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Sugarcube66


Whilst 'm not as big into my little pony as when I was younger, I do wish to get back into it. And to do that, I intend to reorganize my stories slowly. Give me time.

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Shortly after the Nightmare Moon incident, Nyx has began to want to experience a foalhood and a meeting with her grandparents seals the deal.

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Morning awakening.

The chapter title doesn't need a period at the end because it isn't a sentence. What it does need, however, is the "awakening" part to start with a capital A. 'Morning Awakening'

Just wanted to put that out there since it seems to be a recurring issue.

Well, let's see where and how this goes.

6587153 the 2 pairings are Sunset with Twilight and Nyx with Screwball

6587660 Yay, somebody figured it out. Want ta cookie? XD

This sounds really good. I can't wait to read more. Let me guess Twilight and Sunset and Nyx and Screwball.

I like Nyx, and I like the foalhood thing, but I´m not sure what to think of Nyx being in this position, after what happened with her already. Well I give it a chance.

6588334 Wow, how many others are gonna figure it out so quickly....

6588997 Remember, Nyxie has never experienced foalhood and could become easily jealous of other ponies, and I believe she could also want to be related to Twilight by more then just adoption, at least that's how my original story went....

Comment posted by narusakufan deleted Nov 1st, 2015

6589046 Well truth be told Sunset and Twilight was a giving. I cheated on Nyx and Screwball by seeing the previous person answering XD

6589097 XD, but yeah, I think I gave away Sunset x Twilight in Chapter 1 and with Screwy being in the character list, I think I gave her away too...

6589136 That's true. This sounds very promising.

6589341 Yea, I'm have started writing the next chapter all ready which has them on the train to Canterlot with Sunset asking questions about Nyx, as they have never met (Yes, Nyx never went to the Human World despite mentioning it) And a few others things happen..XD

Edit;It's up now.

Short and sweet, short and sweet.

6590176 It was a remake of my first ever mlp fanfic, not on this website (Though it stars the same oc Ugh, I love Nyx too much)...I lost the original in a issue with the website, it deleted my account, but I always wanted to update the story. That one was even shorter and it was bad, I'll admit that...Plus, the pacing was too quick. So, I'm glad people like the remake.

6590244
A) SunsetShimmer and Nyx
B) Nyx and SunsetShimmer
What not to like?:rainbowhuh:

And really there wasn't enough going on to help slow down the chapter

6590272 Sunset was never in the original story, it came out prior to Rainbow Rocks and I didn't know about this website or the ship.......she was a recent idea when writing the first chapter and the ship came from there....it's my first proper attempt at doing this ship and so I had hoped people would like it, and I'm glad they have.

That was a sweet chapter. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I was just thinking of writing something this, inspired by Winter Bells and the Road Home.
Twilight is somewhat jealous of Cadance's pregnancy and wishes she would feel what it would be like, and one thing leads to another and oops wrong spell and Nyx gets unbirthed. and then stuck.

6610853 Hmm, your evil but I might bring the idea of jealousy into this story when I come down to Nyx asking Twilight.

Pretty cute, however I do have to wonder how Shiny will react in this one, he has a track record of not trusting Nyx in the fictions I've read.

That was a sweet chapter.

6610965 Yea.....because he believes she was evil....but no, he won't be appearing in this is considering this is set mid season 5, it can be expected that Twilight has already introduced Nyx to Shining, so I may have a flashback next chapter.....

''Pleased do, sweetie. I wasn't able to check the book after replying to her last message. I wonder what she's been up too.''

''Well...considering after the incident at the Friendship Games that you missed, I can just guess your counterpart is getting along with the girls and that she's sent you a picture or something. I doubt anything big will happen again.'' said Nyx, with a small smile. She knew that the issues going on in the human world weren't down to magical causes and she doubted anything big would happen again, at least she hoped.

To be honest, even if I hven´t watched the friendship games yet, I actually prefer it, if Equestria, and equestria girls doesn´t mix up to much in one story. Equestria girls isn´t my most favourite world, but that mostly counts for the show version.

It just simply read: 'Dear Twilight, how is life in Equestria? I do wish you would come back to visit us sometime in the near future, but I do know that will be hard considering your princesshood is much more important. Yet, I can't help but feel like I want to come home, back to Equestria, to you and to Princess Celestia. So, I want to meet up with you, as soon as you get a moment.'

Well I´m happy about that.

Twilight chuckled nervously. ''I managed to figure out that the flow of time between the time worlds isn't even, Equestria ages quicker then the human world. I am about 25 here. And this is my young daughter, Nyx. Well, technically born about a year ago now, she is physically around the age of 8/9.''

Since she adopted Nyx, why does she need to be older?

daffodil

I just noticed that probably no one ever tried to use a different type of flowers, as their favourite flower for a sandwich, or anything like that, everyone likes the same flower. It isn´t bad, I just think it was always the same.

At which time did they started dating in your story?, and that between two worlds.

Not sure what I think of this story, but it is not bad, so I give it a fair chance.

6613297 Hmm....I have the idea that they started dating just after Rainbow Rocks and then when Twilight found out about Sci-Twi, she got jealous of how much attention Sunset gave her........but yeah, if I were to put that into idea, I'd say they been dating for about 6 months....

just a question is this goanna get around 5 chapter's and then it kinda dies like so many other stories do

6620316 Hopefully not......there'll be a wait between chapters as I work on 3 different websites for writing and I just can't focus on too many stories at once....but I won't die after 5 chapters....

6620674 nice too many stories die too fast

Any idea when you'll be getting back to this one, just out of interest?

6820053 As soon as I can think again....

6822133 Okay, I won't rush you then.

7353589 When I sort myself out, I'm trying to focus on another website at the moment.....but once I've finished up what I'm doing there, I'll focus on these stories again. Read my blog on my plans.

Comment posted by TwilightShipper deleted Mar 27th, 2017

I would like to have a new chapter please.

It needs refinement.

Are you going to finish this?

im like 80% sure this story is dead

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Presently, yes. I hope to continue sooner or later, can't write at the moment due to an injury...but I'm half-hoping to restore many of my incomplete stories.

8635583
alright but im not gonna hold my breath waiting for a update if that makes sense

8635592
I understood, more then you likely think. Since season 7 came out, I've been getting less and less interested in MLP to the point where I haven't seen half of season 6 and only seen 3 episodes from 7......thus, writing stories and keeping them to canon is harder and less interesting with my ever-growing loss of interest in the actual show. I don't dislike it, I just think that it declined in quality after season 5....maybe its just me though.

8635604
i recently joined the fandom during the hiatus of season 6 so season 7 was my first time watch the episodes as they come out so my liking of the show is still good I just cant write worth a damn

8635642
Whilst, I came into the fandom on day one pretty much......didn't know about bronies until around season 4, but was a heavy fan of MLP from all the way back in ep 1. I grow up watching gen 2 and 3, so of course I'd move onto FIM once it came out.....

8635770
wow your like one of the "oldest" bronies then

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