The newly-crowned Princess Twilight Sparkle returns home to Ponyville... Where the citizens bow and scrap at her feet, to her frustration. Twilight just wants to be treated the same way she's always been, but how can she make that happen?
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Hmm, enjoying it so far... *scratches chin* Yes, yes indeed. Continue, good sir.
Good start. Let's see where this goes...
That was REALLY good! Keep going
OR ELSE 
MYes, when in doubt, ,Party!
Faving and im looking forward to more, keep it up!
It seems a bit rushed here and there, but, other than that, you're doing great.
This story... I like it! Another!
Now THIS is how Alicorn Twilight should be written. She's still the same old loveable egghead she was before but now she has wings. Please do continue.
Next time on adjustments: It doesn't work.
YAY!
Update! Loving this fic.
You kind of messed up in the second sentence. I think "What brings ya here is suppose to be Applejack's line".
Somehow I doubt that very much Rainbow Dash, or need I remind you of the Mare-Do-Well Incident?
My Murphay's Law Senses are tingling.
2312358 Thanks for pointing out my mistake. It has now been fixed. As for RD, I figured she might have learned a little something since then.
Hm not bad but not quite the ending I was expecting. Seemed to be resolved a bit too fast for my tastes.
Still you did a good job and this seems like one of the most likely routes the writers will take Alicorn Twilight in Season 4.
Actually Spike maybe that title would work better on Pinkie Pie, cause nopony can party like Pinkie Pie.
Ah... that was a good read. Felt like something that would fit right in with the show. Excellent work :)
While it might, as has been said, been resolved a little too quickly, this was indeed very sweet. Episode material, as they say.
5 bits says this is how season 4 starts (concept-wise, at least)
I'm glad to see that nobody's disliked this story yet
It's a really good story and I think it should be used in some way in season 4~ Good job! 
>the majordomo complains about being awakened too soon
Isn't it usually the other way around?
I think you messed up here a bit.
3016190 Thanks for pointing that out.
Fixed.
Do you mean dissuade?