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Celestia is the beloved ruler of her subjects. But she is lonely, her heart aching for companionship. When a mysterious pegasus crashes outside the castle, it seems Celestia may have what her heart yearns for...
(Story idea, OCs and cover image courtesy of Ebony Stallion.)
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"Her Shining Paladin"... You rang?
This story promises!!!
I shall keep an eye out for this one...it seems, very interesting...
3551536 I'm not ripping you off or anything. The title was part of the suggestion, and I didn't know of your very similiar name.
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Oh don't be, I find it hilarious myself and simply couldn't resist making the joke.
Um no shit!
She saw him looking at Tia, I bet.
This looks promising
Must have mour
Shine Paladin is really a bad name for a pony. I really don't like that name but good story.
3565284 What's wrong with that name? I thought it was fitting for him, and I should know. I created him.
3566107 Paladin is not a really good pony name is all I am saying.
Celestia is awesome there.
Also, I like these new royals. Blueblood? Not so much
So, Constell, did she end up an alicorn like her mother?
3578535 Yes, she is. It's even mentioned, if you look closely enough.
3578825 Ahh, I see it now.
well i read that "prepare yourself" part in gonzos voice just to make myself laugh
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I agree, Blueblood is such a bish.
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well, he has some priorities in the wrong place, but in the end, he actually is a good pony. i've seen it
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I guess so...I actually liked Blueblood..well until I saw the episode when he mistreated Rarity and insulted Applejack's apple pie's...
I've said it before: she knows
yep another good chapter and she knows luna you sneaky bitch i knew there was a reason i liked you
And it's Luna 1, Blueblood 0.
I am liking this backwoods pegasus quite a lot; he's a tad uncultured, more than a tad unlettered, and he's still holding on to some of his reticence -- but there's something genuine about him that can't be overlooked. It's almost like Sister Mary Whatzername meeting up with Elvis.
"I think we should get help." Yeah no duh ya dingus of a guard, a stallion just crash landed and then passed out. That sounds like an emergency to me.
she LOVES him
also, that was AWESOME how Luna delt with blueblood
poor shine
dang blueblood
Matchmaker, matchmaker make me a match...
Hey, I'm Ebony Stallion, the co-author (or as I see myself at least) of Her Shining Paladin with Bluecatcinema. I'm also the creator of Shine Paladin.
3604747 Thank you. Luna's interaction with Blueblood is actually based off the scene of Harry Potter and the Prisoner of Azkaban where Hermione punched Draco and Ron commented on it. It was fitting of the situation.
3604708 I'm glad that you like Shine. However, I wouldn't call him unlettered, as he did go to school and graduate. It's just that being raised by a farmer pony (Big Red) all through childhood, he adopted a kind of a southern style dialect.
Hope you two and everyone else continued to enjoy it.
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I stand humbly corrected for acting on a reflex. (And it's one I know too well: my own voice takes on just a hint of magnolia now and then, so I have no excuse.)
Still like the guy, and I hope everything works out for him.
3604974
yeah. i kinda dont like how most stories make blueblood seem hearless, but this was well done. honestly, from my experiences, he can be a good pony, it's just buried WAY down
3605583 Yeah. But I believe this will be the thing that pushes Blueblood to change. If Rarity or Twilight, let alone Gothic, could not make him learn his lesson, it would be Luna.
I rather liked the part when Princess Luna punched Blueblood in the snout.
3605636
fair enough.
3605669 I agree, i really hate that Blueblood, i mean who does he think he is?
It's unusual you post a chapter in the range of two days. What happened for you change the time interval between each chapter?
Gotta love the innocence that they are both showing. Such a cute couple :D.
Shine not only seems to come from a long line of war horses but also a long line of badass names.
3617199 I think I might have a answer for that. Basically, on fanfiction.net, after bluecatcinema finishes a chapter of this story, he forwards it to me and I revise it. The time between chapter four and five probably was two days because he got the chapter to me and I finished revising that chapter quickly enough that he posted it later that day. Either way, the duration per chapter (to my observations) is three days, given nothing happens to bluecatcinema during those three days.
3617404 Thank you. I just used synonyms for 'knight' and paired them with a couple of great words and thus giving us Aurora Paragon, Bold Champion, Silver Templar, and Shine's father, White Knight.
I am glad that you are all enjoying it so far.
oh, Luna, you sneaky mare.
they're totally in love, i've said it from the start.
Why gay sentry and dusk shine? Could have been more creative.
Yup, Twilight being with Flash Sentry is the apocalypse.
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This is based off of previous stories and frankly I like that pairing.
Very good job but one thing I wonder is if Sunset Shimmer ever came back to Equestria?
Good chap but why flash he sucks ass you could have used an oc man
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He's not a bad pony. It really kinda goes via canon. It's possible
3630762
What's wrong with flash? I thought he was a great addition
3632250 true but why. I think he's a jock like person
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Sure, but you gotta look past the exterior
I really like this story can't wait for another update
3551536
It seems that both of us favour the ways of the spiral. Feel appreciated!
YEEHAW!!!