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One day, while playing with her friends, Apple Bloom accidentally steals a package of her favorite sweets, Dippers. Now, she must learn to live the life of crime she has chosen, whether it means losing her family, her friends, or even her home.
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This was really cute. It was like reading an episode.
Great job with this.
Great story, felt just like an episode!
Nicely done short story!
Enjoyable story, very cute.
This was simply enjoyable. I'm not a critic, so, all I can say us that you did a very good job.
Even if a bit predictable it's a well done story. It's hard to imagine why it has so few views.
This was a great story and between this and The Moony Maiden, you've more than earned both a watch and a new fan! :D
Applebloom, NO! Don't you realize that if you learn a lesson you have to write a letter to Princess Celestia!
In other words, cool story bro.
That was great. It could a MLP episode as well.
Very well written. Congrats on a great story.
Really well written. I know that everybody's already said it, but I'll say it again: It felt exactly like an episode. One error that bothered me:
"Shined" should probably be "shone." Otherwise, really good story!
Very cute. I would've like AB to admit she was going to confess until she saw AJ blowing her stack about Dash though. As well as AJ apologizing to BonBon and Lyra for jumping to conclusions.
Found a spelling error:
Apple Bloom immediately made her way to the reclining chain in the middle of the room, lay down in it, and drifted off to sleep.
Reclining chain? How does that work, or is it some kind of chainmail or chainlink hammock? Can't imagine that being very comfortable.
"Why'd ya run away, Applebloom?"
"Because ah was worried you'd overreact."
"WHAT THE BUCK DID YOU JUST SAY ABOUT ME?!?!?!"
I agree with Grez, this fan fiction feels like it could pass off as an episode (that I would totally enjoy). Wonderfully done! ^-^