Twilight and her friends joined a contest only to find out they just joined the International Equestrian Naval Exercise and is in Thunderbolt's fleet. It all turns out well until they are trapped in a alien forcefield. Can Thunderbolt and her fleet defeat the alien armada and save Equestria?
This was inspired by the 2012 film "Battleship".
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lol wut?
571247
I agree to this sentiment and repeat it.
Lol wut?
571278 An then you take'ah the puddin an ya put the puddin on the spoon. uh... an then you ah eat it.
Dear Sweet Celestia Pancakes...
Well, the chapters are ridiculously short and large blocks of text. I had no idea what was going on. While the crossover idea is... interesting... it's executed poorly. Try again and work on fleshing out your pacing and imagery. Remember that the first rule of writing is to show and not tell.
Terror On The High Seas - Alestorm
Hmm, where to start...
Huge walls of text... -1
Tiny chapters... -1
Heaps of grammatical errors... -1
Ridiculous storyline... -1
Since when did Equestria have a sea? Or 50 caliber machine guns? Or battleships? Some explaining would be nice... -1
It's a cross-over of 'Battleship'... -1
All in all, it definitely needs some work
Please make a sequel
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Not at all what happened in the move you need to watch the movie