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This story is a sequel to I need help.
After a week in the hospital Sunset Shimmer was really bored, then, walking around without permission, she make a friendship with a terminal patient, while still trying to get a kiss from her new and shy girlfriend Twilight Sparkle.
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Actually, not yet, but soon after I posted this story a person called me on my previous story and I'm waiting for a answer.
But you're someone that called my attention last time, and I want to make a question, this story was better written?
But also don't worry, I'm gonna find someone eventually.
That wax the best line I've ever read!
You keep playing with emotions and that ending actually made me cry a little bit.
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I'm really glad that you liked it and were thrilled.
I was actually kind of discouraged to write again, but knowing that someone really liked my "job" really feels refreshing.
So I have to thank you for that!
I don't understand why people don't like this story! This was my second read through and it was fantastic. I'm going to share this story over my social media cause seriously!
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Well, everyone has their preferences, and I can't blame them for expressing it.
But again, I'm deeply happy that you like it that much!
Sooo.... did Sunset just forgot she could use magic or was that just plot hole?
Also was Soldier's full name "Sam Baggins"?
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Few plot holes, some miscaracterization, the hole "we are ashamed of being in love and the one we love" thing anf lastly Sunset refusal to understand what is in front of her could be a few reasons for it.
I like the story but I also can see the shortcommings and have gonne over disliking fanfic level writting as often the potential of the idea is enough to excuse any writting problem.
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This one is the worst written one I ever did, I assume that. At that time I had almost zero understanding in English, and unlike I Need Help, I could not gather the courage to edit this one.
I really was inexperienced at the time, my writing was bad and even the story makes much more sense inside my head than outside of it.
I am really sorry about that. I just ask you to trust me a little more, I know I am not perfect even now, far from it, but I study really hard by myself after that.
I edited This Will Be A Good Day and despite the first few chapters I think that I worked really hard to make My Immortal Phoenix be the best as it can.
And more importantly, thank you for giving a chance to my fics, even the old ones.