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Waterpear


Sky, earth, and in between / Come watch with me as our world burns

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Majin Syeekoh
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That was amazing.

Nice prank indeed.

But decaf also contians a little caffeine?...
Still have a like

Well played.

Borderline horror story saved at the last minute

There needs to be more stories like this.

Good job, Waterpear.

This is excellent. I could effortlessly hear each thing the characters said in their own voices! And there's nothing extraneous at all; it reads so smoothly. :raritystarry:

Damn it! I was hoping that she would have actually had regular coffee!

I wanted to see what would happen when she drinks regular coffee. Besides, regular is better than decaf.

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"Coffee has strange effects on Pinkie Pie" is a pretty obvious/common bit of fanon. That's fine, and it's common for a good reason, but I think it's also fun to mess around with common fanon like this.

Which gives me an idea...

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Thanks! I was afraid that this story was too minimalist, but judging from the reception it's gotten, that isn't the case at all.

5642393 Well, one of the big rules in good writing is to say a lot with as little as possible, so. Y'done good. :ajsmug:

I don't get decaf. The good part of coffee is exactly the caffeine, there's no point on drinking the black and bitter if you don't get a rush from it.

Also this:

“Morning, girls! I just checked on Rarity, and she’ll be ready in a bit. So don’t worry, I won’t have to delay the train this time.

Delay a whole train which several other ponies depend on to get to their destinations or receive/send goods on time, for just one frilly diva without a sense of punctuality. Frivolous use of royal influence much?

5644359 I don't drink coffee myself, but I think the reasoning is that sometimes people want to have the taste of coffee, but don't want to risk being too hyper or staying up too late.

Next, we make Pinkie drink a bottle of Venom Energy...

Ha, wow, you got me (and probably everypony else) there! Well played! :rainbowlaugh:

It might send me to super double mega levels of excitedness, and that’s what you’re worried about, right?”

Wait until you drink a full-sized energy drink, Pinkie. :pinkiecrazy:

A really wonderful little story. Bravo! :raritywink:

And, like mostly everyone here, you quite fooled me into thinking Pinkie was actually drinking real coffee. :twilightblush:

You magnificent bastard. :rainbowlaugh:

I like how I could actually imagine it all happening as part of an episode on the show. It's a really well done shortfic, nice work.

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mesa no

that's not how that works

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https://youtu.be/tP6EwDcD8Zg
I think coffee itself wouldn't do anything to Pinkie. Maybe only shugar in it.

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And tea. It has a lot of caffeine

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