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Well that was interesting. I must say, I was.... well, interested.
I understand it's not everypony's taste... makes me wonder how many of the downvotes are because they thought it was poorly written, and how many are simply "I don't like that sort of thing."
Hard to tell, but probably a number of them. I might suggest a hypnosis warning for those folks, in the summary. I thought it was quite well done, myself.
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Good idea. And I'm glad you thought so. :)
It put Scratch in a new light for me...guess she did like Tavi...just in the way an owner loves its pet I guess
um ok then that was something...
I liked it but damn was that messed up
Down! Down boner!!
Hypnosis. So many things can happen there.
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Sequel?! Haha... just kidding. :P
1849934 Up to you....if you decided to. Or maybe an alternate version where Octavia tricks Vinyl into listening to the music.
This is AMAZING!!
Finally SOMEONE does a hypnosis story!
In any case this could benefit from an extended series of showing Octys' slow decent into submission.
This is good, checking other works now.
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omigosh YES.
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these kinds of mind control fics are my crack, and this fandom is sorely lacking in them. by all means, please, make more fics like this!
and if you've already written fics in this genre, i will definitely be checking them out.
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Your thoughts = My thoughts
I found myself randomly thinking of this story all bloody day after i read it, and it confuses me as to why. I think its because you have turned 2 of my favorite things against me in this.
My love of music, aka bass, dubstep, wubs (not sure if they could really be considered the same thing)
and my favorite pony vinyl....
good job. you unintentionally got this stuck in my head
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I'm sorry if I ruined your day. Believe me, that was not my intention...
I'll try to have better descriptions in future, to prevent that sort of thing from happening...
1859326 never said it was a bad thing.
it opened up a new perspective to me and i find it .... interesting. vinyl scratch hypnosis using bass caught my eye and well... now whenever i listen to my music, i keep thinking im hearing something. im not joking either.
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I know it says its complete and your the writer but i feel like there could be a chapter 2 in here but its just an opinion so *Shrugs*
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There will be at least two more chapters, since enough readers seem to like it. Soon...
1860080 Woo! Thank you
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Good chapter. I guess Vinyl just got to cocky about her abilities. And music freed Octavias soul.
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Ah, but will it last? Will Octavia end Vinyl's reign of control? Seize that power for herself? Or will she fall prey once again to Vinyl's will?
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Or will she confront Vinyl and Vinyl realize what she did and destroy the mix and plead for forgiveness?
Ah, but does it matter? Cuz imma read it no matter what.
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I'm -pretty- sure that's the wrong response to this, Daf...
You know what actually surprised me?
That Octavia normally considers herself straight. I didn't expect that.
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I'm glad you phrased it as "considers herself straight", because that's precisely what I was going for. It's less about her sexual preference, and more like something she's never really given much thought to. Career first, and all that. The way she so often starts out in shipfics.
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Or will she fall to tbe dark side, turning her cello into an auditory weapon against the mind? Just imagine the gigs you could get by hypnotizing ponies at your auditions...?
Dear Celestia...
This is one of the few fics that use hypnosis so you have my interest.
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Just because there aren't many others out there, doesn't mean I don't want to do my absolute best, though. That's why I'm always asking for comments and critiques. So, feel free to tell me what you think/what you would like to see done/done differently. I may not do it, but I'd still like to know.
Wow....that kinda made my heart start to hurt a little bit...I know Scratch was trying to help Tavia but...I am sure just like the mad hatter found out, you might now have the pony you want and they do all you wish....it is not the same as having the whole package. Or Scratch is just twisted enough to not really care and is more than happy to see Tavia as a mindless toy now. It is all up to the writer after-all.
1877094 BECAUSE there are not that many out means that you SHOULD try your best!
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As for suggestions I'm not sure what I can do considering I never considered using music for hypnosis. (Great job there by the way!
Keep up the good work!
This story has come along good. I can't wait to see how you finish it.
wow this looks great. great writing
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Thanks! This has been my favorite chapter! I really kind of belted out the first one in a hurry, and I still feel it would have benefited from being a little more in-depth. And the second one was a lot of non-sexy texty. Which is fine... I guess...
