After everything that's happened lately, Anthem and his family have decided to take a vacation to Mihaymi. While there, Anthem finds more then just sun, sea and sand... He finds love.
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Okay, there's a few things I'm going to clear up about this, so let me get my brush and shovel.
No I didn't mean in that way. But what I do mean is the there is a few things in this story that might need a little clean up. I'd have a few suggestions, but if course I would like to point something out two words: Short Description. I know that it is called a short description but really, come on, most people on this site have at least 3-4 lines at the minimum. I know it's brief, but it's not brief enough, if you know what I mean.
Okay, grab your plushies and a cup of coffee because this is gonna take a while.
First chapter;
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Second line, I have a few words about this 'line of text'.
If Cadence and Shining armour are in the story, why the buck is there an OC tag?!
Seriously, there is something called checking..
Well, I don't want to bore you, I'll keep it short and sweet..
But I will have the full review done and in your face in cinemas soon..
Raidoactive_Rainboom
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The OC is for Anthem that is one of the original characters of Bluecatcinema. And, by the way, he is the main character in this story.
5257251 I can see that, it's the other tags that are necessary
I have a feeling you nest history will feature Anthem
Why bronies likes so much love history?
Finally, an Anthem story. He's been missing in action for quite a while.
Good story!
It's beautiful to see that Anthem has found love the way his cousin Dusk Glow did. Speaking of which, shouldn't his future foal inside of Dazzle be born by now?
D'aww :3
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Couldn't have said it any other way ♥
That's right, Anthem, you show that jerk never to mess with you!!
That's so sweet! I'm so glad that Anthem has won Winter Beach's heart!
5281547 Yep. What a sweet chapter. It really made me smile.
Ah well, it seem it's gonaa be a loving summer for two couples
Sheesh, Crashing, rude much.
5292839 and yet, why do i have this feeling that she is not done with Anthem?
Wow, Winter's mom is so rude... I do hope she warms up to Anthem later on in the story.
so, is this story over or not?
5303677 Not by a long shot.
ah, young love...it's so beautiful
I enjoyed this one. Maybe Cadance and Shining should invite Crashing and Summer down to Ponyville. That at way they get to see Twilight again and show the two what their family is really like.
There must be a motive for crashing hate so much nobles
HA, I know it
Am I assuming correctly that Nobleblood is Blueblood's father?
5348573 Wait and see...
5352724 That's gonna be fun to see. I wonder if it will be like Nalik-Aqqbar of Schwartzamungaknackerhobblestan (seriously, how does one pronounce that?)
5353892 Exactly how it's read.
So, I was right! Nobleblood was Blueblood's father. At least now the son isn't like the father anymore.
And since when did Dusk and Dazzle had a son?! you should do a fanfic of it
5359101 If you'll remember, I mentioned Dazzle was expecting back in the final chapter of "Love, Equestria Style."
Chrysalis and Sleight will appear in some chapter?
That was so lovely!
HAH, Looks like shinning and cadance still don't go well with chrysalis
Will there be a follow-up?
5416850 There's nothing solid at the moment, but Anthem and Winter might just show up in future stories.
From what i heard during the story, the next one is gonna pass on the Dodge Junction right?
5419783 Wait and see.
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It's really funny, at first I took her to be the overprotective father because I read really fast over which parent was which, but then I went backwards to see that she's an overprotective mother
So precious!!!...
This is so romantic! Loving this!