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Papa Bear


I'm a little messed up. I'll update chapters when I can. Sorry for the long waiting periods :(

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Not related to your story but I love what Fluttershy's sweater says in that image :twilightblush:

Seems like an interesting start. I had the same thing only Spike is enrolled at an all girls academy.

I spy a wolfjedisamuel pic. He always has funny shit written in random places, and is always a good choice.

OK, I love the prologue of the story so far. You get a like and a fav. I hope the next chapter comes on.

Rainbow dash please...'-' I HOPE DAH CHAPTER WILL BE SOON :rainbowwild:

So, all I gotta say is yes. It was an excellent way of displaying the relations between at least one or two characters thus far, I'd like to and hopefully will see the interactions with more of the mane six. Hay, maybe even more than that. I hope you keep writing this because it's a definite favorite from me to you.

This is hilarious! There is already a fic called roommates, but dude this is funny.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowkiss:

I've gotta be honest, I kinda expected it to be fully detailed and less rushed. I'm still gonna read it though.

I know what pic the cover-art's from.:trollestia:

5391431 me to. i really like that image

5391431 I honestly didn't really know anything about that image, just found it on google, thought it would be fitting is all. I guess I should be more responsible with what images I use *sheepish smile*

That picture is wolfjedisamuel from deviantart. Easy to spot his artwork.

Sure, I'll track this. Have a fave and like.

Liking how this is going!:pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the quick update. Damn, is Dash really flirty in this one if she already kissed the protagonist after just two chapters of screentime.

Damn that was quick! Not a bad thing but WOW!

I was kind've sleepy when I wrote this, sorry XD

....Welp that escaladed quickly...Yep '-'

i bet thats not the only thing that tastes sweet... im going to go into my corner now :ajsleepy:

These ponies! They are insufferable! :facehoof:

Btw, if I was in the protagonist's shoes I'd be too Goddamn mad to even care that I'm naked. I'd be like "You know what I don't even fucking care! Now I'm mad!"

I know where you got that picture, you dirty, dirty author.

This is a real cool story so far, I really like the setup you have going, and i look forward to see how this will play out with the other five roomates

Comment posted by Papa Bear deleted Dec 18th, 2014

5394954 I don't, I just found it on google o.o never really checked out the artist's DA yet, since my internet time is scarce

This is really interesting. The wording and, to a lesser extent, the spelling could use some work (most relevant; acceptionally instead of exceptionally), but that's easy to fix. Keep up the good work!

5395631 Ah, well, I don't think you'll find the full picture on DA. It's rather... explicit.

This story is blowing up a lot more than I expected o.o

5398865 Because we all love thing about School c; :twilightsmile: I think i am joking more then i tought

5396031 *Do right-click on the image then search for the image* O_O MY EYE AAH :rainbowderp:

over 1000 views!? Holy shit! :raritystarry:

The beginning of this chapter felt a bit off to me... but overall, it's pretty awesome! I love ALL ponies but I just can't wait to see how it turns out with Fluttershy.. :yay:

Wow... Flutters got it goin' on!! The story was pretty good. Didn't really understood the box part with the "15 minutes later" though.... MOAAARRRR!!! :heart::yay:

Advertised your story on my Twitter! :pinkiehappy: (@Flutter_shyyyy - Feel free to follow... if you bronies would like too..) Hope you don't mind... I thought it was good but there's always room for improvement! :yay:

OH COME ON RAINBOW DASH '-' You're going to far I Know right? :rainbowwild:

Walter! Also known as Mr. Mountain!:trollestia:

I bet the guy will have to quit college now. What with the fight he's gonna miss. Rainbow Dash doesn't realise she just screwed Walter over did she?:unsuresweetie:

I love this chapter. Watching that guy having to deal with an oversexed RD, accidentally making Fluttershy develop an interest on him due to one of RD's pranks, embarrassing AJ due to the same prank, and accidentally making him go to third base with RD was extremely hilarious. I want to see more.

Those arms man... they can lariat a redwood and the tree wood disappear...

5417225 Funny thing is, that's sort of what I look like too :3

That muffin looks tasty...












Oh and I guess the one in his has looks nice too

5417809 funny thing is, in that picture, Discord turned Ditzy's tail into a muffin, and that guy just happened to find it and start eating it XD

Its a bit short, but still good nonetheless.

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