I'm thinking that Lyra or those other earth ponies may be lured in next... Vinyl's harem?
I love Vinyl as seductive villainess in this series! *rariswoons* She's tempting, and I'm usually a dom!
One, nice avatar picture. Two, have it so that, in the end, Octavia is corrupted, but in different way. So, sheis cleansed of Vinyl, but she then cleans out Vinyl's head too. Then, she starts hypnotizing Vinyl. Then the orchestra, and then the Mane 6, and then the club.
once again, all of my yes. this was even better than the first chapter! the pacing felt great, our view of Octavia's mind as her free will drains away was perfect, and there wasn't gratuitous amounts of detail on the actual sex (which i much prefer. i love that you focus on the mind rather than the body).
i actually found myself feeling bad about enjoying the act of octavia's corruption this time. after liking this so much, i'm sure there's a special place in hell for me.
please, do go on. Slaanesh demands moar.
My only complaint...not enough detail in the clop. and there is a Mind Control group, everypony...so if that's your thing...find it and look through what we have in there.
one more thing...make the actual hypnosis part more...detailed...that's the best part!
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I'm actually with NovemberWolf on this one. Hypnosis stories, to me, are mostly about the fall. After that, it's pretty much just like every other clop story out there. I do try to include physical sexy bits, but one of the pitfalls I want to avoid is to use the hypnosis as an excuse to skip character/plot development (no no, the OTHER kind).
Does that make sense?
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I like all those ideas... unfortunately, I'm only doing one more chapter (it's already planned out) in -this- story. Simply because I want to avoid the premise becoming stale.
However... if I were to write something else... something with Octavia in charge maybe (me gusta)... do you ponies think I should make it hypnosis again, or a straight-up sub/dom thing? Or something else entirely?
Oh yeah, and that picture was done by Swaetshrit. I did not draw it, I do not own it, and all that.
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I say another hypnosis story.
I liked the writing and the mind control, but I was hoping for more of a fight back. Maybe Vinyl getting a taste of her own medicine. Like maybe Octavia could get confused or want to show her how good it feels to be a slave and take her earplugs out one night. Having her just be a slave forever leaves not as much to look forward to. The mind control and sexual aspect makes it fun to read, but if you had more substance to the plot the story would be more rewarding in my opinion.
Vinyl reminds me of the Mad Hatter from American Megee's Alice where he has gone insane and turned his friends the dormouse and march hare into clockwork cyborgs in an effort to "help them"; he genuinely wanted to help them just he is to insane to relies that he has hurt them horribly.
All in all great story
1881108 Straight sub/Dom. As you said, it's really more about the fall. Something hypnosis stories tend to shorten dramatically. It's a bit like "mystery-a- minute" stores versus full on Sherlock Holmes... If that makes sense.
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It makes absolute sense, and was, in fact, something I took into account when writing this. See, I wrote this story specifically as clop. Which means I was trying to get 'the good bits', and everything else was pretty much setup for those parts. And even the fall itself, I hesitated to drag on too long, for fear of the reader losing the excitement of the moment.
That said, I think something a bit longer, with sub/dom themes sounds like a pretty good idea. Not a novel, but something that doesn't necessarily revolve around the clop parts (although that will still be prominent, as a testament to my moral turpitude).
Thanks for your input!
2005762As long as I get to read said story we'll call it even, eh?
While well written and (admittedly) mildly-intruiging, I'm going to have to downvote after this chapter, mostly because I hate the whole pet thing in this chapter and partly because I like the ship of Vinyl/Octavia, but this turned Vinyl insane and made it horrific.
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Ok, but... isn't that more of a personal preference over quality thing?
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Perhaps... I might take back the vote.
down-voting for now, as my brain is going nuts over how vinyl has to be stopped, and how i feel a certain couple are to be of help. also, my heart screams that it is just wrong that octavia gets a collar and my mom still wont let me wear one...
otherwise, i look forward to more. and food...mmmmmmmm food...
