill dash, because halloween just passed and it just fit, but then i saw rainbow87dash's comment and im all lke duuuh, that would make way more sense.
i forgot what u said about how the wife died [if u ever did] so my first though was he killed her.
but my very very very 1st thought before i read wut the item was, i thought he has saved her bones in the box. ahaha i have a weird imagination
edit: oh. yea suicide. i look up noose. rope knot
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I got a kick out of your comment, for some reason.
Yeah, Spirit's wife was a pegasus, and died in a flying accident. I think I explained that in a previous chapter.
I was thinking of weird possibilities when I wrote of her opening the box, too. I'm weird.
Dude, ponies don't eat pepperoni they eat vegetables.
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Um...okay. That has been noted.
awwww. oh yeah..you did write the bad luck series......d'awwwww he died! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!
3534432 Tofuroni?
Don't you just hate bedtimes?
No, not really...
Inspired!! Must do art!!!
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You'll actually make a pic of this for me? Or do you just like the story a lot?
5765247 Oh yes sure. You can have it if you want. I'll just post it on devianrtart if I haven't already and then you can download it. So yeah you can have it.
And I also liked the story
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Oh, that makes me joyful.
5765642 I'm glad! :D I'll be posting it in a few short minutes. Here is a link: http://therandommlpfanatic.deviantart.com/
sooo cute.