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Papa Bear


I'm a little messed up. I'll update chapters when I can. Sorry for the long waiting periods :(

Comments ( 86 )

This story seems to be interesting. I'd love to see more of it whether as clop or as a full-fledge story, it doesn't matter. You'd do a great job in either format.

Dude, this is awesome you've got to make more.

Hmm... I like this story's potential. Please continue!

Your off to a good start, just don't be like most writers and rush the romance or clop scenes, these things need character development to be effective.

Cool. Please keep going.

Clop or not, this looks to be fucking hilarious!

Need longer chapters.

I love it!

Looks good so far. I'll provide more detailed commentary as your story progresses.
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5909690 Eh, somewhat, I'm not really sure if it should. I was just inspired by an rp and decided to write this.

Looks really promesing, looking foward to the next chapter.

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5914749 PPP? PPPPPP! PPPPPP.... PPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!?!?

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I GOT THE PP!!
...if you get that reference...1500 brownie points to ya.

So in a big plot-twist in the end it is reveled that his father did not left but was sucked to alternate dimension 100 years in the past where he shagged a goddess of the sun and now his son is continuing his legacy in said shagging or what?

Or Celestia ends up being his mother.

Really liked the mystery if the photo. Can't wait to know more about it.

Hmmm, so Celestia have had A human hubby eh? Interesting.

5916066 yeah you are right even if you pu it like that

Sweet start! Quite sexy yet sensible!:trollestia: Though I didn't get the Cutie Mark Crusader reference.:applejackunsure:

Everything is going nice so far... a bit too fanservice-y but still good.

5930818 Well, it's because Titus is searching for his calling in life, similar to the role of the cutie mark; to display one's particular calling.

Ahh the magic of time travel...
That's the idea I get from this, I'm imagining that Titus will be sent back in time somehow to previous Celestia
(or Celestia is sent forwards (that'd be interesting)).
Somehow Titus and the person in the picture are either related or the same person.
Am I warm or cold in these guesses?
Other than that, looking good mate!

5934601 The "Futurama Fry's Family" line of thinking, but with a male blood relative of Celestia as Titus' father and the picture is from after he is brought back but still in human form! (maybe an Older Cousin or Uncle?)

HMB

Going to be honest

I've never heard of any kid who's 6 foot 7

Like, do you know how fucking TALL that is?

5935174 I'm around that height and I only just recently turned 18, plus Titus is old enough to go to college so he isn't really a kid xD I guess

Do you know what this story needs? More wolfjob!
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And I hope to read more chapters of your stories soon.:raritystarry:

ooohhh interesting story i came upon i would like to see were this goes

In the chapter title: Indroductions

Should be: Introductions

My guess...............................he's that same human from the picture only some event caused his appearance to change and his memory to be wiped.

Kinda feels like he's his own father, in some way... Idk...

I like this. More of this. Give 5935270 a promotion.

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Another song that fits your description of DAT ASS

Nice to see another chapter of this story. I wonder what Twilight really thinks about Titus.

Pinkie Pies breasts. Weapons of Mass Fun!

"So, what are humans like?"

You could lock three in a room together, ask for an opinion and get six different answers.

there were very few female influences with politics or sports or anything like that for the longest time.

Actually, there were many female influences; they just weren't acting on the stage.

In most of history, most women were in a supportive role rather than a submissive one.
In the stone age, men hunted the protein; women harvested the calories.
In ancient times, there were female gladiators, and women supported the viking raiders.
In a French court, it was the nagging wives who influenced their husbands in political games more than the men themselves.
In medieval times, men plowed, fixed their tools and sometimes weaved; women weaved, fixed their tools and sometimes plowed.

It wasn't until the 1800s in the factories that sexism really became about rights to live freely rather than power to control things. Men and women split their work in factories, and when wages rose high enough, women were no longer hired in the factories and were removed to the home-place, where they were much more confined.
And then came this democracy stuff that gave rights to men; whereas before, no one had any rights.

Pinkies breasts should only be referred to as funbags.

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