Discord got a little incoherent at the end, but that might be intentional. Nice fight description by the way. I can't wait to run across more of this story.
"Brace yourselves. The golems are coming," I SO imagined Long Strider on the meme pose
Nice details on the dragon burps being able to move more than just letters. Although, speaking of dragons, if Ocean didn't have that many flares, could he really take the liberty of using one for a show off?
Discord got a little incoherent at the end, but that might be intentional. Nice fight description by the way. I can't wait to run across more of this story.
had been truthfu,l
1. Extra comma
2. at the part when Ocean was talking about his new appendage, he kept saying handsdl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra2.png This might just be me but yes, hands
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Once again, good catch. And of course he has hands. They're not hooves, and they're not claws. Also, I don't see Ocean coming back.
"Brace yourselves. The golems are coming," I SO imagined Long Strider on the meme pose
Nice details on the dragon burps being able to move more than just letters. Although, speaking of dragons, if Ocean didn't have that many flares, could he really take the liberty of using one for a show off?
Nice chapter, keeping interesting
At the very start, you use "rope" instead of "robe". Only thing I saw wrong. Keep up the good work