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The fate of Equestria hangs in the balance when a familiar foe returns, far more powerful than ever before, seeking the power of an ancient artifact. And Shine Paladin must face dark secrets from the past in order to save all he holds dear.
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Interesting story. I can't wait to read more and how Shine fits into everything.
No genre tags?
5127001 There are now. Thanks for the heads-up. Can't believe I missed that.
I KNOW IT!!
I know it that red eclipese was alive!!!
I am calling it right now, that was King Sombra's horn. But if Red Eclipse is in this story, what about Twitch? And more importantly, when are we going to get Twitch's full story and the Napoleons' beef with him?
5128853 Oh, we will get to that.
Quick question because I can't remember, did Red Eclipse and Twitch appear in an earlier story or is this the first?
5129753 Yes, they both appeared in "Sleight the Mystifying and Extraordinary"
5131195 Ah, okay. I haven't had the chance to read through that one so I really should go through it soon.
Awesome.... just awesome.
I can only say one thing.
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Forgive the language, but... FUCK!! This is some serious shit we're dealing here.
OH SHIT!!!
But i am pretty sure she is not death, also is Eclipse have something with shines father?
Wait, wait, i know the answer: wait and see right?
5140483 'Fraid so. But give it a week or so, and things will be clear.
Oh boy. Sadly it looks like it is Caboose with Celestia's power. Good luck with the next chapter.
Why shine was so worried, isn't Miracle imortal?
5152644 Um, immortal in the sense that she will never get old and die of old age. It doesn't mean that she can't be killed...and dark magic can be unpredictable.
I bleive Char will return to the action
Well, I was surprised to learn that Zecora has become pregnant after all.
And where's Discord during all this? I mean, now that he's been reformed, I'd assume that he would prove to be a powerful ally during this nasty business against Black.
Funny at the end
WHOA WHOA WHOA, WAIt A MINUTE!!!
Zecora is pregnant? is that right??
What about discord he's not goind to appear? And the mane 6 will not return to the old times?
5178200 Discord is on vacation at the time of this story. He's touring the griffon and minotaur lands.
5185770
He's always in vacation i see
The final battle is about to begin!
IT'S COWARD KILIING TIME!!!!
I'm expecting a battle worthy of the fight at the gates of Mordor and the Battle of Hogwarts combined.
BUT WHERE'S DISCORD?!?!?!
5189461
I agree, you guys really need to put Discord in that!!
5193953 I'm glad you agree with me on this. :)
Kick your uncle's flank, Shine Paladin!!!!!!
I see a metal gear rising revengeace reference here
5201970 Oh, it will get better.
Shine could just rip Sombra's horn off of Black's head.
SO MANY MGRR, GREAT!!!
I'm starting to think that sombra will posses Black's body
I thought Black was unforgivable but that ending..... I actually forgave the poor bastard.
Thank goodness that it's over. I'm utterly relieved.
I also hope Black's death won't force Caboose to resign his position as a guard.
So, is this it? Is this the end of your series, or are you still continuing?
And it's over, who's next?
Does Grimoire and Zecora have a name for their child?
5239851 I have more stories coming. Please be patient.
Is this the first story in this series? If not, then where is it?
5458942 It's not so much a series as a set of loosely linked stories. The best place to start would be with "Her Shining Paladin".
NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!....... Miracle!!!
This is the worst. Possible thing!
https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=aRhovNlNck4
Oh the suspense!
Omg a cliffhanger with literal cliffhanging! Man this is great!
Miracle?!!! WHARES MY MINIGUN!!!!
Is there a story about Gothic? Couldn't seem to find it.
6893975 That's way back in my story list. Search for "Luna, Eclipsed". (of course, "Seeking Eternity" also has some focus on him).