585759 But those would be mass produced, and more or less kind of mindless beetle bots like in the first episode. Though for him he set up traps getting rid of a hundred if not more and just sliced the rest to kingdom come.
Now that I think about it, why exactly 99? Also, I don't think how the war golems looked like was mentioned in this chapter. But of course that will be answered in later chapters.
For an explination on why 99, you'lll have to wait, but it has to do with why Discord is evil. While I am trying to keep my stories separate, the reason for Discord being evil will be the same in this an my ohter one. It will be covered there as well, though I'm not sure which will get it revealed first.
And yes the war golems are the robots for this story.
I think you're rushing the believability of the whole time-travelling pony here. I mean, for once, Spike hasn't seen Applejack in 1000 years, yet he almost immediately accepts she's back? I'd say he was entitled to a longer shock. Same thing with Kendall, Applejack's saying how she travelled through time and she used to own the farm 1000 years ago, and he's just, ok, I'll buy it. Sure, mentioning Apple Bloom was a deal-sealer, but before that, I'd have guessed he'd be more shocked, or thinking AJ was crazy.
Nice touches with toy Rarity, the golems and Spike's story.
I know it's a bit rushed, but I'm trying to keep it in line with the show. After all, everyone just seemed to accept Jack's story that he was from the past. Only the dogs wanted to know more and that was just how long ago he had come from.
595437 Just because they did it in Samurai Jack doesn't mean it makes more sense. If you just copy what was used before without really stopping down, reading, judging and improving it, you're just copy-pasting a story and adding ponies.
Zonies!
I assume the steel golems will be the equivalent to Aku's robots...
585759 But those would be mass produced, and more or less kind of mindless beetle bots like in the first episode. Though for him he set up traps getting rid of a hundred if not more and just sliced the rest to kingdom come.
Now that I think about it, why exactly 99? Also, I don't think how the war golems looked like was mentioned in this chapter. But of course that will be answered in later chapters.
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For an explination on why 99, you'lll have to wait, but it has to do with why Discord is evil. While I am trying to keep my stories separate, the reason for Discord being evil will be the same in this an my ohter one. It will be covered there as well, though I'm not sure which will get it revealed first.
And yes the war golems are the robots for this story.
this is badass. And it's not even a crossover!
Awwww...I would like to see alot more originality with how she learned to use the sword but It's still a nice peice of work.
Chapter 2 is just as good as the first one! I can't wait till chapter 3! This is a really good story, except chapter one had me a little
Mas Por Favor
I caught a noticeable reference to Irobot with the use of a repurposed set of asimov's laws there... nice. I am rather enjoying this...
I think you're rushing the believability of the whole time-travelling pony here. I mean, for once, Spike hasn't seen Applejack in 1000 years, yet he almost immediately accepts she's back? I'd say he was entitled to a longer shock. Same thing with Kendall, Applejack's saying how she travelled through time and she used to own the farm 1000 years ago, and he's just, ok, I'll buy it. Sure, mentioning Apple Bloom was a deal-sealer, but before that, I'd have guessed he'd be more shocked, or thinking AJ was crazy.
Nice touches with toy Rarity, the golems and Spike's story.
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I know it's a bit rushed, but I'm trying to keep it in line with the show. After all, everyone just seemed to accept Jack's story that he was from the past. Only the dogs wanted to know more and that was just how long ago he had come from.
595437 Just because they did it in Samurai Jack doesn't mean it makes more sense. If you just copy what was used before without really stopping down, reading, judging and improving it, you're just copy-pasting a story and adding ponies.
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Fair point. Still, Spike's dealt with weird things before and just kind of rolled with it.
Only one error in this chapter that caught my eye.
where it points is where you want it to point, ignoring anything Discord that do."
Otherwise I'm happily reading on.
Oh.
And I'm pretty excited about this. It seems Awesome!
586096 Reminds me ah Jack Sparrow.... 100 souls.... and 99 left to go after gaining William Turnah.