After a failed date, Blueblood finds himself falling for a kind of pony he never considered before... a commoner?! (Story idea and cover art courtesy of Ebony Stallion).
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Nice first chapter! Glad to see your continuing your FlashLightverse.
who is this ebony stallion?
he have a fimfiction account?
3817566 Yes, I do. I'm the one helping Bluecatcinema with this story, as I did with Her Shining Paladin. I have an account as AwesomeAvian on DeviantArt, and Shen's General on Fanfiction.
Ahhh yes, this kind of story. I love it. Having done one myself I am eager to see what you do with the story concept.
I can tell this date is going to be a disaster.
I like the story, but who are Shine and Gothic?
3833631 You would had to read the following two stories to find out:
Her Shining Paladin
and
Luna, Eclipsed
But to put it simply, Shine is Celestia's husband, and Gothic is Luna's husband.
Huh, not bad Blueblood.
Good thing Garcon has good eyes. Looks like Blueblood has to use the KISS* principle for dating Dusty.
* Keep It Simple, Stupid.
Yay! More Blueblood not being an ass, good job!
The talk with blueblood and miracle remember me flanklin talking with a dog in GTA V
Shine should pay more attention to what he says. He did say first hurdle. That means there will be more.
First comment! And of course I brought the most appropriate music for this chapter.
Dusty, what did you do? I feel so bad for Blueblood now.
Hmmm, do we have to worry about a Tucker trying to flirt with Dusty? Or is he already sleeping with the Fishies.
And where are the glorious Reds?
And what about the Freelanc- Ah crap this hunt is going to have problems nobodies expecting aren't they.
Caboose is like the Caboose from red vs. blue
3882489 Yes. That was exactly who I was thinking of when I made him. And you will see more of Caboose's tomfoolery in later chapters.
You'd think the others would have been smart enough to pack a mirror if they specifically knew they were going after a cockatrice, then again they gave Caboose a crossbow in the first place... so their intelligence was debatable for some time.
I like Caboose. In red vs blue he is my second favorite charter with Church being my favorite.
This is just funny to read. I can't wait for the next chapter. I wonder what is going to happen when O'Malley comes out to play.
Well that was a bit of a twist. I laughed long and hard when the uncles started being named.
THAT ZELDA REFERENCE
I kind of wondered when they didn't tell Celestia or the Royal Guard about the kidnapping, but yikes! Don't screw with the mafia.
Is Caboose really adopted and is the long lost cousin of Pinkie Pie?
With what Caboose was doing with interrupting Blueblood and Dusty, my first thought was this:
I also think that Caboose/O' Malley would be a good match for Pinkie/Pinkamena.
3911247 How did I miss that?
FINALLY! Blueblood has some redemption a bit, also, HIS REACTON IS FREAKING PRICELESS!
That was good. Go Ol'Maley. I can't wait for the next chapter.
I believe it is:
not
I liked this chapter. I helped show that Dusty has accepted Blue's past and they are willing to work together for the future. I can't wait for the next chapter
Twenty years?! This story is twenty years after the Gala? And he was still an a** until he met Dusty? I guess it goes to show, anypony is willing to change when the right pony of the opposite sex comes along. Now I'm glad I didn't read any of the prior stories. I like redeemable Blueblood at lot better than Blueblood the bung hole.
That was a nice chapter. Blueblood learned to be a country pony. Great job.
I suppose you ginna make a chapter about red and cherry wedding right?
Poor Blueblood. Maybe he should stick to trying to use his magic.
I'm glad this chapter was published. It really shows how much blue blood has changed.
I still think Caboose and Pinkie would get along. Hose as a plot element.
*ahem* MOAR!
Also, nice work, good sir. I hope to see more of Bluey's antics in the next chapter! Have all my mustaches.
~Ever
Mafia and royal family...odd combination but welcomed none the less
YEAH. A MARRAGE IN ON THE WAY. I love it. I want to suggest that Caboose is the god father of Dusty's and Blue's first child. I will die of laughter and the uncles reactions.
Any Despicable Me 2 reference is good.
God dammit, how do you write this story so beautifully? It's just...absolutely perfect I seriously cannot find a thing wrong with it. These stories you have written are gems and I hope many people realize their greatness.
Caboose will be so perfect for Pinkie Pie. Anyway, on to the wedding planning. I also think Blueblood and Rarity are going to need to see each other again.
3977305 I am sorry to say that Caboose will not end up with Pinkie. Pinkie is already married to a pony named 'Cherry Fizzy' (Check The Young Prince to find out about him).
As for Caboose, he will be getting a mare in the next story. Who she will be? You will have to wait and find out. You will be pleasantly surprised.
3978120 Already married?! Aw Man! Oh well. I read none of the prior stories in this universe. I'm not too big a fan of Flash Sentry x Twilight.
Great Story. I loved the ending. I do say, I love your story writing. Best of luck with future stories.
That was fun.
I love your continuing expansion of this universe you've created. Where will it go from here?
SOUNDS QUICK THIS TIME, BUT VERY NICE
now caboose has to find this freaking awsome mare to make his brothers bang their head on a wall.
I have one question, was miracle the flower filly? She may have eaten more flowers than she threw.
3986268 Pinkie Pie would be a nice fit. random and breaking the 4th wall from time to time.
3989256 'Fraid not. Pinkie is already married to Cherry Fizzy. You will see the mare for Caboose soon enough.