The idea's definitily interesting, and it's different enough from the show, but there were a lot of deus ex machina moments all around. Plus Discord pulling the idiot ball and sending her somewhere rather then killing.
Whatever, still gonna watch where this series goes.
There would be time to morn her friends, but now wasn't it. The sign said Ponyville, but this couldn't be it. The sign said Ponyville, but this couldn't be it.
1. Isn't it mourn? 2. Did you repeat a sentence twice?
Other than those... FINALLY someone made a promising Samurai Jack fic
Samurai Jack crossover. Nice. Although you'll have to clarify on the Applejack ancestors wielding the sword of harmony, and Discord knowing about it too. Sounded a little too far-fetched.
Also, the kindness gem is pink on Fluttershy, not green.
I need more of this...Also how she got the sword was kinda...lame. she also had no proper reaction to her dead friends. make it emotional then while she is crying the sword forms in front of her as she opens her eyes. THEN I will truely respect it
You know like the elements are allowing her to fight back with strength or something. also make it so she learns how to use it once she touches it, so again it makes more sense.
I've been a samuri jack fan for...god knows how long :/ AND I WANT TO SEE THIS SUCCEED SO MAKE MORE!
This has promise. Dark, which I can appreciate... the detailed statements involving the deaths of the others proved to be rather drawing. I'm not much for shipping and I haven't seen samurai jack, but do I detect a hint of SpikeXApplejack?
The history behind the apple family and the discord, and the sword, will need to be covered for certain... plenty of future in this fic.
Relax all, there will be more explanations to come. And there will be light shipping, like what was seen in Jack and the Warrior Woman but no, no SpikeXApplejack. And she's a tough pony. She will have time to grieve, but she's determined. Remember how she forgave any sort of rest to harvest apples.
And because I'm shameless like that, check out my other story. It has a few similar elements, but is a whole other world in itself.
Also, expect a new chapter every week, with a maximum of 53 chapters. And go buy the DVD. Genndy really made an amazing show.
YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES faved.
This is great, keep it up!
i loved that show
The idea's definitily interesting, and it's different enough from the show, but there were a lot of deus ex machina moments all around. Plus Discord pulling the idiot ball and sending her somewhere rather then killing.
Whatever, still gonna watch where this series goes.
There would be time to morn her friends, but now wasn't it.
The sign said Ponyville, but this couldn't be it. The sign said Ponyville, but this couldn't be it.
1. Isn't it mourn?
2. Did you repeat a sentence twice?
Other than those... FINALLY someone made a promising Samurai Jack fic
Well it's about time...
I think I'm in love with you. Faved~.
Oooooooh!
Goddangit! You beat me to it!
EDIT:
Nevermind... you'd be better at this than me anyway....
Why are there two stories with this name? The other one is HERE.
There's also Samurai Twilight, Crossed Paths and Jack and the Ponies.
EDIT: I just realized it might sound like I was complaining. That's not the case at all... I like these kind of stories, keep it going!
Samurai Jack crossover. Nice. Although you'll have to clarify on the Applejack ancestors wielding the sword of harmony, and Discord knowing about it too. Sounded a little too far-fetched.
Also, the kindness gem is pink on Fluttershy, not green.
Faved, faved, a million times faved.
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Good catch. Thanks. I fixed it.
I need more of this...Also how she got the sword was kinda...lame.
she also had no proper reaction to her dead friends. make it emotional then while she is crying the sword forms in front of her as she opens her eyes. THEN I will truely respect it
You know like the elements are allowing her to fight back with strength or something. also make it so she learns how to use it once she touches it, so again it makes more sense.
I've been a samuri jack fan for...god knows how long :/
AND I WANT TO SEE THIS SUCCEED SO MAKE MORE!
This has promise. Dark, which I can appreciate... the detailed statements involving the deaths of the others proved to be rather drawing. I'm not much for shipping and I haven't seen samurai jack, but do I detect a hint of SpikeXApplejack?
The history behind the apple family and the discord, and the sword, will need to be covered for certain... plenty of future in this fic.
Relax all, there will be more explanations to come. And there will be light shipping, like what was seen in Jack and the Warrior Woman but no, no SpikeXApplejack. And she's a tough pony. She will have time to grieve, but she's determined. Remember how she forgave any sort of rest to harvest apples.
And because I'm shameless like that, check out my other story. It has a few similar elements, but is a whole other world in itself.
Also, expect a new chapter every week, with a maximum of 53 chapters. And go buy the DVD. Genndy really made an amazing show.
What.
WHAT?
WHY DID I NOT SEE THIS BEFORE?!
I NEEDED THIS!