Prospective reader here, In terms of Gore, how bad is it?

Not saying he didn't deserve it but wow just slap somepony awake with that shocker

I guess now would be a good time for Walter to relay that it was Blueblood that hired Red to kidnap him in the first place? Just how painful were their deaths? Very, I hope. Glad to see the next chapter up. I hope things get better in your life.

6247302 not so much, mostly general descriptions, your head fills in the gory details.

Hope things turn out for the better papabear!
Be patient, take a deep breath and imagin your strife draining away as you exhale.

damn... that cliffhanger tho

but i hope things get better in your life

How is that a problem?

I hope he was stabbed in the heart with his horn, and then crappy one-liner

I don't feel bad for him. The prick Blue-Balls started that whole mess with Walter being kidnapped in the first place.

Honestly i was expecting what he did to them not that he wakes up and everything has already happen.

6249606
Precisely.

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Someone call for a bloodmoon?

6247336 honestly i would have just started laughing

WHAT THE FUCK.What...error error.brain malfunction.okay so that's something that happened.happy this story still gets updated even if rarely.But life problems are ducks,kinda like life,so a break is understandable.Either way,it's not gonna kill me if I can't read.keep up the good work,and hope you start feeling better soon

6247616 Right though.Lord hallelujah.

6251854 His physique is similar to that of Robert Oberst or Brian Shaw

I'm sorry to any one who finds this too offensive, but I just feel that I have to go there.

Ding-dong the Bitc# is dead the evil Bitc# the wicked Bitc#, oh, and Red too.

6253158 Erhmagerhd! Senpai noticed me~! Hehe, I love your work, man, it's really great. Keep up with the amazing content and I sincerely hope life does get better for you, because you're my favorite~. Hugs from Digtarius.

6260629 I'm a senpai!? :O I'm glad to see people actually like my work, I never see myself as somebody as important as you guys make me feel. Thank you for your support! *Bear hugs*

6260652 please update soon!

6261748 I'm working on it! :)

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Be not afraid of the dark...cause sometime you have to embrace it.

6247616 Remember that they are not aware of Blueblood's connection to Red and of Walter's kidnapping

6299523 I know, but no body likes blueballs

6300783 Either way, even if nobody liked Blueballs, Walter still committed a crime, a serious one at that. Nobody really wants to punish Walter, but until something can be done to pardon Walter's crime, there's not much anybody can do.

6301606 point taken

6301606 Holy shit! I was just about to start reading this story i was read a different story and i was gonna start this one after i finished it, which i did yesterday too bad its canceled

Wait, why was this amazing story cancelled?! D: Are you not going to finish it? ;-;

6301606 papa bear I ask you... why have you canceled such am amazing and interesting story?

I stayed up till 4 in the morning to read this whole story

6348166 I'm thinking of rewriting this story, not completely sure yet.

6356635 You shouldn't exert yourself too much o.o

And I cancelled it because I can't really see any more into the story. I never really had a solid plot to begin with, therefore I plan on rewriting it with a more decent story line to follow.

6357454 yay I'm happy now

6357454: oh, good. I arrived on this page, saw it said Cancelled, and I was about to freak. Then I saw your comment here.

Whew...

6357454 i was going to suggest that you let some one else continue right the story for you but that works to.

6377244 Well if you or anybody else wants to pick up this story where it left off then I don't really mind.

6379063 i would but i tried righting somthing befor but it came out looking more like a script so if any one else wants to they can. It will make the people that injoy this story realy happy if they do.

Just skimmed through the start. Looked like it'd have been an amazing story. I do hope you do the re-write as you said.

From what I see though, though I haven't read it yet, it seemed like great potential for a harem fic too. Was that what it was turning into before you cancelled it, out of curiosity?^_^

6433830 What lead me to cancel the story was how I just randomly escalated the story out of proportion. I wanted it to be a harem type fic, but I just made things escalate too quickly without much build up between characters. I wanted to take my time and show how each character establish a relationship before I get into other things, but I skipped over that completely out of the sheer panic of keeping up with a update schedule. What I'd like to do is remove all the chapters thus far on this verson and start over, but I don't know if anybody would like that or not.

6436144 You could just have a new fic while keeping the old, with the new fic being stated as a remake of the old. That'd solve that issue for ya.^^ Plus, if you want to take it slow, maybe you can even include how it is the girls wind up there in the first place, including his meeting them and whatnot.:D

are you going to continue this story

I really enjoyed this and i hope you keep making stuff like this

I really hope this story comes back. I was really enjoying it, sad to see there isn't anymore to read

6453899 I plan on it sooner or later, I don't really have good enough internet to update any stories right now let alone get on the site. Internet is limited for me right now, so it's gonna take a while.

6535180 well I'm excited for a new chapter and I hope your internet becomes better

6946612 I should make that a thing XD #BedrockBay

Why is this story cancelled?

8138077 there's a new one

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Then why can't I find it?

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When's the new one coming out
Edit: i found it it's dont have roommates anywhere in the title