Before our 'gang' journeyed through the Badlands, a certain queen was sleeping when...
"Queen Chrysalis!" Drone#9,001 think to her.
"What is it? I was sleeping." Queen Chrysalis thought back.
"Queen, those ponies to look for, a male Alicorn and an unicorn filly. They're near our territory, what should we do?" Drone#9,001 think to their Queen.
"Bring them in." Queen Chrysalis think in a commanding thought.
"Right away, our Queen." Drone#9,001 thought.
Meanwhile...
Trixie's view;
"So we will probably run into a trap. What's the plan?" I asked.
"We go in there and asked if sister is there, if not plan B is run in grab the page and run out." Haunt said.
"Not much of a plan their is to be, touch by the sand beneath our hooves to see." Zecora said.
"It's a ambush?" Haunt said, as we see the one changeling come from the ground.
"Wait. Don't attack. We're here on behalf of our Queen Chrysalis, to join us." Drone#9,001 said.
"This might be still a trap. Stay sharp." Haunt said.
---At the Queen's castle---
Haunt's view;
"Ah! Our guest have arrived." Queen Chrysalis said as she was planing something evil.
"Half-sister Chrysalis, it's nice to see you." I said with anger.
"Sister?" Trixie and Lexi said in unison.
"Jinx, second helpings of hayfries are mine." Zecora said.
"Half-brother, you remembered me." Queen Chrysalis said sarcastically, then continued. "Guest you want this page, hum? I want revenge on the elements of harmony. So..."
"You want in our group." I said.
"You catch on half-brother. So a page for a new member, or I could send my army to destroy you." Queen Chrysalis said.
"I, uh, we accept." I said in defeat.
"With her, I can't have any more ponies in my caravan." Trixie said.
"Well this is the team, uh..." I said.
"Haunt and friends." Lexi said.
"No. How about team Haunters?" Zecora said.
"H.A.Z.I.C." Chrysalis said.
"H.A.Z.I.C.? What's that?" Lexi said in confusion.
"Haunt, Alexi, Zecora, Trixie, and Chrysalis. Our names, in the order that we came in this 'gang'." Chrysalis said.
"Oh, Cool! H.A.Z.I.C.! Ready for action!" Lexi said gleefully.
"The page please." I said.
"I will read this one, thank you." Chrysalis said and read, ~entry#10: Knock knock. Who's there? Haunt. Haunt who? Haunt you, that's who. Astral projection is harder then what 'they' say in the books, but I found a little short cut. Say this while being still, Beyond the physical plan that I walk, I trade my physical body for an astral body. The cons are really bad. They include, 'Being out of physical body for too long will results in wandering the astral plan for all eternity, other astral bodies stealing your physical body, and unspeakable horrors.'(End of entry)
As they walked to the caravan Lexi asked, "What will your army do when your gone, Chrysalis?"
"They will follow the next Queen without question. The last queen will pick one of their female drones, infuse them with their power, then they're Queen." Chrysalis said.
"What happens if none are picked, or the Queen dies before they're pick?" Lexi question.
"Then the first living female drone becomes Queen and the dead Queen ashes are pored on them to absorbed though their chitin and they are Queen that way." Chrysalis said.
"Oh. Well do you have one?" Lexi asked.
"I do, but she not old enough to survive the transfer of power." Chrysalis said.
"Come on, we need to go, Trixie is inpatient on where to go." Trixie said.
"Next is in the Griffin Gorge." I said.
You know that 's shows possession right? They way you worded the title you make it seems like Phantom Haunt's journal entries own something, not Phantom Haunt.
*Phantom Haunt's Journal Entries
I think that's the title you were going for.
As a general bit of advice too, alicorn OC fics hardly ever go over well here, much less ones that are riddled with errors. I reccomend one of two things:
1. Get an editor and re-think what you're doing with this fic, it's been done before. Poorly. Many times.
2. Read some other fics first and consider writing something else. This has been done before.
5773103 thank you ma'am or sir. I will fix it.
Maybe you will help fix this?
5777283
Nope.
Nothing personal, but I got my own fics and stuff to worry about. There are plenty of groups to help with that though.
5777295 thanks for trying.