:D

This'll be good!

I feel an Uncharted aura in the Fanfic. Other than that this fic is going to be awesome! ^^

More dammit!

Curse you and your new fics! I have too much on my plate already!!

This is gonna be good ;)

This feels like Uncharted and I love the interaction between those two. I hope to see more of this story.

*slow approving nod*

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I didn't even glance at your profile picture and just read the comment. I said "Black Jesus"? then I looked over at the picture, I died.

on another note, WHAT IN GODS NAME ARE YOU THINKING? YOU HAVE TOO MANY FUCKING PROJECTS DAMN IT.

5116128 Simple. I'm crazy.

5116214 Wow, that got to be the laziest answer. by the way, which books did you cancel already. I can only remember that both of them revolves around water.

5116254 I'm still debating whether or not to cancel them. "Heart of the Ocean" and "Drowning in Love"

5116286 Eh, just canceled them both. Clearly your not invested in either one of them, so what's the point of having them.

Brace yourselves, tons of Indiana Jones references are coming. So let's see if I got another one in me(still wished you space your stories out.) So lets put on our adventure hats, it's Review Time:

Nice and tight. I hope I remember how to use this thing.

I don't know if you do that on purpose or you don't even notice how easy you makes this.

The man slowly approached the small protrusion and removed the old cloth to show a glass case surrounding a gauntlet. The gauntlet looked like it covered the hand, wrist and fore arm and ended a bit bellow the elbow. It appeared to have a metal covering over leather, the metal had several glyphs and symbols carved into it. What Grant noticed the most was on the back of the glove portion of the artifact was a glowing white jewel.

HOLY SHIT! IT'S THE INFINITY GAUNTLET!

The minion moved behind the woman to where her wings were restrained, he grabbed the right wing and yanked it down making a popping noise.

I knew that this was going to happen but might as well ask, how often is Daring Do going to get injured in this story?

Remember, deep breaths. In and out. In and out.

Again, you make this too easy.

“FOOLS!” He made his voice echo through the stone walls thanks to the architecture of the building. “YOU HAVE DISTURBED MY SLUMBER AND I SHALL NOW FEAST UPON YOUR BONES!”

“Wh-who’s th-there?” The four were shaking like children trapped in one of those Halloween fun houses at carnivals.

“I AM THE SPIRIT THAT HAUNTS THESE HALLS. THOSE WHO WAKE ME NEVER LIVE TO TELL THE TALE!” Grant fired another arrow that stuck one of them in the shoulder. “LEAVE NOW, OR DEATH AWAITS YOU WITH SHARP POINTY TEETH!”

Why does this sound familiar?

“Okay two things I should point out,” Daring turned to look at him with a groan. “since we’re going to be working together temporarily, name’s Grant Doyle.”

Should I refer to him as Dr. Grant?

“You sure you wanna go adventuring like that?” He pointed at her. Daring followed his finger and looked down. Her eyes shrank and her face turned scarlet when she saw that her shirt was still unbuttoned showing off her bra covered chest. She covered herself with her left hand and slapped him across the face with the other.

Now why did he have to go and do that? He could have enjoyed the view if he didn't say anything.*end of review*

So we're off to a great start. I'm just a little confused, I feel like we just missed a bunch of stuff before the story started. Mainly how Grant arrived in Equestria? But I'm sure you'll answer that in another chapter. Let's see how you'll do with a shipping story with a character we've only seen twice goes. Oh, and one more thing........You better not cancel Drowning in Love or I'm going to be very PISSED!

5117145 The refrence is from Monty Python and the Holy Grail. From Tim the enchanter when he's describing the 'beast' that guards the cave.
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Welp, this'll be fun time