When pushed to the limit, the nine mercenaries escape to Equestria leaving all their problems behind and starting anew.
With no way back, they must adapt to their new lives and try to fit in into pony society and they must protect them from the unfinished business they left behind.
I like it so far, please continue.
You put the TF2 team in equestria? This can not end well if demoman gets drunk often. I like it
I am very skeptical about this since you had Sniper kill Berry Punch but I'll see where your going with this. Especially liked the part with Pyro and Timberwolves
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haha i keep deleting comments that talk about that part so it wont spoil the surpirse
but i guess all the comments are going to about that so there is no escape >.<
anyways glad you liked it
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BERRY PUNCH!!!
NOOOO!!!
She was too drunk to see it coming...
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Oh god they have eaten horse meat
JESUS THEY ATE BERRY!
They ate Berry Punch. This is going to end badly, once the ponies find out that...
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Oh no they killed the town drunk now who will make the rest of us look good lol
When you said pink... I almost thought they had eaten Pinkie Pie. Though last I checked Berry Punch was more of a magenta colour...
I kept trying to avoid this because of just how long it is, but now I can't wait any longer. In we go!
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wear protection
I told you, killing Berry isn't a good idea.
-Sincerely from your editor.
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I like to write things that people least expected
I dunno...always seen killing off some character as a cheap way to get a shock value to a story. Could have had him kill a cow or pig or any number of critters that dwell in the Everfree.
This fic is super
can't wait for more
Ha, Berry, where's your adorable face against a jar-man?
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it made me laugh when i read it cus just the thought of when their meet ponies and their ask if their know what happen to berry.
i can't wait 4 more this is funny as hell
3101862 Noooo! My comment! D:
Anyways, please continue. I love TF2 crossovers.
Can't wait for more.
Also LMAO at "Australian national sport" part XD
Please continue, please
This is truly a well written story and I look forward to seeing more of your work.
Sincerely: Quill and Ink.
I like the story so far.
There are a few errors but's still good
You need some pre-readers. But otherwise it's fine.
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it would help if you mention them since i am not devoting alot of time into this story
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Mostly capitalization errors when using the words I, I'm, I've and some misplaced or non-existent commas. The best way to fix this is to get some spell checking software, but proofreaders would help about as much and may be a bit slower.
Nice but make scout more ironic
Pls Continue!
Wow, This Fanfiction is Awesome, and I Like it! Keep up the Good work man!
You have to Continue this! This is a quite Entertaining Story. Please, dont turn into a ''Dead Writer''.
I'm still waiting for a New Chapter btw.
Why not continue this? The plot is enjoyable and the writing is good. I expect a chapter real soon mister! Or no cookies for you!
You're back, finally. I'm happy as an emo.
Update fast please.
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It will be out this week.
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5285089 Yaaaay!!!
What can I say, go ahead and make me happy
Now, we play the waiting game...