“One ah mah friends was Twahlight Sparkle too. You’d have tah be from her brothers family though, she didn’t have any foals. Ah was actually when Shinin’ Armor nearly married that changeling. Good thing Twahlight rescued the real Cadence. She laid down a sulked.
Well now Applejack has a way to get home at least, so this wasn't exactly a loss for her. I like the way she sort of just shows up and aces whatever beasties are hanging around though it seemed to me like she took down those manticore with ease. Why didn't she just kill them in the first place?
753576 Umm... so the missing " for said sentence is correct? Then what about the one right after having both the opening and closing quotation marks? I'm confounded...
And a clue leads on!
Yay! Applejack is getting closer to going home!
Now she needs an equivalent to the Scotsman.
“One ah mah friends was Twahlight Sparkle too. You’d have tah be from her brothers family though, she didn’t have any foals. Ah was actually when Shinin’ Armor nearly married that changeling. Good thing Twahlight rescued the real Cadence.
She laid down a sulked.
1. Forgot your closing quotation mark.
2. And.
752134
1. no, that's grammatically correct.
2. fixed.
Well now Applejack has a way to get home at least, so this wasn't exactly a loss for her.
I like the way she sort of just shows up and aces whatever beasties are hanging around though it seemed to me like she took down those manticore with ease. Why didn't she just kill them in the first place?
754645
Well they weren't all ganging up on her. Sure they were easy to kill when none were attacking her, but all three on her at once would be a challenge.
Me gusta this fiction. Finally got around to reading the update ^^
753576 Umm... so the missing " for said sentence is correct? Then what about the one right after having both the opening and closing quotation marks? I'm confounded...
756513
Both are from the same speaker, so the first one does not require the closing quotation.