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SwiftM0nkey


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I want more! I think this is a very good slice of life story that doesn't revolve around one of the overused main/background characters and that it should be continued.

This is too good to be a one shot, IT NEEDS MORE!!!!

I feel for Lyra in this story.

start a new day full of dumb equestrian bullshit.

Well i'm not even a full paragraph in yet and you already have my up-vote.

I feel for Cherry here. My home, we never really focused on interacting much. Not so much out of not caring, but more... We placed more importance on just enjoying the company. "Silence is golden," would be our mantra. Then when it actually came time to socialize, we were duds, essentially. Thus, even to this day, communicating hasn't been my strong suit; people are always telling me that I need to smile more or talk more. People always seem to think that not smiling or talking much means you're angry, too.
In the words of Maud, "Just because i'm not smiling, doesn't mean i'm not happy."

Have a like and a favorite. I enjoyed this. :derpytongue2:

5315836 I don't know, does cursing/swearing merit a mature rating on this site?

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I posted a lot of my other stuff as Teen first and I would have to wait like a day and a half just for them to bring it back saying "Hey it should be mature." I didn't want to chance it and just made it mature from the beginning.

Cherry Berry, you nightmare.

that was cute, dont know what it was mature thou. still cute thou

Oh Shit! Its the Cherry-pillar!

If you get the reference, you get a cookie that looks like a chocolate chip, but actually contains raisins.

No one did this yet! Here's a thing Anon could do with Cherry:

5316399 Hey, Jericho! When are you gonna update huh?
When I feel like it dummkoph!

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:rainbowlaugh:
Ohh... I love that movie.

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*dummkopf

Sorry. Please, please dont hate me.

lol this was awesome. gilda got REKT

I like Cherry Berry more now. She just wants some love.

Damn. Berry knocked a bitch out.

5321446 Actually,good sir,If you check again,You will find that the 'bitches knocked out' counter is sitting at a firm 2.

When Anon elbow dropped Gilda I lost my shit. Nice fic!

THIS WAS BETTER THAN FUCKING GENIUS. THIS WAS 20% COOLER THAN FUCKING GENIUS. :rainbowlaugh:Also, GODAMNIT GILDA YOU RACIST BIOTCH!:flutterrage:

if you see this you've just been trolled.:rainbowlaugh:

Wait, a Cherry Berry story where she isn't drunk? Outstanding! Now if we just had a story where Bon Bon isn't a bitch. I cannot understand why people always write Bon Bon as a angry little Mare.

Oh man this was awesome :rainbowlaugh: I want to see these too go out on a date. Lol

Yep, that double teaming asswhooping of Gilda earned this fic a like.

Cherry Berry is not a rapist.

Jericho Amadeus Faust is relieved, but I'm disappointed. And flaccid.

Ending felt forced, but still a decent story. :twilightsmile:

I'm not usually a fan of 2nd person/anon stories, but this was actually pretty good. It managed to get a few good chuckles out of me so good job mate have an upvote.
-Riot

Hahahaha. The idea of Cherry just decking Bon Bon in the face, and then leaving her unconscious on her own doorstep without even calling Lyra over, is hilarious. Maybe not for all the right reasons, but I'll take it.

Overall, middling... but enough low-stake silliness to be a decent read.

Man, I'd have been her coltfriend immediately after everything. Gilda and Bon Bon would have sealed the deal for me.

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