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Silentpegasus
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This'll be good!
I feel an Uncharted aura in the Fanfic. Other than that this fic is going to be awesome! ^^
More dammit!
Curse you and your new fics!
I have too much on my plate already!!
This is gonna be good ;)
This feels like Uncharted and I love the interaction between those two. I hope to see more of this story.
*slow approving nod*
5115202
I didn't even glance at your profile picture and just read the comment. I said "Black Jesus"? then I looked over at the picture, I died.
on another note, WHAT IN GODS NAME ARE YOU THINKING? YOU HAVE TOO MANY FUCKING PROJECTS DAMN IT.
5116128 Simple. I'm crazy.
5116214 Wow, that got to be the laziest answer.
by the way, which books did you cancel already. I can only remember that both of them revolves around water.
5116254 I'm still debating whether or not to cancel them. "Heart of the Ocean" and "Drowning in Love"
5116286 Eh, just canceled them both. Clearly your not invested in either one of them, so what's the point of having them.
Brace yourselves, tons of Indiana Jones references are coming.
So let's see if I got another one in me(still wished you space your stories out.) So lets put on our adventure hats, it's Review Time:
I don't know if you do that on purpose or you don't even notice how easy you makes this.
HOLY SHIT! IT'S THE INFINITY GAUNTLET!
I knew that this was going to happen but might as well ask, how often is Daring Do going to get injured in this story?
Again, you make this too easy.
Why does this sound familiar?
Should I refer to him as Dr. Grant?
Now why did he have to go and do that?
He could have enjoyed the view if he didn't say anything.
*end of review*
So we're off to a great start. I'm just a little confused, I feel like we just missed a bunch of stuff before the story started. Mainly how Grant arrived in Equestria? But I'm sure you'll answer that in another chapter. Let's see how you'll do with a shipping story with a character we've only seen twice goes. Oh, and one more thing........You better not cancel Drowning in Love or I'm going to be very PISSED!
5117145 The refrence is from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. From Tim the enchanter when he's describing the 'beast' that guards the cave.
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Excuse me...
Love the dynamic between those two.
5117850 Where does it say that?
Beautiful...
Love it
5117850 I know right?
5117887 ""I HATE HEIGHTS!” He yelled as he plummeted towards the ground. Daring flexed her wing and grunted in pain as she flapped it. She grabbed the man by the shit and managed to control their crash into a deep pool being fed by a waterfall. Grant felt the cold water splash against him and felt his clothes become heavy. He looked to his left and saw that the mare was out cold from the collision. He hooked his arm around her midsection and started to swim towards the surface." Love it keep it like that. ~JFK
She grabbed the man by the shit
So, I am liking this so far...but I have noticed a plethora of typos. SO I am going to list them every time I read a chapter. Sound good? No? TOO BAD!!
And away we go!
Should be fly.
The actual scientific term for humans as we are now is homo sapien sapien. Two sapiens.
Should be overgrown.
You forgot a space here.
There are more that just these but this comment is getting rather long, And I have a chapter to finish up. SO I will leave you with these, if you want more help, lemme know. I am pretty good at this stuff.
This story and chapter, I like it.
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I like it a lot, has potential but I keep getting a Saxton Hale meets Uncharted vibe.
I am enjoying this thus far please continue with it , and your million other stories I also enjoy. Waiting for a good RvB joke.
So you made another one that quickly, you might as well had put both chapters up at the same time. Well it's time dig in once again, Review Time:
I don't know why he should be shocked. He just found out that he's in another world, what made him think anypony would know who batman is?
I'm pretty sure a wing is different from an arm, so I don't think it's that simple.
My head started thinking Devil May Cry 4, but seeing this is from a item, I guess to more accurate comparison is Green Lantern.
Did anyone not seeing this coming?
Now I'm thinking Witchblade.
WTF?
You're telling me that Daring Do would go that far to get an artifact by cutting off the arm of an innocent man? That's pretty dark man.
And there's the snap. I got to admit, I wasn't expecting this so soon. I knew that eventually he would snap but not in the goddamn second chapter.
Foreshadowing?
*end of review*
Well that escalated quickly. For some reason I think Grant will be able to save themselves from the natives. Probably like C-3PO on Ewok kinda thing. I figured from the first chapter, I knew that you we're going to make Daring a Tsundere. I think you pulling it off good.(maybe too much) But I hope that it doesn't end here already.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
and now some character snapping. I must admit that I would probably snap around that point too. unless the person I'm with isn't as annoying as this daring. if I was allowed to think and not have to talk with anyone, I would probably be able to last at least a day... maybe two if it was really quiet.
5121373 What's a Tsundere? I was thinking more along the lines of DMC4. The snap was the first of many to come.
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Tsundere is the opposite of yandere, you remember what yandere is?(If you don't, go back and look it up. I'll wait......................................
) Okay now that you're back I'll tell you. Tsundere is a term to describe a woman who is somewhat of a bitch on the outside,
but overtime she will show that she's very kind on the inside.
For an otaku, you don't know much.
5122774 I don't really consider myself an Otaku so sorry if I'm not up to par on the lingo.
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That's okay, no need to beat yourself up. Not sure how you can tell the difference between a anime fan and a otaku online. Well at least your learning something new.(the more you know.)
I need more or I will die! True story.
That'll do pig, that'll do.
This sounds like a fun beginning. though you misspelled over grown there at the moment.
Welp, this'll be fun time
Can explain this tracking, watch, and fav bullcrap. What happened to email updates?
Good story so far, and I can't wait to read more of it.
I say! This Daring might just have temper and violence prone issues.
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I believe we have such a thing in Europe called Kinder Surprise chocolate eggs.
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5142685 Indeed.
this is bad what happen daring and grant?
Damn...
5151250 What? A good damn or bad damn?
It's official.....if there is a "must kill list".....Daring Do's on Grant's
It was... I was just sad that the chapter had to end. But alas all things must.