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Lord Ferrok


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One Human from the planet know as Oxfox crashes into a new world with walking, talking ponies with no way to contact his People to get him back he must stay in Equestria and try to get back home......This will be fun.

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Hullo! I'm your friendly grammar/spell checker for brand-new stories!

Why are you in are club house.

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and you write "i" instead of "I" a lot. And it's "it's" not "its" on a lot of things.
and you need to work on not capitalizing random words.

This is your short description:

What would happen if an person from a another planet came to Equestria?

What it should be:

What would happen, if a person from another planet came to Equestria?

Just trying to help on the go here.

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I meant to spell it that way. That's the pronunciation of how I say "hello". I don't know where you live, but in America we greet each other in weird ways. Like calling your all-girl group of friends "guys" upon greeting. When pointing out errors in stories, how the author decides to have them say "hello/hey/'sup etc...." is what I go with. Also, people in some part(s) of the world have an accent that makes them say "'ello" not "hello" so that's how they write it.

Pretty much, that's just how I write myself as if I were talking.:twilightsmile:

5669547 Well... If that's how you do things. I just thought it was a bit strange that a grammar/spell checker would greet with an improperly spelled word.

It just seemed a tad funny to me, like an oxymoron. :derpytongue2:

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